ff-ishq concluding part. - Page 3

Dude i love this FF!!! 👏

its just mindblowing!!!

please cont soon!!! cuz i am loving it!!!!! 😃 😃 😃

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thank god he's fine.. phew.. aww she helped him.. that's cuz u LOVE her jai.. haila .. awwwwwww more jb moments.. can't wait 👏

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thank god he is alright
jai its because you love her and you both are having hard time realizing
plz write soon 😛

aww wwoo !! awesoee ff ..!!
u r simplyy too good !!
i hopee ehy confess to each other !!
thnksx hun !
do cont soon ! ! 😃
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haila...yaar just a hand injury thank god...tumne toh hume darra hi diya... 😉 ...u r awesome...i cant wait for the next update hun...superb... 👏 ...keep up the good...no....GREAT work... 😃

part-8

jai 's hand is fine now.
he is working in his study.then bani comes and hands him coffee.

accidently her hand touches the mug and coffee is on the files.

jai-[angry ] what the hell is this bani.
he starts yelling at her.

bani is numb.

jai-bani tumne saara kaam bigad diya.
tumhara dhyaan agar kahi aur hai to kaam mat kiya karo.

bani is in tears.

she said one world-"SORRY"

this one word spells a magic on jai.his anger gone in 1 second.
he curses himself for yelling at her.

bani feels bad and she leaves.

jai-uske ek shabd ka yeh kaisa asar hai.
jai wants to say sorry to her.he makes a plan to say sorry to her.

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surprise

bye
sorry for a short update

send some ideas.

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poor Bani 😭
jai can confess his love to Bani by saying he can't see tears in her eyes because he cares and loves her
plz write soon 😃

as bani croosed jai.he winked.
bani blushes .she feels a new feeling.

i think that the sexiest thing a man can do is wink, it makes you weak in the knees......

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intimate moments of jai bani

part-9

plz friends send me your comments if you do'nt like this part.here it is

bahi is upset whole day.in the night jai comes from office and goes to his room.

he is waiting for bani,so that he can give her a surprise and feels sorry for his behaviour.

then bani commes in the room.she goes to dressing table and starts removing her jewellery without noticing jai.

jai stands behind her very close.

baniis shocked to see her.

jai gives her a giftand says-"bani i am sorry.maine tum par yu hi gussa kiya.par tum chup kyu khadi rahi".

bani-"hum gussa usi par karte hai jo dil ke kareeb hota hai mr.walia"

jai is confused but happy to hear this.

they are still standing very close.
there eyes are locked.

bani tum dekhogi nahi main tumhare liye kya laya hoon.

bani opens it.there is a diamond string kind of waist chain.

she is overjoyed to see this.there is a strange silence between them.

then jai picks the chain and and ties around her waist.

jiya dhadk-dhadk jaye is playing in the backgrond
he is nuzzling her hair.

the touch of jai on her waist feels like electric shock.

jai and bani staring session continues.they talk with eyes

bani is about to say something

shhh....whispers jai

jai plants a gentle kiss on her lips first and then passionately.

her hands runs in his hair.he plants kisses on the every part of body.

then he unties her doris with his lips.

she feels so right at the moment.

he picks her in his arms andgoes to the bed.

slowly scene fades.

the morning is special.
jai wakes and goes to office without disturbing her.

bani woke up and remembers last night.
she blushes.she is looking for jai.

jai is remembering the night same as bani.

jai-"kahi bani yeh na samjhe ki maine uska fayda liya hai.agar use vo lamha galti laga to shayad mujhse bardasht nahin hoga b'coz" I LOVE HER" DAMN IT!

BANI IS ALSO LOST IN THOUGHTS.
"jai main kaise kahoon ki main tumse kitna pyar karti hoon.main agar zinda hoon to saans tum ho.main hasti hoon to meri muskuraht tum ho,roti hoon to aanso tum ho "
par agar jai ko ye raat pyar nahi galti lagi to?


luv you

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entry of raj singh.