FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 75

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sabsj

yes dear am home now and i got ur mail and replied to it too 😃

Mubarak ho.....Mubarak ho....👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

Haila Sabs.........loved the ending!!

And I've booked my ticket for Monday in advance!!😉

Walia eaten by baloos..............wouldn't mind that.............as long as it's in the show and not your FF!!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
thanx for this fanfic
amazing ending 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

awwwwwwwwwww !!! Saby hun !! tht was simplyyy aweosme...fabolous ..marvesllous....and tremendouslyy breath taking storyy nad a perfeccttttt ending !!!
just loveddthe storylinee from the start !! simplyyy tooo good !!

lovedd the passion...decriptions of jai 😳 passions..anger tantrums...live ...communication ...thei rreactionss andd ur writing most of all !!!! 😉 😳 😳 awww !! it one of the best i have read in my lifee !! aww i am gunna... get all senti know !! 😭 😭 and also loved the east of the beast !! 😳 😉

awwww !! the last part was tooo ggooodd !! .... i am sooo glad .... they actuallyy made it up in the ned ..without any ego .. and .... the fighting of ones inner soul !! .. i am soo glad both o them admitted it ! ..and loved it when jai said " my wedding band " 😳 😳

hun !! i am not at all offended .... of ur style of writing ..and the scenes you hvae portrayed .! they weree toooo awesomee !! 😳 ahhem ahheem ..i am still with the pm i sent u ! 😉 all innocent ! 😉 😆

i must say i just lovedd the quotes u have usedd throughtout the entiree fanfic !! simplyy hatss off to u ..for that !! i think they aree simpllyyyy brillaint !! .... ur quotations play a major part in ur fanfic'sand simply go along sooo well ..soo well selected .... that they actuallyy portray the feelingss of the characterss at somee point !!!! just toooooo fab ! .... i dont think my day is ever complete if i dont read ur quotaions !! even of teh parts whihc i didnt read before i use to read.... all the quotes !! .... ur quites have amdee me such a quoteaholic ! 😳 but i simplyy love the talent you have.... 👏 and reallyy apprecite it ..that u takee ur verryyy precious time... to writee this for us .... and some eople like ME ..can never do justicee to ur riting ..simply becasuee we can never find .... words whihc would justfy ur writing ..... and give the complimnts it deserves !!! 😳 😳 😉

hun ! i am simplyyy eagerrllyyy waiting ..for ur neww ff..i ave booked the flight before hand !! ... and all packed..to go of to imgination world ! .... 😉 and dont woorryy i am not redinigng to my job....eventhough ... i am changing my destination..... i am stil at my old post ..... so do not forget ! 😉

o00hh btw hun ! for all the timess i have been in the hosital coz of ur writing ..i am sening the bills ur way ... 😉 😆

los siento ...for all the parts whihc i didn't read on the time ! nad i am sure i will ty me level best to keep up with it ....soo noo apologies nxt time !!

Thnksx for everthing hun ..all the pm's and everythingss ..... 🤗 and soorryy for all the harsh comments whihc i have sent ur way ! ..will be waiting ever sooo eagerlyyy ...for ur neww ff....!! and Thnksx for dedicating thosee 2 partss for me 😳 😃 😃
Thnksx !
Shafaq ! 😛

Adios for now ! 😉
👏

Edited by $h@aq... - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Haila the end... 😭 😭 😭

And no reply on my last comments, it looks like someone is not happy about my comments..... 😭 😭 😭

Me happy you back home safe sound... 😃 😛

It was indeed the best flight I have ever enjoyed sabsss... 😛 😳 😛

And most of all your writing and explaining in details about their feelings..👏 👏 👏

chalo jahaan bhi hoga destination aapki agli flight hum aphi se tayaar hain...sara hamain phool mat...😭

Tha last part was simply outstanding.... I loved it saby... 👏

The magic spider woman... 😃

As for the humour of the day, and the Newton commiting suicide I cant stop laughing.... Poor Newton... What he must have felt seeign all those scenes.... 😆

Always luv..

hanaane...

Edited by hanaane - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
totally awesome end Sabs! 😃
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I just love the way you write...its fantabulous! 😃
that's the most enjoyable flight I've ever been on and I can't wait till monday! Did I ever tell you that my travelling is one of my hobbies? 😊
Edited by Vedo - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: hanaane

No need to thank me dear you have earned it all by yourself... 😃

u r too sweet

Sabj...... You made me do baking till late last night.... and all the members of my family thought that I was a thieve and they nearly beat me up.....they thought I was sleeping and I was actually lost into my own wold... yaar when I am doing baking I usually forget everything don't know why... I think I will have to do something about that otherwise I might end up beaten as a thieve... Good Lord everything is soo hilarouse now days... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

chor chor ........... cookie baking thief 😆😆

You know what if you had leaved here I would have made for you my special home made Cookies... I only do that for the one's I most love yaar, tune dil mera jeet liya .....🤗 🤗 🤗

thanks dear, the very fact that you offered means a lot to me.

It was indeed immensely good..... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Dil khush kar diya tune phir se... 😳 😛 😳

humara dil aapke paas hain .......

Spiderwoman.... update soon.... 😉 😆

always luv..

hanaane

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Me first today Saby. Nope I missed it to Shina 😭😭😭 Well ok, I guess

u will always be first for me

What a part 👏 👏 👏 Great.

Rarely we have JnB sitting down together to discuss their problems and issues. This is teh way how things should be, even in the serial, but they are so off hook now.

ekta mayi are u listening

Loved the fact that they wrote down the points of dissension. At least that got them thinking. And yes, writing does help.

yes it does

Thanks for a great read and DO UPDATE SOON, I am coming after you with a danda now ... 😆
😆 😆

don't worry u won't have to do that

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow

Saby 👏 👏
hehe this paper thing...i had to do till i was 10...this was the only thing my grandma thought would work for me...anger management problems you see...time out with a paper and pencil and i had to write out my faults and my bros/or person involved faults...stirred up some funny memories at the right time i must add!
U HAVE A GIFT! 👏

thanks dear

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