FF: Mistress Misconstrued p12b pg18 END - Page 9

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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
Hey, keep up with you beautifull ff. 👏 👏 .
I just hope Ekta and her creatives copy your ff. That would be great!!!
And please: Don't forget to bring Jai and bani together!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
Thank you for your lovely comments once again. It inspires me to continue. Hope you enjoy the next part.

Part 8 (b)

Rano goes to Pia's apartment. The detective had informed her where Pia lives. Rings the doorbell incescently.
P: Coming coming, can't you be a bit patient.
Seems like she was expecting someone so she unlocks and opens the door without checking who it was.
P: Rano! aap! Tumey kaise pehta chala key mein kaha rehti hu?
Rano just sniggers.
R: I have my sources SIS! (pissed)
Rano pushes her way in not waiting for an invitation.
R: Wow! itna aacha ghar? Paise kaha seh mili? Pehleh toh walia mansion mein reh rahi thi na? Us waqt you couldn't afford to live on your own, and now. Look at this. Got a salary increment or what? or some special benefits? (stares at Pia)
P: None of your business Rano whether I can afford it or not. Now, what are you doing here and what do you want? hurry, I haven't got all day.
R: How rude, Pia. I am a guest in your house and won't you offer be a seat and perhaps something to drink. Pehli bhaar jo ayi hu yahan!
P: Fine! What will you have?
R: Ek cup chai will be good.
Rano follows Pia into the kitchen. Pia is placing a teabag into a cup of hot water (she can't make punjabi tea only english style).
R: Pia, tell me how come you have 10 krore in your bank account?
Pia gets shocked and surprised her eyes open wide.
P: How did you know?
Rano pushes her against the wall.
R: From whom did you steal the money? Pia , did you embezzle Walia Industry funds? Tell me where the money came from
P: I can't tell you Its none of your business. What right do you have snooping into my business.
R: The minute you crossed the boundry and ceased being a sister-in-law it became my business.
R: And you know what else I know, Pia?
Pia is now terrified because Rano has a fierce deadly look in her eyes.
P: Wh..What (stammering)
R: You're not even pregnant. You liar. You want to destroy your sister's home.
Rano pulls pia's hair and they get into a cat fight. Each pulling one another and scratching, kicking eachother etc (I've never fought with my sisters physically we just use words, so I am just imagining).
Rano grabs a knife from the kitchen counter and holds it against Pia's neck.
R: I just feel like killing you now. You treacherous leech. How could you do this.
Pia is scared out of her wits and just keeps crying. P:Please Rano don't I'll tell you everything please rano. please put the knife down (pleading).
Rano brings the knife down but still holds it in her hand. Pulls and pushes pia onto the chair.
R: talk ! Now !
Pia starts relating her story. Rano is shocked out of her wits. Both are crying.
What did pia say?.....

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Meanwhile in a different scene. Its been 4 weeks since Jai last saw Bani. He had called Tarun everyday to enquire about Bani, each time Tarun would curtly reply that she was in good hands. Their relationship was just professional these days. Jai could see from tarun's eyes his hatred for him. Heck, even Jai hated himself what to expect of others.
Jai called Bani several times a day each time leaving a voicemail pleading to talk to her. She never answered nor did she call back. These weeks without her left him an empty shell of a man. He was living and working mechanically like a robot. Living every moment in regret in remorse of his deadly action.
This time he couldn't take it anymore and left for Ooty. He was missing her so much. He was longing to see her face, her smile, her intoxicating eyes. He wanted to smell her, touch her. The separation was unbearable. He was wilting away without her, she was his life his soul. He had to see her. He had to get her back. He was ready to fall at her feet, she just had to come back to him.

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Okay guys, I hope you enjoy this part and there will be more to look forward to in the next. Thanks for taking the time out to read.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
goooo ranoooo hit dat witch 😡 😡 h8 pia becharaaa jaii nd bechaariii baniii
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
OMG...u cant stor there...
what did pea brain say...come on...please up date soon...
im dying here... 😭 😭 😭
superb job hun...cant wait for more

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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
yeaa go Rano kill her... just kill that Bhikmangi.... 😡

but hey y was Rano shocked???? kya koi aur hai in sab ke piche???? 😕

owww wooow at last DUM DUM going to ooty... now go fast & just bring her back b4 its too late.... 😃

plz cont soon..... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i just read this from the beginnning and its was like wowzers!👏

this is a really good FF!!!!

wat can u expect from Pia! she's a cow!!!!😡


but dude.. please reunite Bani and Jai!!!!😕😕😕 cant see them apart!!😭


but keep up the good work!!👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
very nice
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👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
HI caught up with the parts, please continue, I am loving this, as someone else said I hope Ekta's distructives (sorry creatives) read this. I love this Bani, hope you make her more assertive, I am fortunate I do have sisters like Rano. (I am the Baby of 5 daughters and my name is Banu close to Bani.)ALso love the fact that Bani has so many admirers and that Jai is pining for her. I would love to read his reactions when he realises that so many men are secretly in love with his wife dammit. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
truely awesome... keep up the good work!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry guys, I left the ff dangling. Too much work and hardly any internet connection. Thank you to all who have read this ff and to those you have replied with your support. I feel so encouraged with your comments. Hope you will enjoy this part as well.

Part 9(a):

The doorbell rings. It is raining outside and a cold wind was blowing.
B: Is mausam mein kaun hoga? Tarunji toh aaj subah hi gaye hai aur agele hafte aane wale the.Hmm...(smacking her lips)
She opens the door and is shocked, her eyes wide open, eyeballs popping out, never did she imagine he would turn up at her doorstep ( at least not now), her mouth opens and she gasps,
B: Aap?
B: Aap yahen kiya kar raho ho?
Bani to herself, "oh god, I am not ready for this. What am I going to do?"
He looks at her figure, looks straight into her eyes. Her eyes, the windows of her soul. His favourite attribute of hers. He just wanted to run into her arms and give her the longest and tightest embrace in the world, never to let her go but those eyes expressed her shock and her sadness as well. He read her like a book. Here he was, standing in the rain on the steps to her abode and there she was his heavenly angel. seems to him they were standing in this manner for ages, finally he spoke.
J: Bani,(he choked couldn't continue he had waited so long for this moment) Drawing back the tears threatening to break loose, he plucked up his courage and put up a brave front.
J: Look Bani, this is not the time to wonder or question, I am all wet here and if I don't get out of these clothes soon, I'll fall sick and guess who'll have to look after me (with a mischevious grin).
Bani moves to the side with her mouth still open not knowing how to react, allowing him to enter.
B: You are so soaked. Didn't you have an umbrella in the car? I"ll get you a towel.
He comes in and she shuts the door.
J: Tha, the car broke down on the way, not far from here thank god, had to call the mechanic to fix it and the umbrella blew away. Walked the rest of the way. The mechanic will bring it over tomorrow.
B: You walked in the rain, pagal ho gaye ho kiya?
Jai to himself: Pagal for you my dear, sirf tumare liye.
J: Bani, I need to get out of these clothes. Could you please be an angel and run the bath for me whilst I rumage through Tarun's wardrobe.
She runs in to turn on the hot water and get the bath running and comes to him with a towel. He is in Tarun's room and has managed to get hold of a loose T-shirt and a loose pair of bermudas (he's a tad big bigger built than Tarun)
B: Yeh lijeye
Hands him the towel.
B: I have started the bath for you it's the second door on your left.
J: Yes , I know been here couple of times before. Thanks .
Bani starts to walk away. He catches her hand. Sends electric waves down her body. She feels week in her knees. Damn him, why does his touch do this to her. Control yourself bani. She could hardly manage a sound like her voice box had given way.
J: Kuch khane ko liye milega. Mujhey bahoot bhukh lagi hai (he winks at her)

In this shock, she had forgotten, she had guests in the living room. Rahul and Aaman were there. She had invited them for dinner. She had wanted to talk to Aaman about his offer. Some details she had to clarify. Dada and Dadi had gone to a friend's residence for some prayers.
Seeing the dining table set for dinner, she suddenly remembered. She instructed Sunaina, the helper to place an additional setting at the table and made her way into the living room.
A: Who was that (referring to the doorbell)?
B: Tarunji ka dost. He will be joining us for dinner. (She didn't lie, she hated lies) He was all drenched and has gone to freshen up.
B: (looks at Rahul) so what are you watching?
She wanted to change the subject. she didn't quite know how to introduce him to Aaman. She was unsure of both their reactions. Confusion, confusion, massive confusion. Aab mein kiya karu?
R: Tom and Jerry (laughing)
Bani ruffles the hair on his head and gives him a hearty laugh. Aaman looks at both of them and joins in the laughter with a warmth in his eyes.
B: I'll go check on dinner, closes the door to the living room. leans against the door and catches her breath. Rubs her hand on her forehead. Why did he need to come here now. As if I don't have enough headaches.
J: Bani!
B: What does he want now?
He comes out of the bathroom.
J: Can you get the helper to wash and dry my clothes. Bani calls sunaina and she attends to Jai's wet clothes ( bani isn't exactly his butler )
J: Khana tayar hai? Smells delicious (taking in a deep breath, he could always identify the smell of her cooking and this had Bani written all over it)I am famished.
B: Ji! Sunaina , khana legado.
B: Mr Walia, I have some guests in the living room and they will be joining us... rather you will be joining us
J: Guests? questioningly. Did they just come? (jai trying to mark his territory perhaps?)
B: I had invited them over.
J: Hmm... looks at himself
J: do I look presentable enough for your guests? smiling at her
B: Not much choice so I guess beggars can't be choosers?
J: Kiya?
Just then Aaman and Rahul come out of the living room.
R: Mujhey bahoot bhookh lagi hai ( runs towards Bani)
Bani lifts Rahul up into her arms.
Jai turns to look at the figure of the man approaching them.
His smile fades and an angry look sets in.

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Hope you enjoy this part. I'll continue soon. Thanks for reading.

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