FF: Mistress Misconstrued p12b pg18 END

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Hi guys, this is a new short FF. Hope you guys enjoy it. Thanks.

Part1(a)

Pia: Di, mein Mr Walia say pyar karti hun. We spent a night together in Dubai intimately.

Bani: Kiya? Yeh kiya keh rahi ho.

Pia: Yeh sach hai di. Sachaai hamesha karwa lagta hai.

Bani comes across to Pia and slaps her.

Pia: (crying and shocked) Its true Di. Mr Walia made love to me. He loves me. Then you had to show up. He was confused, guilty. He is just pretending with you. He doesn't want to hurt you because you told him you loved him. He is just a good man. He doesn't want to break your heart. That is why he is not telling you about us.

Bani: No, No this can't be true. This can't be happening. Pia, woh tumara jijaji hai. Yeh kaisa ho sakta. Tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho apni di keh saath. Itna bewafaai.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1(b)


Pia: Its not my fault di. It is your fault. You hurt him, he was in so much pain. I watched him crumble day by day. I gave him my shoulder, myself to cry on, to wipe away his tears. It all began with me. Had I not run away from the mandap that fateful day, he would not have lived to see this pain. I was doing right by him. Condoning my sin. By offering myself i was begging his pardon. He accepted it di,he accepted it. Now I am carrying his child.

Bani couldn't believe what she was hearing. How could it be true. She is making this up. She is carrying Pushkar's child. No, No. Bani presses her palms against both her ears and staggers to their bedroom, closes the door behind her and falls to the ground at the foot of the bed. The man she loved, could he betray her? She had looked in those eyes, why could she not see his betrayal, guilt in them. Had she become so desperate to love him that she could no longer read him. NO, No. Pia is lying. I dont know why she just is. She is. Bani so wanted to believe that. But why would Pia want to lie to me. I am her sister, her own flesh and blood, I was like a mother to her. No, No. Pia is not lying? Her head was heavy and hurting. She couldn't think. Her head was moving in circles.
Bani: I have to ask him. I have to tell him what Pia said.
With a heavy heart, dreading she dialled his number.
It rang, rang for what seemed liked ages for Bani.
Finally,
J: Hello
B: silence, she wanted to say something but the words couldn't leave her heart. Her right hand clutching the fabric where her heart lay. Her eyes pained no tears fell.
J: Bani...
J: Bani... Bani, Koi khas baath. Bani, I am in a meeting, can't talk right now. I will call you back as soon as I am done. Okay.
B: Hmm and hangs up.
Why does his voice sound different today. What is happening. I am going to close my eyes. This is all just a bad dream. I am going to wake up and things will be a back to normal. She closes her eyelids and puts her head on the carpet on the ground in a foetal position.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1 (c)

Jai calls Bani back. The ringing of the phone wakes Bani up. She arouses in a daze, blinking her eyes. looks at the phone vibrating and flashing in her hand. it read Jai. Bani presses the green button, puts the phone to her ear.
J: Bani. Sorry it took me sometime to call you back. The meeting took longer than I expected. So, what's up?
B: trying to form the words to say... Pia.. pia neh kaha....stops midway. Thinks to herself, was it a dream?
J: angrily . Pia? Pia? What the hell did she say?
Just the anger in his voice, she knew..oh god...she was hyperventilating, drawing long breaths.
J: Bani.. Bani...Oh god. Bani it is not what you think. Bani.. I don't know what Pia said to you but it is not what you think.. Bani.. I am coming over right now. Bani.. I will explain everything.
He hangs up.
Bani, now lost and in a complete daze. Did she hear correctly. Did she sense corrrectly. Is it true?.. It is true? ...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2(a)

Bani stays in the room. Just sits there. Gone once to the bathroom to relieve herself. Goes back to the room and elects to sit in the far dark corner of the room, next to the windows. Looks out and stares into the dark sky, a storms brewing, just like that in her life. sits there for hours, back against the wall, knees drawn. Trying her best to deny the existence of this illicit relationship between her sister and her husband. Anger was slowly creeping its way into her heart and mind. Her sister, her husband. She kept repeating in her mind, a tape recorder on autoplay.

Jai was on his way home. Sitting at the back seat of his chauffeur driven car, thrusting his head back into the headrest, closes his eyes. Trying so hard to calm himself. The calm before a storm.
How he had dreaded this day. He wanted to tell her earlier but just couldn't bring himself to it. She was so happy, so in love. He wanted to be loved and she was there to love him. He was a coward. He couldn't stand to see tears in her eyes. He liked this happy, lively, carefree Bani.He just put away his ONS with pia behind him and decided to bask in Bani's love.
He was so mad at Pia. Why did she have to open her mouth to Bani. He had tried his best to make her understand that there was no place for her in his life. His life belonged to Bani. He told her to move on but she was rooted to her delusion, she wanted him to admit that he loved her
J: Pia, sunno meri baath. Mein tumsay pyar nahin karta. Ek din tha jab mein tumsay pyar karta tha per aaj nahin. Woh paal beeth chuka hai. Aab mere zindagi par sirf Bani ka haq hain. Aur koi nahin. Tum kiyu nahin samajti.
Pani: Itni aasani say mein kaise bhool jau. Mere kokh mein tere bachaa pal raha hai. I am pregnant Mr Wali with your child.
Jai couldn't believe his ears. She was pregnant. His child. Fate had dealt him a cruel blow. A child he had been longing for but not with Pia. He wanted his child his and Bani's child. The joy he had felt when the doctor informed him that Bani was to become a mother, he felt only remorse here this time. Remorse for his sin. Remorse for hurting his Bani.
J: Get an abortion. I don't want this foetus. I don't love you and whatever happened between us was a mistake. It shouldn't have happened. It was an action I regretted and will always regret (puts his head down and shakes it)
J: I was emotionally down at that point in time. You offered a shoulder to cry on. I was drunk. I was not in my senses.
J: Pia, you threw yourself at me. You know, all the months that we were together Bani never once threw herself at me. She has so much integrity. So, unlike you. Whatever happened between us was a mistake and I can never forgive myself for it and I don't ever want Bani to pay the price for my mistake. I don't want her to suffer. I have wronged her. Do you understand? So, get the abortion done and close this matter.
Pia: Yeh koi business deal nahin hain. Mein abortion kabhie koi kimat par nahin karungi. Yeh meri pyar ki nishani hain.
J: Pyar ki nishani? kaisi pyar ki nishani jab mein tumsay pyar hi nahin karta?
J: Pia, don't you care about your sister? What this news will do to her? Have you become that stone-hearted? That sister who has been a mother to you when you were alone, the one who supported you, the one who wiped your tears, tried her best to give you all the happiness she could forsaking her own. Is that the sister you want to destroy today?

The car reached Walia mansion. With a heavy heart and iron for legs, he got off and slowly made his way to Bani.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏
minblowing amazing parts
Pia 😡 😡 😡 go away and leave with your child, i think its puskhars not Jai's you are lying
is bani pregant? 😕 if she is i hope she doesn't have a miscarriage 😭 Bani slap pia 😡 and listen to your husband and your heart
please write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Bani don't listen to that Pia!!! She just wants Jai....
Great ff please write soon!!!1
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very nice please continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey...
Just read the first few parts and i must say nice storyline.
Continue soon.
Sweetu.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow I just read the last few parts, and I have to say ur story line is amazing!!! Please do continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks guys for all the comments and ideas. really appreciate it. Hope you enjoy the next part. Thanks once again.

Part 2(b)

Jai slowly makes his way up the stairs, opens the bedroom door. Complete darkness, curtains blowing in the wind, window open, no sound to be heard except for the bellowing sound of the wind rustling the leaves. Storms brewing outside. Looks around as he shuts the door behind him silently. His eyes fall upon Bani, huddled up in the corner next to the open window, head on her drawn up knees, eyes closed. He walks over to her. He was just about to seat himself in front of her when guilt caused him to change his mind and he knelt down next to her instead, back against the wall. He was afraid to look into her eyes as much as he wanted to draw her face into his hands and plant kisses on her face. His illicit liason was a mistake. As much as he regretted it he could not erase it. For a long time he pretended that it never happened. He was happy and so was Bani but now...he had to draw up the courage to face the wrath of his sin.

Taking a deep breath he called out softly, quivering
J: Bani..
Bani lifts her head at the sound of his voice calling her name and turns to look at him. She wants no needs to look into his eyes, it would deny all of what Pia had said but alas, he doesn't look at her instead looks into the darkness in front of him
B: Meri taraf dekho. Why is your head turned away from me. I need to see your face, your eyes, the window to your soul.
J: I am so sorry Bani. Mujhe maaf kardo. I am not a good man Bani. I can't even look you in the eye. I am so sorry, I am so sorry..I never wanted to hurt you. Please believe me, Bani. I would never do anything purposely to hurt you.

Bani just stared at him. What is she hearing. Oh God, its true. I can't believe it. Her temper rising each second. How could he, with her sister. She was like a mother to her sister. Incest.

Jai continued with the hope that Bani would understand his situation and the circumstances.

J: I was a broken man Bani after you left me and filed for divorce. The day I received the final divorce papers, I just broke down Bani. I was devastated. I was pissed drunk. Pia offered me solace, in fact she came on to me and kept saying she loved me. She kept saying that you didn't love me. I was so lonely and heartbroken and wanted to be loved more than anything else. When she said that I took what she offered. I don't remember much of what happened, mein hosh mein nahin tha. Kuch pata nahin chala. Then when I came back to my senses, I saw her lying next to me. I was shocked and couldn't believe it. I just ran from there. It was the biggest mistake of my life. Just then, you came back to me. I have always wanted you Bani. I still only want you Bani. Mera yakeen karo. I accepted you back without regard to the reasons behind your actions. My heart only wanted you Bani. Only you.

Jai had tears streaming down his face, still not daring to look at Bani.

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