Touched by Love- Final Part Note Pg.1!!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow Manish that was wonderful start
Plz write soon ๐Ÿ˜›
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that was good.simply superb.loved it.plz do cont soon. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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simply awesome
new twist on jigs
cool
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that was awesome!!!

i am loving it!! ๐Ÿ‘
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Hi Manish,

Nicely put together.....

You write well.... besides the story and the idea being good it is also very important that one writes in a readable language using proper punctuation marks.....

And I must say it was a pleasure to read your ff....

tata,
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Hey Manish,

You have to definitely continue soon...loved reading it... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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it's so niiicccccce. I'm also touched by all this love in the air. Jygiasa aunty and ranveer are very so sweet.
Plz update soon your work is amazing ๐Ÿ‘
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haye...all good ppl so far...me likes... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...cant wait for more...
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hey manish
I REALLY LIKE YOUR FANFIC AS I SAID BEFORE I REALLY HOPE YOU WILL BE CONTINUING SOON
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Ok Guys!!!! Thank you so much for all the lovely comments!!!!
Here comes Part-II

Part-II

Kohli House,
11:00pm

The party is in full swing now. All the couples are dancing on the dance floor. Even Jiggs and Aditya are also dancing and thinking of their married life and journey and the togetherness that they share. It is a beautiful moment.

On the other end of the dance floor, the heat is on between Jai-Bani they are moving slowly in sink with each other their eyes not leaving each other.

Track after track they are dancing to the tunes of the music.

Slowly the dance floor is getting empty and pretty soon they are the only one on the dance floor. The entire eyes of the party is on them. The media is taking on a frenzy as shtterbugs do not stop they just keep clicking to glory.

The entire Walia family and Bani's mother are seeing this and to the surprise of everyone they are loving each moment of it.

Jiggs and Ranveer are the happiest as both want to unite Jai-Bani forever and mother-son are hugging each other, they know they have to work on this for a long time to see Jai-Bani in bond of matrimony but they will keep trying and will not leave any stone unturned.

The DJ has stopped the music, but Jai-Bani are still dancing oblivious to the fact that the music has stopped everyone is stunned. The DJ is shocked that they still dancing but when cupid strikes that nothing in this world matters anymore and that was the case with Jai-Bani.

They were caught in a moment, stranded in a time where they were the only ones and nothing else mattered.

The only way they could snap Jai-Bani out of the daze was by clapping for the performance of the DJ this evening.

Then we hear the resounding clap by everyone present in the party and then Jai-Bani come out of the daze realize they are the only one on the dance floor and when they see the DJ packed and ready to leave both Jai-Bani realize that they have been dancing without music for sometime now.

Both are very embarassed ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ to say the least and start to walk away from the dance floor. Jai a step ahead of Bani and Bani a step behind Jai. Both were so engrossed and embarssed by what had happened neither was paying attention especially Bani.

As Bani stepped a bit early her sari got caught under Jai shoes and she was about to fall and she went backward and a cry came out of her mouth. Jai turned around took three quick steps almost a jog and caught Bani mid-air somewhere and Bani once again found herself in Jai's arm. And they both just cannot stop gazing at each other.

Now, imagine this, in the centre of the lawn where the party is happening, Jai-Bani caught in a moment again and this time the gaze did not stop until Bani broke the gaze and caught Jai's shoulders to stand straight again, just when she was about to stand straight Jai's lips accidentally brushed Bani's cheeks and a electricity went thoroughout her body. Both felt the instant attraction towards each other.

Both Jai-Bani walked away from each other. Bani made some excuse and left the party early and Jai did the same thing. Jiggs and Ranveer were estatic telling each other that if in one dance this can happen imagine if we keep creating situations like that and for once not just Ranveer but the entire Walia family loved the thought.

Walia House,
Jai's Room,
Saturday, Morning 1:30am,

Jai made a drink for himself, it was black label on the rocks. He sipped and was standing at the window and for once he had a smile and twinkle in his eyes like a 16 year old boy who understood for the first what love was?
Flashes of the night kept haunting him, Bani's eyes and the lovely accidental brush was something that was still giving him goosebumps!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰

He could believe that he could feel for Bani like this. Was this possible? Am I falling in love with Bani? Maybe, Maybe not.

Jai could no longer take this. He decided to have a cold shower to settle things once and for all. This night had shown him what passion was all about. And Jai was too passionate needed a cold shower to switch off the passion he was feeling burning in his heart. ๐Ÿ˜ณ !!!!

He knew he had to talk to Bani about this. He wondered how she felt about tonight with him?

With these thoughts he changed into his nightwear and went to sleep knowing he could not sleep but he would try it anyway. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Dixit House,
Bani's Room,
Saturday Morning 1:30am,

Bani had just come out after taking a cold shower herself. She could not believe what happened tonight was a dream or a reality.

Is it possible that her dream of spending her life with Jai Walia will come true?

Can fate actually smile upon her at least once, will she finally be able to spend her life with the man she loves so much for such a long time?

Scenes of the night were also haunting her and everytime she remembered the accidental brush she would blush just at the thought of it. And she realized she was sitting in front of her mirror. She realized she was acting like a 10-year old girl who just realized she had a crush on a boy.

Bani decided she had to talk to Jai about this. She needed to know how he felt about it. Before she made a fool out of herself or she read too much into this and later on came to know that Jai-Bani were never meant to be. She did not want to have a broken heart.

She could bear the pain and probably would not be able to live if Jai said that he does not love her!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ญ

With these thoughts in her mind, she changed in her nightwear and decided to go to sleep knowing fully well that she will not be able to sleep but then she will try her best.

Part-III preview:
Jai-Bani talk about the party night.
Jai surprises Bani by asking her out on a date.
Will romance brew between Jai-Bani.
Wait for part -IIII
Coming Soon!!!

Would love to know ur comments.
Also, pls be honest whether I should continue or stop?

Keep smiling,

Happiness Always,
Manish

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