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Hrithik_lova thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Whoops sorry Kav, double post. I dunno how 2 delete the post cos I'm quite new to this IF thingy.

Edited by Hrithik_lova - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hello everyone!
ok heres the next part. the lyrics are jason mraz life is wonderful(:
and if any of you want these songs PM me ur email and i shall mail them to you. but your mail shld be hotmail or gmail or yahoo or smth with large inbox(:

the next part is nice, nth abt rhea yet. the next next part shall also be nice, and it shall be about them on the beach too! YAY!

so here goes!


chapter 21
They piled into the black jaguar, that had become more of a family car then a sports car in the past few years, and rhea took her usual seat up front next to her daddy, who was driving.

Jai was worried sick, she could tell from his expressions. But he put on a brave front, and decided for once to put his worry aside and have a good time with his family. After all, rhea must not feel the tense atmosphere, he reasoned, as he stepped on the accelerator and drove to juhu.

On the way to their beach house, rhea played peek-a-boo with ray, much to her father's distress. "put on your seatbelt, rhea, its not safe!" he nagged, as rhea leaned over to the backseat to make ray giggle, but his warnings fell to deaf ears, or rather, ears that preferred to hear ray's laughter.

Finally, they reached the beach house, which was all set for their arrival. Jai had ensured that there were adequate supplies and that the house was cleaned before they arrived by calling their caretaker and butler ahead of their arrival. He had sent Tony over to the beach house to supervise the cleaning, and as they arrived, he opened the front door to welcome them in.

"oh my, jai, I didn't know you called ahead to prepare the house!" said bani, as she let ray down to run freely and play with his tony chachu.

"anyways, with sahil and rano staying overnight at the resort in goa, and with dadi, massi, adi and jigyasa away on their world tour, tony didn't have anything to do at home! So I asked him to come over and help us out." Said jai, taking bani by the hip and guiding her up the stairs to their bedroom, where they could change and then go out into the beach.

After they had all changed into casual Bermudas and T shirts, they went downstairs together. Bani gathered an adorable looking ray into her arms, and squealed at his cute outfit that was a perfect miniature of what jai was wearing, down to the Tommy Hilfiger sunglasses, courtesy of Tony.

They ensured that the children were fed and then they took off to the beach, where the sun was just beginning to set.

It takes a crane to build a crane
It takes two floors to make a story


"mmm….the sand feels so nice in between my toes!" said bani as she playfully kicked some sand around. Rhea was running ahead in the distance and ray was balanced on his fathers' shoulders.

It takes an egg to make a hen
It takes a hen to make an egg
There is no end to what I'm saying

Bani held jai's hand and they both walked slowly behind rhea, following her footsteps that were etched in the sand.

It takes a thought to make a word
And it takes some words to make an action
And it takes some work to make it work
It takes some good to make it hurt
It takes some bad for satisfaction

As they walked, bani looked at her husband's silloutte against the setting sky. It may have looked rather funny to anyone else, since it looked like he had two heads as ray was still sitting on his shoulders. But to bani, it looked simply beautiful. Jai was pretty good looking, given, but somehow, this side of him was so clearly what he truly was. He was never as happy as he was with his children, they made him whole. As bani looked upon him, she thought of how wonderful life was, and how blessed she was.

Before they knew it, night had fallen, and they walked back to the beach house to put their children to bed, before they set out again, for a more solitary walk. They set out in silence, with their hands entwined, and bani was lost in thought as she walked barefoot with her husband just as lost as she was.

It takes a night to make it dawn
And it takes a day to make you yawn brother
And it takes some old to make you young
It takes some cold to know the sun
It takes the one to have the other

She thought of how blessed she was to be with jai again, and how despite all the troubles they had faced they finally found happiness. She thought about how her life had been a minefield of disaster after disaster, and how, finally, all that seemed to have stopped. She could stop being so protective of all that she owned. She need not be so afraid any longer

And it takes no time to fall in love
But it takes you years to know what love is
And it takes some fears to make you trust
It takes those tears to make it rust
It takes the dust to have it polished

It was true, she was in love. As she looked at the man that she trusted most in the world, and saw his bro creased with worry, she reached her hand up and silently caressed his forehead, making his wrinkled brow smooth and his face change from a frown into a relaxed smile as he too silently watched his wife.

It takes some silence to make sound
And it takes a loss before you found it
And it takes a road to go nowhere
It takes a toll to make you care
It takes a hole to make a mountain

Life was a balance, she thought, as she silently led him to the water's edge so that they could wet their feet . As they wet their toes and looked into each others eyes, bani truly felt the essence of life. It was right there. In his eyes. This was life, more then anything else.

Ah la la la la la la life is wonderful
Ah la la la la la la life goes full circle
Ah la la la la life is wonderful
Ah la la la la

Edited by kav~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Kav,

YAY!! I'm the 1st person to comment. See, I told you I am the biggest fan of your FF.
Hey, I liked your update today. The song was so suitable. But why was Jai so grouchy at one point of time? Oh well, guess he's just stressed about Rhea's back.
By the way, whats with Rhea's back?? You are such a sadist!! l0l. Jokes apart. Why could be the problem with Rhea's back? Let me think. Hmm...maybe some disease that will like prevent her from walking her whole life. Hey wait a minute.. Am I giving you ideas?! No, ok I better stop.

Buh-bye hun.
-Zahra 😃
Edited by Hrithik_lova - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hello zhara! and im super flattered(:
and NO she shant be crippled! would i do that to my rhea?! but well its gonna be pretty bad, potentially fatal and is gonna be very long drawn. and ya its also gonna be pretty painful. but no cripplingXD
okok im mean!
lovekav
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Posted: 18 years ago

hello everyone!
i was wondering if i shld start a new ff along with this one. i had a few ideas, and i think that its gonna be cool! but there jai and bani are against each other completely, and NOT a couple (at least for a LONG time) and its more like a rivalry. what do you think? shld i start one?

lovekav

Edited by kav~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
yes you definetely should start a new one!!!

and btw this update was awesome!!

andy
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Posted: 18 years ago
heyy andy thanks!
and guyyyyyys no more comments?!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow Kav~! it took me a long time but I finally finished reading all 21 parts!
they're totally awesome!!
👏 👏 👏
👏 👏 👏
very interesting twists I must say! 😉
you write beautifully!! n the poems/songs that you use just makes it more touching!👏 👏 ...but the parts are too short! 😔
Jai & Bani have truly "fixed" each other! 😃

Originally posted by: kav~

Bani held jai's hand and they both walked slowly behind rhea, following her footsteps that were etched in the sand.



I loved this line...its very symbolic! 😉
I like the fact that Rhea is spoilt but still has her priorities straight! 😉 n her realtionship with Ray is soo cute! 😃
I wonder what's wrong with her?? 😕 I'm just wondering...will this in any way reveal who her real parents are??
plzz continue soon!
btw it would be gr8 to read another ff written by you 😉 ... have you read the ff rules?
Edited by Vedo - 18 years ago
Hrithik_lova thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kav~

hello everyone!
i was wondering if i shld start a new ff along with this one. i had a few ideas, and i think that its gonna be cool! but there jai and bani are against each other completely, and NOT a couple (at least for a LONG time) and its more like a rivalry. what do you think? shld i start one?

lovekav

Aww, Kav mere jaan. I think u shud write a new FF.
Lemme noe 1nce u start writing, I'll definitely read it
cos I love the way u write...

Enuf mushy-mushy alr.Bye!!
-Zahra😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kav~

hello zhara! and im super flattered(:
and NO she shant be crippled! would i do that to my rhea?! but well its gonna be pretty bad, potentially fatal and is gonna be very long drawn. and ya its also gonna be pretty painful. but no cripplingXD
okok im mean!
lovekav

Hi Kav,

I think its nth 2 b flattered abt cos u rlli do write well.👏
Btw, its d 1st time I'm 1st 2 comment. I'm soo happy..

Well, I'm extremely relieved tat Rhea wun't b crippled.
Whew!! Goody. Painful? Long drawn? Oh Kav, u r such
a sadist!! But I love u all the same..😳

Buh-bye & rmb 2 update soon or else.. I'll flood ur inbox
with PMs. l0l!! 😆

-Zahra😃

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