FF: fix you MESSAGE pg 38 IM BACK!!!! - Page 11

oh man!!!!!!! awww!!!!


that was touchy man!!!!! 😕

heyy ppl!
im still debating about where i shld take the storyline!! well i want bani to reveal it in a more interesting way.....but still as you said that will be SO drama mama! ok lemme think for awhile and confer with my friends ok(: lol i hope i can update today(:
luvkav

i think bani shld tell him the truth otherwise jai will not be able to forgive bani for that and again misunderstandings will be there.

Originally posted by: swatinarang

i think bani shld tell him the truth otherwise jai will not be able to forgive bani for that and again misunderstandings will be there.

To be truthful i think so too...
Would love to know Jai's reaction😳!
Yet this is YOUR FF so...do as you wish!😃
Continue soon...BTW loved part 14...nice!
She dressed in pink...gosh....😃
Now if only he could just grab and kiss the life out of her😆😆!
Continue soon...and Happy Diwali!
Luv ya
Sweetu.

Originally posted by: kav~

thanks CK for commenting!
heyyy the rest of you 100+ ppl who viewed this latest update, cant you at least comment?! wow i updated last night at ONE am and this morning just a few hours later the ff is on page NINE of the forum.please comment!!!
luvkav

yo kav~, not to worry... the biggest fan of ur FF is here..(mua)
i realliiiiiii love ur FF man..

ok can u pls let Jai noe that Rhea is not his child..

whatever u decide to write im sure it'll b just gr8.
bye,
Zahra 😃

Oops, nearly 4got.
To all the Hindus & Muslims,
I wish you guys a ....

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With love from,
Zahra

heyy zahra! and all the rest who commented! thank you for commenting! and yes jai will find out eventually. but not so soon ok. have faith its gonna be at least adequete if not good(: im writing the next part now! lol(:
love kav
and again, happy diwali and eid mubarak to everyone!

wow hun.........loved the last few parts!!👏

So jai finally caught up with Bani and cleared everything up!

Hmm.........wonder what Bani will do now!😉

OMG...poor jai...what will happen when he finds out that rhea is not his...but what will bani do...cant wait for more

heres part 12! sorry i finished yesterday but some problem caused my com to not be able to post it. hope you like it!

chapter 12
Bani was sitting stunned as ever as she watched jai look at her with pleading eyes.

"bani, my love, I know that when we were married I never got the chance to ask you, so today I want to make up for that." He got down on one knee and took out something small from his coat pocket. He held the object between his forefinger and thumb, and bani was mesmerised as she watched it glisten. "Bani, the light of my life, will you marry me and bring me out of the darkness I have been in for seven years?"

Bani was shell-shocked as jai looked at her with expectant eyes. The entire restaurant had stopped their work to look at them, watching their every move. They started clapping and urging bani to say yes and were commenting on how nice a couple the two of them would make. She looked once more into his love filled eyes, and found herself unable to resist them any longer.

"YES, I will!" She said, willingly falling into his warm embrace after seven long years. He slid the diamond encrusted light coloured ruby ring onto her index finger. Coincidentally it perfectly matched her baby pink sari. Together they left the resteraunt after footing the bill for the drinks and they walked over to the parking lot, where jai told his driver to drive bani's car to her house and himself sat in the drivers seat of his jag. Bani took the seat next to him and asked him where they were going, to which he replied, "Where ive been planning for the past month, darling!"

"But rhea…….." bani said, suddenly remembering the reason for her guilt and trying to muster up her courage to tell him the truth.

"oh yes, our little princess. Where is she? Where did you leave her before you came, love?" he asked, looking over at her as he backed the car out of the parking lot.

"she's with Avi, at the office, but…….." Bani said, still trying to convince herself to tell the truth.

"alright then, its over to your office and then off to my secret location!" said jai, all happy and excited.

He zoomed away to bani's nearby office and asked bani to go up to get his little angel. As though in a trance, caught in a cobweb of guilt, bani went up to Avi's cabin and took rhea. She told Avi that she wouldn't be coming in for the rest of the day, and that she would explain it all tomorrow, before going back downstairs and getting into the jag with rhea seated on her lap.

"PAPA!" rhea screamed as she saw her dear papa next to her driving the car.

"Yes my dear, its really me!" said jai, all smiles, hugging her. "look my dear, I have something for you! A little doll for my little doll." He handed her an adorable doll that looked incredibly like rhea herself. "I had it coustom made for you, my darling. I hope you like it!"
Of course, rhea loved it and was absolutely thrilled. However, bani was still consumed by her guilt. She shouldn't be letting all of this happen. But she couldn't tell him in front of rhea, she didn't know that she was adopted. She decided to think about this later, and plastered a smile upon her face as she watched jai drive them somewhere quite a distance away. She wondered where they were going.

oh man!!!

i like jai and rhea sooo cute!! 😳

please cont soon!