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Posted: 18 years ago
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"WOW!! hunnii..

ur ff is giving a new dimension to the episode.. so plz do continue!

pia u disgust me! u reach all time new lows in disgusting urself!

😡 (this is what we feel for
pia!>
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww..!! hunn tht was mindblowingg...!!
a grr88 strtt do continuee ssoon...!!!!
aww i hopee nuttin happens to bani and ashe is able to forgive jai ..!!
thnksxxx hunii...!!
do updatee soonn ! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OmgThats was so good please continue fast i really want to know what happenes 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh man that was awesome!!!!
where is bani?
continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
Hey Continue soon.Nice Story.
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Well Done
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice hope u continue it! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you guys for the support i feel really nice reading your feed back 😃
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Jai returned back to his room tired and defeated. yeh sab kya hogaya baghwan he grimaced. Abi yeh sab hona tha jab Bani mere liye ayi thi? (i dont know abt my hindi pls forgive me for my mistakes.)
Why am i so cursed in life? WHy do i have to suffer this way God! he ruflled hi s hair.He walked back to his suite. Piawas leaving the room she stopped seeing him.
'Mr.Walia.....
'Pia muje akela chod do....Just leave my room.He looked around to see his sister and Pia said, 'JIgyasa aunty left....'
Jai walked into the suite and waited for her to leave. Pia gave him a hurful look and went past the door. He closed the door after her. Jai walked towards the bed and flopped on it shutting his eyes and kicking of his shoes. Bani's out burst rang in his head. "mene aap keliye kya kuch nahin kiya? Aur aapne mere behen.. he shook his head in frustration. "nahin mene. bani...........bagwaan . h e groaned.
"mene aapko bachathe bachathe apna bacha koya.. he sat up abruptly on the bed. 'Muje bachathe?? wo kaise?...' he said aloud. he reached for his cell phone in his pocket and punched Pushkar's number.
Jai heard Pushkars sleepy voice.
'Pushkar mein Jai.'
"Ji sir' he said snapping out of his sleep.
'muje thum batao ki Bani ka abortion kaise hua?' he was straight to the point.
'Wo sir Bani ne aapse kuch nahin kaha?' he was curios.
'Thum batao Pushkar ki Bani ka abortion kaise hua?' he thunered.
'Wo sir court ke bahar kisi ne aap ko marne ki barein mein bath kar rahi thi Bani ne sunliya aur akele hi us admi ka follow kiya aur ussi hadse mein us ka...
pushkar heard him swear. 'Sir you take care.. koi aapke jaan ke peeche hein.'
Jai disconnected the call and threw the cell on the bed.
Bani itna sab kuch hogaya aur muje kuch bhi pata nahin chala.. I dont believe this.he smashed his fist on the bed. (hi hi hi. should have done it on the table or something he should have got hurt hihihihi. mean mean me)
Bani's words rang again in his head. "Jigya sa thum aur thumhara beta jo kar rahin ho teek kar rahin ho. Thum apni bhai ke poore paise usse lootna aur use sadak para le anaa" he coulnd't believe his Bani had cursed him. A faint smile appeared on his lips at the thought.
Jigyasa aur Ranveer mere peeche kya kar rahin hein Sab kuch pata lagna hoga. Maasi ko pata hoga. he thought. Lekin Bani adi rath ko kahan chali gayi? Kahin wo wapas nahin chaligayin? he got out of the bed freshend up nd went out of the room. Jai couldnt find the trace of her. For two hours he drove through the street of Dubai.it seemed like she had vanished into thin air.

Bani had walked aimlessly from the hotel dragging her suitcase. She was at the porch she collided with a woman.
'Sorry'. she murmered in haste.
'BANI! screamed the woman holding BAni's hand. Bani looked at the woman and her eyes grew wide.
'Mythali..'
'What are you doing here my friend?' Mythali asked hugging her.
'Mein.. wo...' Bani was overwrought with emotion.
"Bani kaya hua? you look tired come to my room'. Mythali's gaze fell on the bag Bani was carrying
"Bani..'
BAni's eyes filled with tears and a cry tore from her chest.
"Bani come along' Mythali took the bag from her and ushered her into the hotel to her room.
Once in her room Mythali ordered food and juice for hher friend.
Jai freshened up in the morning and enquired at the airport through his friend about bani's departure to mumbai. she hadn't left the country was the news Jai got from his friend. Jai was worried for her. How was she going to survive in this forieng country with out much of a friend? he thought worriedly. He met Pia at the lobby and they exchanged glances. On the way to their conference Pia asked,' Di ke barein mein kuch pta chal?' He gave her a frosty look. Pia got the message. Her eyes filled with tears and she blinked them away.

Jai had called up Aditya about Bani's dissappearance . Aditya went discreetly to a ditective agency to locate Bani's where abouts. they did not want to make her dissappearance public and humiliate her and the family.
It has been more than a week and there was no news of Bani.
Jai finished his work in Dubai and returned to India.

Jai was in his room he heard a knock on the door before he could aknowledge Maasi walked in.
'Munna..' she called him in her soft voice.
"maasi kaisi hein aap?' he asked . Maasi sat down on the bed and looked intently at her son.
'Mein teek hoon beta.. Bani kahan hein?... thum akele kaise?
' Maasi mein... he sat down at her feet and looked into her eyes.
'Beta kya hua?' she asked soothing his hair back from his forehead.
Jai told her everything. his tears came rolling down his cheek.
Masi sat stunned. he looked at her face for a second and asked in most hurtful voice, 'aapne muje yeh sab pehle kyon nahin batayi maasi? kya aapko muj par barosa nahin raha?
'aisa nahin hein beta'. She protested.
'Aisa hi hein maasi.' he stressed.
'Bani mujse kasam li thi beta..'
"Aap ko kal ayi Bani sab kuch tha ya aapki apne ki kushi?' he frowned. 'Aap tho muje marthe marthe dekha hein maasi ek bar aap mujse yeh kahthi ki Bani yeh sab kyon kar rahi hein tho aaj yeh din nahin dekhna padtha na hin mein bani kho khotha'. he took a deep breath andd said. 'Aap ne bhi muje dhoka diya maasi Jigyasa ki tharah..'
'Munna....' masi's heart broke.
'Ji me yeh afsoos ke saath kah raha hoon ki aap ne muje dokha diya sab kuch jaan kara app mujse chupathi rahin. mein aap ko khabi maaf nahin kar saktha'. he got up from the ground and walked towards the window. He ignored maasi's plea. She looked at his back for a momet and left the room heart brokenly.

Rano called Pia and Pia refused to take her call. She got no answers from any one. Jai ignored rano. He feard a confrontation with her. he knew how much she loved Bani. He didn't have an answer to give it to her.
One day Rano recieved a call in her cell. It was BANI.
==================================================== tell me guys if you have liked this chapter and pls point my mistakes my hindi grammer is very poor but i wanted to write the dialogues is hindi. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i just came back from my trip after one week and ur FF is the first one that i read for one week! and i simply love it! well done! i love it and i hope u''l continue soon!
thanx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just one msg! 😭 guys is it sooooooo bad? 😕 thank u pakiza u made my day 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW~~!!

fantastic!!

bravo!!

plz do continue!!

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