ishq bina kya jeena FF final part pg 10 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
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welcome back
how was your exams
i want a update regularly
JW was a jerk 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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my exams went well and i know JW was a jerk and i am gonna make him make it up to bani....
and i'll try updating everyday if i don't run out of ideas 😆😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ywe kya kiya jai ne made her cry by shouthing at her.. ohh noo jaii go and askk sorry .. ,,
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hey im glad ur back and updating
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lovely part..bt Jai 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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jai is a jerk 😡 how dare he insulted her 😡 😡 😡 poor bani poor girl was watching that awful play just 4 him 😳 😳 n him 😡 i think 4 a moment lost his mind 🤢 n what does he finds in that roshni 🤢

continue asap
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Thanks yaar...nice updates........waiting for the next one.............
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guys chap 14 here goes
CHAPTER 14

This chap is dedicated to ZIDDI(MAMTA)


Bani has tears flowing down her face and looked really hurt….. everyone was looking at them….
Jai: Bani…im…sor…
Bani gives a very big sob and runs out of the theater…
People start murmuring….
'Ek aurat se baat karni nahin ati to baat hi kyon karte hain?' says one….
'ya she was just trying to make him happy… god ONLY knows how she watched that damn play' said another
'she must really love him a lot to bear him and his bad taste' says a group of girls…
Jai: hears all these comments and feels really guilty…
Jai follows suit and runs in the direction she went.
Jai: why??? Why did I have to say all that? I am such an ass****. GODAMNIT…that was so out of control….. Jai maintain your equanimity. Grrrrr this is so frustrating now where am I gonna find her???
At that same moment he sees her getting into a taxi.
Jai running behind the taxi: bani…. Plz listen to me, meri baat to sun……by that time the taxi had gone out of sight…..
Jai: f***
He gets into his car and just to cool his nerves and to think what to say to Bani he switches on the radio…

Je suis dsole
Lo siento
Ik ben droevig
Sono spiacente
Perdname

I've heard it all before
I've heard it all before
I've heard it all before
I've heard it all before
[repeat]

I don't wanna hear, I don't wanna know
Please don't say you're sorry
I've heard it all before
And I can take care of myself
I don't wanna hear, I don't wanna know
Please don't say 'Forgive me'
I've seen it all before
And I can't take it anymore

You're not half the man you think you are
Save your words because you've gone too far
I've listened to your lies and all your stories (Listen to your stories)
You're not half the man you'd like to be


I don't wanna hear, I don't wanna know
Please don't say you're sorry
I've heard it all before
And I can take care of myself
I don't wanna hear, I don't wanna know
Please don't say 'Forgive me'
I've seen it all before
And I can't take it anymore

Don't explain yourself 'cause talk is cheap
There's more important things than hearing you speak
You stayed because I made it so convenient
Don't explain yourself, you'll never see

Gomen nasai [Japanese. English translation: "I am sorry"]
Mujhe maaf kardo
Przepraszam [Polish. English translation: "Sorry"]
Sli'kha [Hebrew. English translation: "Forgive me"]
Forgive me...

(Sorry, sorry, sorry)
I've heard it all before
I've heard it all before
I've heard it all before
[repeat]

I don't wanna hear, I don't wanna know
Please don't say you're sorry
I've heard it all before
And I can take care of myself
I don't wanna hear, I don't wanna know
Please don't say 'forgive me'
I've seen it all before
And I can't take it anymore

I don't wanna hear, I don't wanna know
Please don't say you're sorry
(Don't explain yourself cause talk is cheap)
I've heard it all before, And I can take care of myself
(There's more important things than hearing you speak)
I don't wanna hear, I don't wanna know
Please don't say 'forgive me'

I've heard it all before
I've heard it all before
I've heard it all before
I've heard it all before

(This is " Sorry" by Madonna. Beautiful song, I know that it has no role to play here but still just to give jai that xtra boost)
Jai: god that does it did it have to be that damn song……grrrrr (jai now better manaofy my Bani or else I'll irritate you with this song for the rest of ur life….and I can do so too coz ur in MY story he he he)
Jai reaches home late at about 1:00 at night(gosh itna time sorry kehne keliye sochne mein laga to sorry kehne me kitna time lagaoge mere baap?) him havin gone to the park to sit and think how to manofy Bani.
Jai goes into the bedroom and finds Bani standing near the window obviously crying, locking the door he goes near her.
Jai: Bani…..
Bani turns around: aap yahan kya kar rahe hain jayiye na mujhe akela chodiye…..
Jai:……..
Bani: why don't you go to her????
Jai: but Bani….
Bani(not allowin him to speak just goes on and on): you like her don't you? You love roshni then go to her yahan mere paas kya kar rahe hain….main to jassi DIE HARD FAN hoon na? Jayiye aap apne roshni ke paas……… you and roshni would look very good together you know. A pair of clowns. One of them who has practically bathed herself in makeup and has hair-flickomania and one who goes around watchin horrendous plays. I have had the worst day of my life after watchin the nastiest play ever in the whole universe to have you erupt like Mount Vesuvius sprouting words like lava in public. Know what I don't wanna talk to you…so just go…GO…LEAVE ME ALON…..
Jai not knowing how to stop her torrent of tanas claims her mouth in a hard but passionate kiss…..

Authors note: ok that's it for now….slowly running out of ideas and I am gonna end this FF soon and I think everyone who has read my other FF jai and Bani together 4ever will know that I do not do 20-30 chaps and I want to desperately end this FF coz I have got a new idea and concept for a JB FF mayb a never eva heard b4 notion touchwood to that!. But I can't be too hopeful coz there are better and much more creative writers than me so I better not get such stuff into my overbloated head. Actually I ave 2 good storylines but I heard that only one is allowed per person so plz tell me if I am right bout that or not. K…and JW no more Madonna for you coz you got it finally right…..hehehe… 😆

Love 😉
Suppi (Supriya Mallya if you people wanna know my real name)


Edited by bubbles2suppi - 18 years ago

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