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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys i am updating a small part b4 i am washed off by a huge tidal wave of studies b4 the pre-boards...
see you on 20th december...
and btw don't come after me with belans for ending with a cliffhanger don't you worry i have got a nice epi up my sleeve and it WORTH THE WAIT.... wanna hint?.......all i can say is "that is the east and juliet is the sun" 😉 😉
love suppi
and p.s: from now on i'm updating on diff pages don't worry the page key will be there on page one.....

CHAPTER 11
That day in office Jai totally forgot about coming home early. Office was his favourite place in the whole world. He practically loved work.at about 9:00 pm a call came on his office phone.
Jai: hello
Massi: MUNNA TU ABHI TAK OFFICE MEIN HAI? MAINE TUJHE KAHA THA NA GHAR JALDI AANA? AB KAB NIKAL RAHA HAI WAHAN SE?
Jai: opps …main to bhool hi gaya…main abhi aa raha hoon sorry maasi …..
Jai met traffic on the way and was caught in it and by the time he reached home it was 11:00pm. The moment he entered the house all he could see were decorations which were drooping as if sad about his late arrival….he went into the hall and he saw Bani fallen asleep on the sofa on which she was sitting. Noone else was in the house. she was wearing this gorgeous light peach ghagra and it had this really heavy set embroidery in it. The colour complimented her skin colour and made her glow.she had absolutely no makeup on but still she looked stunning. She had propped up her chin by her left hand and was resting her head on it.
He tore his eyes away from her and saw that maasi's room still had its light on. He went to her room.
Jai:maasi ye sab???
Maasi: munna TUJHE MAINE KAB PHONE KIYA THA HMMM?
Jai: wo maasi traffic aapko pata hai na mumbai ka traffic.
Maasi: kya tujhe pata hai Bani tera abhi bhi intezar kar rahi hai? Saare mehman to chale gaye..maine kaha us se ki wo jaakar so jaye magar maani hi nahin..
Jai:maasi wo waha sofe pe hi so gayi…magar mehman kaunse mehman?
Maasi: aaj hum sab ne milkar tumhare aur Bani ke shaadi ke khushi mein party rakhi thi…magar agar dulha hi party mein na ho to hum kya party karte…bechari Bani ne to kuch bhi nahin khaya…tumhara intezar kar rahi thi….ab jaa usko mana le shayad root gayi hogi…
Jai: thik hai maasi….
Jai goes to the hall . Bani was still sleeping. Jai goes to her and picks her up in his arms and starts goin towards their room… by this time Bani was wide awake and was looking at Jai in a shocked way.halfway through the stairs…
" jiya dhadak dhadak jiya dhadak dhadak"
Jai and Bani look up and see sahil and anu…both were smiling and singing (not that besura) jiya dhadak dhadak.
Sahil: kyon mamaji aaj tak aap "begane" the aur aaj achanak hue "dil deewane?"
Bani goes beet red and both sahil and anu laugh and run to their room and Jai couldn't do anything but give them his usual angry stare…
Jai: aajkal kuch jyada hi ho gaya hai in dono ki harkatein…dekh loonga un dono ko…
Suddenly sahil comes out and shouts back at Jai
Sahil: aap hume tab hi dekhenge na jab aap ko Bani maami se phursat mile gi???
Bani looks at the floor her face redder if possible and Jai gives sahil a you-wait-and-watch look and sahil gives Jai a catch-me-if-you-can look..
Bani: Mr.Walia main chal sakti hoon….
Jai: Bani tumhare pair mein to moach ayi thi na?
Bani: wo ab..theek hai main khud chal sakti hoon.
Jai: ok (and he lets her down)
But the moment her legs touch the floor she stumbles in pain but Jai catches her in time….
Jai: aaj kal tum bahut jhoot bolne lagi ho…
and he picks her up in his arms and lays her on the bed and goes to his cupboard and takes a first aid box. He takes a sprain bandage out and goes and suits near the foot of the bed. He starts to bandage her ankle.
Bani: nahin aap kyon takleef kartein hain main khud….
Jai gave her a yes-I-know-you-can look….and that shut Bani up.Jai finishes bandaging her ankle.
Jai: Bani tum so jao hum kal baath karte hain
Bani finds herself tongue tied and just nods.
Jai tucks Bani in and does something that really takes Bani by surprise…
What does Jai do…find out on 20th of December.
Guys this is a sorry for not updating chapter……I know its damn boring….but what can a tired mind think up…..? sorry again for not updating
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
he gave her a goodnite kiss.... 😃 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
very nice...pls update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
Sahil tu pitega, tu pitega😆😆😆
Massi send them to a honeymoon
he kisses her forehead or gives her a good night kiss
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35

Read all the 11 parts together.

It was amazing

WIll wait for you to come back.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
even i read all ur 11 parts
amazing story
gr8 ggoin
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i will be waiting for dec 20th
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
waiting for dec 20.....rocking ff
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys this is the
CHAPTER 12
Jai does something that takes Bani completesly by surprise….
Jai: I LOVE YOU…..I LOVE YOU …..
Bani : WHAT?then he kisses her very passionately…..
Jai then turns into a dark and shadowed figure and Bani wakes up sweating to find Jai lookin at her ,amused….
Bani: oh I must have fallen asleep…..
Jai: then you must have been dreaming of something nice because you were smiling in your sleep…..was it about me?
Bani turns red: no …no….nothing like that.(actually she was lying and Jai seemed to sense this)
Jai(murmers very faintly): like I told earlier tum aaj kal kuch jyada hi jhoot bolne lagi ho….
Bani catches that and she turns really red with embarrassment.
Jai: ok ab so jao…
The next morning
The goddess usha went through her normal routine to wake up the sleeping world reminding them of their worldly duties…the sun woken up from its slumber drove away the moon to start a new day. Slowly the light falls through the sky blue curtains…..two souls lost in their dreams lie under the dark blue blankets facing each other….(don't mind the BLUE coz I love that colour you might have noticed I have used blue in a lot of places earlier too) . the first to wake up is as usual Bani….she doesn't notice her position getsup and goes to the bathroom to freshen up,has a bath and comes out dressed in a (ok enough with the blue…ummmm in a olive green seems good) olive green saree…she sees that Jai is still asleep and goes to the dressing table to do the routine…..
She puts on her mangalsutra and puts sindoor in her maang. She goes down to prepare breakfast and notices noone around…not even tony….she prepares breakfast by herself…she checks out the clock and its alreadt 9:00 am and noone was down yet… she goes back up to Jai's room and guess what? Our cuddles was still asleep…Bani goes to him.
Bani: emm Mr.Walia….its already 9:00 won't you getup?
No response
Bani: Mr.Walia…(she goes to him and taps him on the shoulders)
No response(like I told you hes a very sound sleeper)
Bani: Mr. Walia…she shakes him
He pulls her hand (by mistake..what do you expect he was dreamin bout aloo paratas)
And she falls on his chest her hair covering his face….he doesn't feels anything but then after a minute or so her hair makes him sneeze…AACHOOO
AND HE WAKES UP TO FIND himself catching Bani's handand Bani on his chest lookin at him with a dazed expression on her face…
Bani(face completely red by now): umm Mr. Walia can you plz let go off my hand? He immediately lets go of her hand… and gets up and his head hits hers…
Bani: ouch…
Jai: I'm so sorry….really I am a very sound sleeper…again I'm sor
Bani: its ok Mr. Walia….umm Mr.Walia kya aap ko aaj office nahin jaana?
Jai: nahin Bani who aaj public holiday hai aur saare offices band hain…
Bani: oh.. I'm sorry I woke you up…I didn't
Jai: know…yeah I know that….itz ok Bani anyway I would have got up somewhere around now(LIAR)
And with that he gets up and goes into the bathroom to freshen up and have his bath
And Bani goes down and finds everyone at the dining table waiting for Bani and Jai so that everyone can have breakfast together….
Jai's out by 20 mins and comes down to breakfast….
Jai: good morning everyone…
Sahil: mamaji…aajkal aapke mornings to kuch zyada hi acche ban rahe hai…aur to aur aap aaj itne jaldi ut gaye?…kya baat hai ? ummm?kya ye mami ka asar hai?
Jai gives his shut-your-mouth look and that does the job…
Dadi: are sahil puttar tu chup kar….apne mamaji ko tanj mat karna…are Jai puttar tu aaj kahin bahar kyon nahin jaata? Koi film vilm dekhke aa
Jai: are dadi aap ko oata hai na ki mujhe filmon ka koi shok nahin main to sirf theater acting pasandd karta hoon
Sahil: to aaj aapka lucky day hai mamaji…sridhar theater mein "excellence theater acting group" apna ek play kar rahin hai…..
Jai: OMG OMG I love that group…. I have gotta watch that no matter what play it is…BTW kaunsa play kar rahein hain wo?
Sahil (giving a huge grin): you'll watch no matter what?
Jai: ya ya now tell me…
Sahil: then I have good news I got you two tickets in advance mamaji…I know you like that group…
Jai: do ?
Sahil: haan aap aur mamiji ke liye…
Jai: ok…now tell me which play…
Sahil: (now smiling wider than ever) ROMEO AND JULIET…..

Jai's face falls…
Jai (to himself): oh god how can I take Bani to that play….wo mere bare mein kya sochegi??? But I love that group and that play…
I don't care I'm going to that play no matter what…..
Jai: ok ok I'll go and also take Bani with me…
Bani: what?
Sahil: are mami sharmane ki zaroorat nahin…go and enjoy…

Authors Note:Ab kya hoga ? to know keep reading " ishq bina kya jeena" and sorry I didn't update on 20nd…my exams got postponed till 23rd now that they are outta the way I 'll keep updating time to time( i.e; every week)

Love suppi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39

i know i know i broke two of my earlier promises-

1. to update on 20th

2. to give a LONG update

i'm really sorry you guys

love suppi

Edited by bubbles2suppi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
oh man read this whole FF!!!!! its awesome and funny!!! 😆


please cont soon!!!!!!!!

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