Breathing...only for you UPDT prt3 pg8 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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haye ram. that was MIND BLOWING
so im guessin this is afta d baby died.. cuz when her hand was on her stomach. he got mad . haila i seriously admire d way u write.. mindblowing.. that was TOO good.. and he kissed her.. 😳 my my *faints* 😆 i tend to do that a lot now adays 😉 that was gr8888888888888888.. can't wait fo d nxt part.. yay 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was great..pl do continue....you are good!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW! di.. fantastic!! welll done... looking really forward to the next part..!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg!!! such a good part...plz continue soon sweetu!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was a superb start.loved it.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful start Sweetu! 😃 😉
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plzz continue ASAP!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was AWESOME!!! plz continue soon like NOW 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey don't call it boring, I am a fan of your writing, and glad to catch part 1 as usually I end up somewhere like part 12 to begin reading ff. Do continue soon, can't wait...... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haye...what passion...loving it...cant wait to read more... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 wow!!!sweetu u r a genius!!!i love ur writting style.......plz cont soon!!!i loved it!! 😳 😃

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