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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey dont be too sure he will marry her...lolz....keep on thinking..... 😉 😉 😉

and thanks to all those who have PM'd me and who have said such lovely words on my fanfic 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raania

hey dont be too sure he will marry her...lolz....keep on thinking..... 😉 😉 😉 What do u mean , I am so confused....

and thanks to all those who have PM'd me and who have said such lovely words on my fanfic 😳

PS: FABULOUS!!!!I wntd to say JAI, MARRY HER, but now m not sure

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Posted: 19 years ago
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He will marry her 😛 He better 😡 about he will engage her 😛
Plz write soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HOPE HE MARRIES HER - pLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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haye...shaadi karlo...any question there... 👏 ...loved it...keep them coming... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PLEASE CONTINUE I WANA KNOW WHAT HE DOES
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 6

Jai ke liye toh jaise paro tale zameen kisine gheejli….but he had to save this innocent girl…..if not God knows what this woman will do to her and her sisters….

Jai: Listen lady meh nahi janta ki tum kaisi aurat ho….u are like a mother to these girls and yet u say such things to them…but than again its accepted of you from what I see and have heard…."HAA MEH….MEH BANI SE SHADI KARUGA"….

A stunned chachi opened her mouth and it could have dropped to the floor…….the old ladies in the neighborhood gave blessings to Jai and wished he would keep Bani happy as she is a heera in a koyle ka khan…..a gem of a stone……in a dirty place….Pia and rano just hugged Jai and cried….

Jai: with a very serious expression…wasn't the happiest person on earth..he knew he had to get these girls out of here…he doesn't have to really marry her…he will just say yes to her aunt and than leave with them…..he can take them with him and give Bani a good job and than they could do whatever they want….yeah he thought that sounds good…with that decision made….he continued

Jai: first things first….Bani is very sick and we should take her to the doctor….because the nearest hospital is like 45 min away Rano Pia tum log tayar hojao and we will go together …where is the phone I will request my car from the hotel…..

Chachi was about to speak …but Jai silenced her with one finger….i don't want to hear it lady!!!! He thought…waiting for the car

Jai: and Mrs Dixit….thts it right…and Mr Dixit….yeh log agle hafte mere saath Mumbai jayege ,….woh hi meh Bani se shadi karuga ur Rano aur Pia mere saath rahege……

Chachi: smelling something fishy….nahi shadi yahi hogi….warna yeh log nahi jayege…..Bani aur Pia ja sakte hai kiu ki woh nabalik nahi hai magar Rano yahi rahegi…
Rano with a sad face looked at Jai…..

Rano: aap di ko lekar jayiye …meh yahi theek hu….meh didi ko aur takleef meh nahi dek sakti…

jai was like dammit what have I got myself into…

Chachi: yeh bachi hamare responsibitly hi…and they cannot leave without my permission….agar jana hi hai toh by kaida Bani se shadi karke aur kanooni inko apne saath leja sakte ho

Jai: being a business graduate was too familiar with all this law…..well he could always get legally married to get these girls what the y deserve and leave from here……

Jai: theek hai meh hospital se akar baath karta hu aap log se….

The car had arrived and Jai took Bani with Rano to the hospital….Pia stayed home as chachi wouldn't let all three to go…..

Bani was admitted immediatlely…..

Doc: good that u brought her in…..the flu is very contagious and is in her system now…if u had been a bit more late it could have reached her bones and it would have been very hard to diagnose it…..she is very weak and seems to have a high blood pressure which we are having difficulty in controlling….i think stress hai…..aapne uske pati hai..i need u to sigh this consent so that we can go ahead with the IV's (sorry guys not a doctor person but I tried)…..

Jai: but she will be alright doc??

Doc: oh yeah….a weeks rest or two and she will be fine and herself again…she just needs to eat properly and rest…..

Jai: great sighning the form he gave it to her……the doctor filled Bani sir name which was missing…..he saw Jai Walia..and continued Bani Walia

Doc: oh ur the great Jai Walia…our hospital children are very appreciative of your kindness Mr Walia…your aunty (masi) comes here once a year contributing funds to the childrens ward under ur name….its very kind of you…our children have the best available equipment for them….

Jai: just smiled and thanked him….

Bani was not going to get up the next 12-14 hours…he headed towards Rano to see if she was fine…

Rano: di kaisi hai…theek toh hai na…woh theek hojayegi nah?? A concerned worried Rano asked…..such innocence these girls have Jai thought…for the first time he looked at a girl without checking her out…..

Jai: not to worry buddy..she is doing fine….but she will be out till next mrng….lets go eat..im hungry…are you hungry??….making Rano smile

Rano: smiled straightening her glasses….yeah I am…thank you

Jai and Rano went to a restaurant close by and ordered dinner…

Rano; meh nahi janti aap kaun hai…but aaj pheli baar mummy papa ke baadth kisine hamare liye baath ki…Di bikul akeli hai…par aab lagta hai shayad nahi…thank you

Jai just smiled…he felt so guilty…while eating his dinner he dropped some dhal on his shirt….putting his wallet cell and all near Rano he excused himself to the washroom…yeh kya hogeya he thought…dammit….he said out loud

Rano; surprised….jst smiled…nikal jayega sir…..thori si toh hai…Jai mad e his way to the wash room….

Jai's cell rang…..Rano didn't have a choice but to pick it as it was loud…..

Rano: hello

…..: hello

Rano: ji Mr Walia nahi hai….woh bathroom gaye hai…meh message dedu gi

A surprised Masi was astounded who was this young girl on his munna's phone…

Masi: aareh beta tum kaun ho….she could sense good culture behind the neat reply

Rnao: ji meh…woh…kya kahu…meh unki Sali hu…..

Masi: Sali???...kya….Munna kaha hai…aur thumara kya matlaab hai

Rano: munna???

Masi: Jai??

Rano: oh…ji mere di se woh shadi karne wale hai….meh unki choti bhen rano hu

Masi: was delighted…munna aur shadi..yeh to bada hi smart nikla….aacha beta aye toh kehna masi ne call kiya tha

Jai got out as Rano was putting the cell down….

Rano: appki Masi ne kaha munna (she giggled) ko kehna call kare…

Jai a little embarrassed….picked the cell up walked outside to talk to Masi

Masi: hello munna…areh beta….tum shadi kar rahe ho aur kuch kaha nahi….kaab kar rahe ho…bahu kaisi hai…meh bhouth hi khush hu beta….meh keh nahi sakti maine kitna intezar kiya hai is din ka….meh toh soch rahi ti ki us Roshni se tum shadi karoge…par beta sach meh …meh bhouth hi khush hu….aisa karo …bahu ko lekar jaldi ghar aaja …yaha shadi karege….

Jai: masi woh

Masi: mujhe kuch nahi sunaa…do hafto meh tum arahe ho na..meh thumar shadi ki saab bandabast karti hu…..oh beta meh bahu ko kaab milugi..

Jai: jald hi masi…with that he hung up the phone

A pissed Jai went inside to Rano who had just finished eating……he grabbed Rano..paid the bill at the front and made his way out…in the car park

Jai: thumara demaag kharab hai…what did u say to my masi….kya zarurat thi yeh saab batane ki

Rano: tears in her eyes….magar …aap toh….di se shadi….

Jai: woh sirf …oh dammit…he stopped….seeing her tears…besides aab toh baath kuch zayda hi bahar nikal gai hai…Masi toh mera intezar karegi bahu ki…..what the hell…maybe its time I settle….aur who else that this cultured girl…Masi would love her…plus she is hot….atleast he will enjoy something in this marriage…

Jai: im sorry….i got carried away..he squeezed Rano's shoulder…shall we go call home and than head for a hotel nearby….apni didi subha dhek lena…phir agle hafte we have to to go Mumbai…..

With that Jai's decision was settled …he was going to marry this simple small town girl …Walia house and Masi will have her ideal bahu and I will have a hot wife by my side in my business and personal life….thats done…..love had nothing to do wit it…the deal is going to be profitable for him too….this was indeed a smart business decision he thought…

Poor bani was unconscious now knowing that her whole life was going to change very soon!!!!
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my my so much Jai Walia thought and poor Bani doesnt even know....read more later to find out what happens...

love you 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was too good.loved it.simply superb.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 7:

That night Jai called his lawyers and got all the necessary information as to how he can get Rano with him when he takes Bani and Pia with him ….he got all the documents and papers ready..he was Mr Walia…he can get anything done when he wanted….with all the stuff faxed to him…..he was ready to talk to her aunty

Now the biggest hurdle…..how does he convince Bani…phew she hated the sight of him…not that he wants her to love him or anything..but not hate him ….

Bani got up the next mrng around 6am….she felt good…it seemed ages when she had such a good rest…and it felt good..her cough had subsided and her head wasn't as bad as it had been….she looked around to find white walls and than reality hit her…she was at some hospital…par Rano Pia..aur aur woh..??

Nurse: Gdmrng Mrs Walia

Bani: jerked up…maybe she is in the wrong room

Nurse: aab aapki tabiyat kaisi hai

Bani: aap mujse baath kar rahi hai

Nurse: looking at her chart…ji aur kise…she checked her normal temp and than the routine and than told her…breakfast should be here shortly and than the doc will come see u

Bani: magar….

Nurse: smiled…its okay eat what u can…..u need food for the medicines ur consuming..i will see u later…

Doc: gdmrng Mrs Walia

Bani: irrated …dhekiye aapko koi galati hui hai

Just than Jai walked in…and Bani's eyes popped up ..as if she had seen a ghost

Doc: oh gdmrng Mr Walia..meh abhi aapke patni ko keh raha tha that she needs to eat good and look after herself…

Bani swore that she could hit him….Jai looking at her with a smile..he knew that she was pissed at the thought of being considered his wife …hell she hated his guts….but he was loving every moment of this ….hell honey don't worry he thought…I will make u Mrs Walia very soon….

Jai: gdmrng darling..how are you feeling…he walked to her…leaned forward and kissed her forehead….

Bani winced….meh dhek lugi tumko…..uff he is such an arrogant fool…iski himat toh dheko

Jai: aah..i see still a bit hot

Doc: yes the temperature has come down a lot but not fully…it wlll gradually come down…she is good though than before..

Bani just gave the most disgusting smile ever…..she knew exactly what Jai's words meant….

Jai: yes doc I tell her to relax but she never listens…I even offered massages and drinks but nope…she wont listen to a word…like a innocent man he went on….Jai hugged her on the side holding her…Bani kicked her arm in his tummy with a tight smile on her face …the doc smiled…..ouch Jai thought…ek dum wild hai this one….

Bani was furious….she hated this man…his touch…her mere presence…ohhh

Bani: doc mujhe kya hua hai????

The doc went explaining about her condition and how her sister and husband brought her in yesterday afternoon and that she needs to relax and take care….the doc left….Jai followed him out to discuss when Bani can go home….

Rano: coming in with flowrs and chocolates….gdmrng Di…aap kaisi ho???

Bani: rano tum yaha….

Rano: ha..jiju ne mujhe kaal raath laya tha…

Bani: jiju????? She thought…eyebrows sky way high…yeh Rano ko kya hogeya??

Bani: tum raath bhar yaha thi???

Rano: ha di Jiju ke saath hotel meh…..all smiling to see her sister well and talking….

Ban: kya…..tum akeli uske saath…thumara tabiyat toh theek hai..aur yeh jiju kya hai

Jai walked in with a nurse who took Bani's dishes away

Jai overhearing…: yes love ur lovely sister was with ME all night…stressing the Me…knowing very well its implications on Bani…..

Nurse: aab aap log jayiye patient ko aaram karna hai

Jai: okay darling…kissing her on her cheeks…smiling…Bani turned her face to be met on the other side of the cheeks …she rubbed it off giving Jai disgusted looks…

Jai in her ear: relax…she is ur sister….she is no match for me…not as u are….she was in the next room….not in my bed…u know very well who I love in my bed…and Miss Bani Dixit…I will get u there at ur own will …very soon!!!

With that Jai left with Rano to go clear things at home with the old lady….he hated to even think

Bani was seething with anger…she was traquilised with some medication and couldn't really do much ..than to sleep again…..she layed down with everything going in her head…the medication was making it impossible for her to think….soon she was gone…

Back at the dixit house

Jai: yes Mrs Dixit….i will marry Bani and her being the blood sister of Rano she automatically gets her custody and I as her husband will have all rights on Rano …as for the weath…its all Rano's and I would suggest that u forget on getting that aswell….a very worried and scared chachi and chacha were lost for words…

Jai: also….Bani and Pia's share I will give u two weeks to get everything transferred under their name if not that as soon as I am Bani's legal husband I am going to sue u for emotional stress…inheriting property under false pretences and god knows what all

Jai: theek hai!!…Jaise Bani ki tabiyat theek hoti hai…meh usko apne saath use aur uski bheno ko Mumbai lejaraha hu…jaha hum shadi karege….dont worry aapko invitation mil jayegi….time par…in the meantime…I don't want Rano or Pia to have any problems in their own house…

With that Jai left leaving Rano and Pia shouting for happiness…

Pia: wow Rano tum realise kar rahi ho..>Mumbai…city…life…wow I cant wait….

Rano: didn't say anything was just quiet…this is all good…but kya Bani did yeh chati hai

Pia: Rano kya hua??

Rano: patani di kya chati hai??

Pia: don't u worry….aab now that we will have our property and wealth back…im sure we can do something…plus aab toh jiju bhi hai nah Di ke saath…….she hugged Rano and said everything will be alright….
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hope u guys r liking it so far!!😳

Edited by Raania - 19 years ago

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