Updated_Kahi Pyar... Last Part pg 53

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys

yet another fanfic was blooming in my head...so here it is..hope u guys like it......šŸ˜‰..obviously for none other than our Jai and Bani...😳

The whole Walia House was dressed up as a bride….aur kyon nah ho akhir it was the grand event. The most awaited function that the business world had been anticipating. Finally the most eligible bachelor in the business world was tying the knot…finally he had found a match…a girl who would fulfill the empty space in his life.

Jai Walia, a man in distinction walked down the stairs of the Walia Mantion to be greeted by the crazy media..everyone firing questions from left right and centre…everyone wanting to know who the girl was …how it happened….the shadi was in 3 days how did he manage to keep her away from the media…from his world…who was this mysterious woman??

Jai Walia …whom nothing and nobody affected…he was "The Man"…the man whom nobody dared to question …what he wanted he got in life….he was known to have blue blood running through his system as his business was his pride. The most eligible bachelor who had just recently turned 35, whom no woman was able to tie down…who had so many affairs that the mere word women had become as essential as his business suits in his closet..worn once…shown off and than thrown away in laundry to be washed and next day a new suit….thats how he treated woman…..

Press: So Mr Walia won't u say yeh Miss lucky lady hai kaun??.

Jai smiled….patience patience…u will see her…not only see her but also meet her

Another member of the press: Mr Walia it was known that the day u tie the knot it would none other than be Miss Rosni Chopra ur partner and business asscociate for many years….what happened there??

Jai winced his teeth giving the lady a stern look: I wouldnt go on unknown territory lady…evidence u cant substantiate on u shouldn't use …don't they teach u in journalism classes…smiling his canving smile..Miss Chopra and I are strictly on business terms ..what we had was a past and I would keep it that…with a stern voice….next question??

Press 3: Mr Walia apne honewali patni ka naam toh bata sakte ho aap??? Who is she??? Where from>???

Jai: smiling his drop dead gorgeous smile…..smiling oh most certainly……looking far ahead he met eyes with a familiar pair of eyes ….the eyes that had his heart locked the instant he had laid eyes on it 6 months ago….whom he couldn't get out of his mind …whom he spend his nights dreaming about…whom he had to have even if it meant marriage…..she smiled…clad in a body fitting kameez…hair all straight..very black open parted on the side….earrings dangling from both ears…her eyes on him….having pencil strip hills made her way inbetween the media crowd…. towards Jai Walia..

Jai: felt his heart do a flip flop…dammit…..Ladies and Gentlemen u wanted to meet her..there she comes…the beautiful Goddess who captured my heart some 6 months back…..the lucky to be Mrs Walia…..Bani Dixit!!!

All the cameras and press turned to find a stunning beautiful very simple yet the most gorgeous smile on her face make her way to her fianc …..Jai put his hands forward to pul her up on the stairs…and give her side hug…nudging her to make her feel of her presence……

Bani Dixit…a 22 year old put her hand forward to the man who had flown her off her feat …who made it impossible to not say No to him…she had to accept his proposal of marriage there was no two way about it…..she smiled again….a smile that would put a mans worse misery to rest…..

Press 4: Miss Dixit how do u feel

Bani: she just smiled…..very happy

Press 5: Miss Dixit how does it feel to be marrying the most eligible bachelor in Mumbai…a man who no other woman has been able to capture….

Bani: smiling more….such a calm person she was…quoting "ur statement…im no other woman"….further smiles…

Press 6: does it bother u Miss Dixit that your future husband has broken many hearts before giving it to you…are you willing to let ur guard down and settle with a man who has had no heart uptil now…???

Bani a bit hesitant looked Jai's ways…who still held her shoulder and Jai replied


Jai: that is a absurd question and my future wife does not have to reply to that….the only fact that is important is that I have found my mIss right and in 2 days time I will be marrying her….

Jai: that is enough..please enjoy the sangeet ceremony and have a blast.

Jai took Bani to his side of the chamber in the house….his study….bathroom followed by a huge bedroom….to the terrace…where he had his privacy from the rest of the world…

hope u like the first part...let me know what u think...!!😳

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timepasskar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice story Raania... Love to see where it leads...continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeahhhhhhhhhhh fantastic. You have a great idea to make jai and bani stori from the beginning. I'll love read next part. šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fantastic di.. u must continue!! i loved every word of it!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks Nian and Miss Diey... 😳 i will surely make this a nominee..heehhehe...jst kiddng..hopefully u like this story..

part 2:

Jai: was the trip down here okay

Bani: ji

Jai: are you okay…hows everyone at home??

Bani: theek hai…Pia aur Rano hamari shadi ke badh Mumbai college transfer lejuke honge aur hamar saath rhene ayege…..Mr Walia I don't know...hesitant.... how to ...still uncomfortable yet scared.... for what u did to my family….agar hum kuch aur din apne chacha chachi ke saath rhete toh na jane kiya hota…..

Jai: why cant u call me Jai?? Looking at Bani….thinking to himself…God woman do u know what u do to me…

Bani comes from a poor background…her parents had past away in a tragic accident and had left her and her two yonger sisters under her step-uncle…their fathers step brother who only took them for the Dixit Inheritance which Bani inherited as she turned 18 and so would Pia and Rano…..the girls had suffered a lot mainly Bani as she was the oldest…having to leave studies she was made to work in one of the big hotels as the front desk person and that is how Mr Jai Walia had spotted her…..
Chacha and Chachi had never showered any love on the 3 girls and Bani was everything to her sisters..she had to get them out of that mess or God knew what would happen when Rano would turn 18……

One fine evening….some 6 months back…

It was a cold evening in Mt Abu and Jai Walia had a business meeting in Nasik….on his way back he had to see some land near Mt Abu that would be worth inversting for winter cottages as part of a resort chain during the hot weather in Mumbai…as this side of the country was much cooler…having visited the land sides he had come back to his hotel..where he was staying..belonging to his friend Mohan..where Bani Dixit was doing overtime from her dayshift.

As he made his way to front desk to enquire about dinner….he had found a young yet intelligent looking girl handling a very aggressive customer…she was so calm and very very sexy in her mini skirt and long sleeve blue top…..with navy blue stockings…and hill shoes!..Being a womans man he had assessed every angle of Bani Dixit from top to bottom…..he liked infact loved what he saw

Customer: Listen lady I want that room and I wont go from here till I get it …I have made reservations for it 3 weeks before arriving…and I don't give a bloody damn it the shower is not working

Bani: Mr Rustum please understand that the room was available and would be given to you but only this mrng we had power outage in this area which has affected the left wind of the 4th building as such I cannot give u any rooms in that area

Customer: I don't want to

Bani; what I can do Mr Rustum is give u a room on our top floor that has the best scenery to the country side and we wont charge u anything more than u have already paid

A satisfied Mr Rustum had left the front reception smiling….

The girl with Bani …Kavita….heaved a sigh and said

Kavita: phew..thanks a lot Bani tum thi…subha se pareshan kardi thi yeh bhude neh…tum nahi hoti toh meh kya karti

Bani collected her stuff and smiled….Jai noticed how she didn't wince or heave a sigh just was getting ready to leave when her shift manager came up....…

Jai was having a cup of coffee as he was seated towards the back in the dining area and had a clear view of the front reception area....just far enough to hear everything

Manager: Bani im afraid rita is not in again and u have to cover her shift till 11pm…

Bani: lekin sir maine ghar par bataya nahi hai aur meri bhen pareshan hogi..a tired and desperate Bani plead…

Manager: well call and let them know…ur all that I have

Bani: slamming everything down…..shit….aaaj phir ghar pe tamasha hoga…

Kavita; sorry yaar…na meh der se ati and na tum yaha stuck hoti…

Bani: its okay putting her coat on again

From 7pm till 10.30 Jai observed how Bani had worked…taking calls…meeting guests and inbetween looking at the time….after having dinner he had subsided to the bar where he was having a whisky…felt good in this cold weather…..at 11.05pm he saw a tired Bani changed into a purple kameez and make her way out to the front…waiting for her cab….he went up to her

Jai: hi

Bani: looking at him…another guest hitting on me…not again…Hi!!

Jai: u know its very cold and raining out there u shouldn't be out here this late

Bani could see he was a guest noticing the drink in his had,….he must be close to 30 and single showing no ring on the left finger…probably looking for a bait this cold night…she got a lot of that at work…..but never had the urge to fall for anyone…but this guy…he seemed very confident…as if he would get his way…

Jai: tell u what …why don't u join me for a drink in my room and I shall ensure u being warm…giving the most sexy smile ever.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww grr88 strtt babezz...wud lovee to see wht happness naxxt wondeful.....!!! updatee soon...thnksxx hunii..
thee way u describedd th seetin i could imaginee it ....loollzz...!! ooww...do continueee ssoon...!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok im loving this...i like to see JANI on good terms...lol...the guts jai has to invite bani to his room...cant wait to see what she does...shayad ek thappar parne wala hai jai par...lol.. šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW! di.. fantastic!!

plz do continue ok..!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was great.too good.loved it.love the new style. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice story hun
plz continue soon

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