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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rooj-i

lol isha...wat is this? Jai in his death bed? 😭 nahiiiinnnnn!!!!!! 😭
Please let him feel better...
OK now you have to update soon or else...i'll start to emotionally black-mail you!!! 😆 😆 first maddi n now u...omg nahhii!!!😆
Please continue soon
Rooj

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys pretty boring update...sorry about it but ya will get interesting promise...n ya without farther delay here's the update...

part 28

bani is shocked...she cant belivie it..n sees the nurse...
bani is cryin..- wat happened to him
nurse- he is the one that saved ur life but he is very crictial n very low chances of survin..
bani- nurse plz go check him he is alone...
nurse- he fine dont worry u go bak
bani yells- no u listen to me...go bak in there....wait i will
nurse- u cant...wait here
bani- but he needs me...i have to stop him otherwise he'll leave....then i wont get to say sorry now cryin bitterly..plz n pushes the nurse...n goes in...n sees jai lyin there...n crys besides him...n goes to touch his head...but doesnt...n holds his hands....n sits n quietly crys...n very softly says "plz dont leave me"
the nurse comes in with docs...who take bani away...
bani- plz take care of him...otherwise i will die too doc plz...n faints...
bani again gets up to see its morning...n thinks jai...n starts walking...n sees he is still sleepin...n suddenly the docs r runnin inside...n wonders wats wrong...n asks the nurse who tells bani that jai is sinkin...bani falls on the floor n now cryin really loud...puts her hands together n prays refusin to leave until jai is better...rano n pushkar come n try to convice her to move but bani is sits still...
the doc comes n tells bani that if jai doesnt wake up soon he'll probbaly go into coma
bani is shocked n runs inside again n breaks down. n yells- jai...get up...i know ur listenin n punishin me...i know ur wide awake now come on get up!!!....if u dont i will break everything in ur cabin..i'll never talk to u agian!....n sits down..n holds his hands...plz jai..i'll give up drinkin forever...like promise...i'll wont be bad...at all...i'll be very nice i wont make fun of others i wont use ur credit cards without asking... PROMISE! now plz open ur eyes...n plz...n gets up...turns around n to leave when she stops to see jai is holdin her hand...a wide smile comes across her face....n looks at jai who opened his eyes
jai in a very soft voice- promise?
bani smiles...n hold his hands...n leaves
bani goes to window n opens it...the full moon is out...n see smiles....after such a long time she felt free, like she was flyin, for once she didnt have to desire to drink....for once she was happy...she was really confused as to y she was but watever the reason was she knew she wanted to last forever...she stood there maybe in hopin that somethin would happen....she looks at the stars when her door opens its the nurse who was elderly...comes up to her
nurse- my dear i think u should rest
bani- u notice how ungrateful we humans r...when the night falls n the stars come out we never even for a while stand outside to admire there beauty...we might do it sometimes but we dont really care we might just look but thats all...i bet if we knew they come once in a while we always be waitin for them...becuz we would value them more...
nurse is confused...n smiles n nods in wat she said she understood- u know i also heard something about that stars...most ppl who fall in love stare at the moon to see the reflection of the one they want to see...n give it great importance n so the stars cry to moon...on how much ppl love love the moon ...but when ppl want there desired fullfiled they wish for them to be broken...
bani smiles- n remebers how jai told her something like that on the night she met him...n both looked at the stars she was drunk but still remebered his words...u know someone told me the same thing...duffer
nurse- come now go to sleep...n leaves...wind blows in bani's hair n starts to hum
Pyar Hua Chupke Se
Yeh Kya Hua Chupke Se
n suddenly reliazes wat she said n hits her head closes her eyes..n suddenly someone kiss her on the cheek...shocked she opens her eyes..n looks around but no one...n confused holds her cheek n goes to sleep...


hope u liked it..look forward to seein bad/gud/ok comments from u guys 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww that was a great part!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Isha 😛 ,
Just caught up with your FF it is quite different 😳 and very entertaining 😆 . Jai a doctor and Bani alcoholic 😆
Hope Jai also falls in love with Bani soon and realise that 😃
Do continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Adorable Bani...poor Jai, his life will never be normal a long as she is around him...but he loves it... and now she is going to be sober!! 😆

👏

bt
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Posted: 18 years ago

OMG!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THE UPDATE!!! ahhh!!! how cute... he'z ALIVE!!! yayyyy!!! thankz isha!!! me lov ya! lolz!!! AWSOME UPDATE!

loved da part where bani yellz at the nurse and wen she goes lik promise and he goes lik promise??? OMG

ADORABLE!

me loved it!!!

plz continue soon

!*!maddi!*!

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Posted: 18 years ago
oh how cute..she loves him...and im sure he does too...he woke up!!! im so glad....

update soon yaar...

neetu
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: loranlee4u

OMG!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THE UPDATE!!! ahhh!!! how cute... he'z ALIVE!!! yayyyy!!! thankz isha!!! me lov ya! lolz!!! AWSOME UPDATE!

loved da part where bani yellz at the nurse and wen she goes lik promise and he goes lik promise??? OMG

ADORABLE!

me loved it!!!

plz continue soon

!*!maddi!*!

thanks jannu...glad u liked it...now u gotta update soon too!...n its me how could u even think about me killin jai!!! 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: melonie

Hey Isha 😛 ,
Just caught up with your FF it is quite different 😳 and very entertaining 😆 . Jai a doctor and Bani alcoholic 😆
Hope Jai also falls in love with Bani soon and realise that 😃
Do continue soon 👏

glad u liked it 😊 ya its kinda odd😆 thanks for reading

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: btkr

Adorable Bani...poor Jai, his life will never be normal a long as she is around him...but he loves it... and now she is going to be sober!! 😆

👏

bt

thanks lolz..yup bani is out to destory him isnt she😆 glad u liked it!

thanks for readin 😊

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