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Posted: 18 years ago
hey everyone sorry havent updated it in while...hope ur happy maddi now.. 😆 i was gettin threats lolz 😆here it is...hope u all like it...o ya i warnin u might all jus come after me with belans after this...

Part 27

bani is in the hospital in very critical condintion...pushkar rano...adiyta are there wonderin wats gonna happen...but is lyin there n all she can think of is jai...n has all the events flashin in her head
rano- how did u know di was injuried?
pushkar- the police found some ids in the car..
rano- was there anyone esle there?
pushkar- i dont know i jus heard bani di's name n closed the phone i think there was
rano- wat happened to the person
pushkar- i dont know like i said i didnt hear anything as i closed the phone n ran as at that point i couldnt think of anything esle..
doc- mr.dixt u r very lucky ur sister is safe now...but for some reason she is bein very hyper...so we advice u to not give her any stress when u go inside to see her
bani is still sleepin rano n pushkar go inside
rano - di
bani wakes up n looks at rano n takes off her oxygen mask...- n sits up
bani says- jai...where is jai...rano find jai...jai n trys to get up
rano- di kyon jai?? n sit down
bani- no rano we ...where is jai walia...ask the docs i need to see jai...he.. where IS HE?? n holds her head...in pain the doc comes n gives bani an injection n puts her to sleep....
rano- excuse me doc do u have a patient named jai walia here?
doc- jai walia?...hmmm....actually i dont do emerency cases those r done with a different set of docs...u might want to ask at the front desk...rano goes to the front desk
rano- excuse nurse u have any jai walia admitted in the hospital?
nurse- hmm...yes we do..omg he is very badly injuried...he was the one who brought the other injuried person into the hospital....there r very low chances for his survivin...
rano- wat u mean? like omg..thanks....n thinks in her head...di seemed so distrubed n if i tell her this she probably go crazy
pushkar- u find out about jai walia?
rano- omg he saved di...n now is on his death bed should we tell her?
pushkar- well i dont think we should but i think if we dont tell her anything she'll go out of control...lets jus tell her he is fine n
rano - wat if he dies?
pushkar- dont say that..lets jus pray for his fast recovery
bani is sleepin n suddenly wakes up again- n thinks jai...i hope he i ok...he got into this mess becuz of me..if i hadnt taken him to that place he'd never...omg...i have to find him..he is mad at me too...omg...god plz let him be alright
rano- o di ur up
bani- rano u find out about jai?
pushkar- yes he is..fine..he is in a different hospital though
bani- y is he crictal?
rano- no ur crictal...n u need rest..we'll personally take u to him ok
bani smiles- ok..n thinks thank u god...jai is ok...i knew nothing happen to him...
pushkar- but di y r u so concerned?
bani- pushkar...cuz one he saved my life...n 2 he is a very gud frand n 3...
rano- n 3rd....
bani- nothing...thats about it...but u know that duffer is like fine...n doesnt even bother to call me n ask me if i am ok...u know when i see him i will have a really big fight with him!

night time...bani lays on her bed...n thinks about jai...n how she met him...n looks outside..n its raining n remebers how she met him n it rained...how badly drunk she was...poor dude was so annoyed..n smiles n thinks...wats happenin to me y the hell am i so concern am i fallin in love with jai? but he is cute, sort of funny, a compelete duffer doesnt know anything well besides his medical stuff, no fashion sense..kinda tall... hmm...so do i like him...sits up...n turns her feet n stands up...n walks well limps to the window...n opens it..n the wind goes through her hair...n puts her hand out to feel the rain...n smiles...n thinks bani ur losin it...u cant be in love with jai...n walks to her bed...n suddenly sees jai smilin...
bani- jai tum!! now ur comin i am very mad!
jai- sorry...
bani - y r u here...i mean how u get here? i thought u were in the hospital...means u didnt get injuried at all did u?
jai- well how could i leave without sayin bye?
bani- bye? leavin where u going
jai- no where speacial..
bani- if i tell u to stop will u?
jai gets up goes towards her kisses bani on the forehead...n says...maybe...n take care
bani shocked...- jai? wait... n suddenly a big blow of wind comes..omg..stay here.. let me close the window..

bani closes the window...n turns around- jai??? n looks around n doesnt seem him n is shocked...goes in the hall...n starts walkin around callin jai's name...n comes to the ICU...n there shocked she sees jai!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rooj-i

😆 😆 😆 great part isha!!!
👏
Now bring Jai and Bani together and forget TB angle...
Please continue soon
Rooj

thanks for readin rooji-bear!!!....n ya i am gettin there with the JB angle 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
omg....dnt tell me u r going to kill him
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he said bye........ u cnt kill him like that..
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u cnt kill that nice doc jai....... go n kill tarun if u want to kill sum1
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol isha...wat is this? Jai in his death bed? 😭 nahiiiinnnnn!!!!!! 😭
Please let him feel better...
OK now you have to update soon or else...i'll start to emotionally black-mail you!!! 😆 😆
Please continue soon
Rooj
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lil_isha15

hey everyone sorry havent updated it in while...hope ur happy maddi now.. 😆VERYYY HAPPY! good thing the so called "silent treatment" worked eh?😆 i was gettin threats lolz 😆here it is...hope u all like it...o ya i warnin u might all jus come after me with belans after this... uh-oh ishaaa... wat'd u do??? narrowes eyes😆

Part 27

bani is in the hospital in very critical condintion...pushkar rano...adiyta are there wonderin wats gonna happen...but is lyin there n all she can think of is jaiawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how sweett!!!...n has all the events flashin in her head
rano- how did u know di was injuried?
pushkar- the police found some ids in the car..
rano- was there anyone esle there?
pushkar- i dont know i jus heard bani di's name n closed the phone i think there was
rano- wat happened to the person
pushkar- i dont know like i said i didnt hear anything as i closed the phone n ran as at that point i couldnt think of anything esle..
doc- mr.dixt u r very lucky ur sister is safe now...but for some reason she is bein very hyperlolz hyper! lolz!...so we advice u to not give her any stress when u go inside to see her
bani is still sleepin rano n pushkar go inside
rano - di
bani wakes up n looks at rano n takes off her oxygen mask...- n sits up
bani says- jai...where is jai...rano find jai...jai n trys to get up
rano- di kyon jai?? n sit down
bani- no rano we ...where is jai walia...ask the docs i need to see jai...he.. where IS HE??omg how cute!!! n holds her head...in pain the doc comes n gives bani an injection n puts her to sleep....
rano- excuse me doc do u have a patient named jai walia here?
doc- jai walia?...hmmm....actually i dont do emerency cases those r done with a different set of docs...u might want to ask at the front desk...rano goes to the front desk
rano- excuse nurse u have any jai walia admitted in the hospital?
nurse- hmm...yes we do..omg he is very badly injuried...he was the one who brought the other injuried person into the hospital....there r very low chances for his survivin...OMG NOOOO
rano- wat u mean? like omg..thankslolz "like omg! thankz" lolz....n thinks in her head...di seemed so distrubed n if i tell her this she probably go crazy
pushkar- u find out about jai walia?
rano- omg he saved di...n now is on his death bed should we tell her?
pushkar- well i dont think we should but i think if we dont tell her anything she'll go out of control...lets jus tell her he is fine n
rano - wat if he dies? NOOO HE WILL NOT!
pushkar- dont say that..lets jus pray for his fast recovery
bani is sleepin n suddenly wakes up again- n thinks jai...i hope he i ok...he got into this mess becuz of me..if i hadnt taken him to that place he'd never...omg...i have to find him..he is mad at me too...omg...god plz let him be alright ishhaaa... wat happened to jai???
rano- o di ur up
bani- rano u find out about jai?
pushkar- yes he is..fine..he is in a different hospital though
bani- y is he crictal?
rano- no ur crictal...n u need rest..we'll personally take u to him ok
bani smiles- ok..n thinks thank u god...jai is ok...i knew nothing happen to him... ahem! ... .????
pushkar- but di y r u so concerned?
bani- pushkar...cuz one he saved my life...n 2 he is a very gud frand n 3...
rano- n 3rd....
bani- nothing...thats about itnoooo and u LOVE HIMMMMM 😳...but u know that duffer is like fine...n doesnt even bother to call me n ask me if i am ok...u know when i see him i will have a really big fight with him!

night time...bani lays on her bed...n thinks about jai...n how she met him...n looks outside..n its raining n remebers how she met him n it rained...how badly drunk she was...poor dude was so annoyed..n smiles n thinks...wats happenin to me y the hell am i so concern am i fallin in love with jai?yesh uuu rrr but he is cute, sort of funny, a compelete duffer doesnt know anything well besides his medical stuff, no fashion sense..kinda tall... hmm...so do i like him...sits up...n turns her feet n stands up...n walks well limps to the window...n opens it..n the wind goes through her hair...n puts her hand out to feel the rain...n smiles...n thinks bani ur losin it...u cant be in love with jaiyesh u can!...n walks to her bed...n suddenly sees jai smilin...
bani- jai tum!! now ur comin i am very mad!
jai- sorry... hes alive!!!!!
bani - y r u here...i mean how u get here? i thought u were in the hospital...means u didnt get injuried at all did u?
jai- well how could i leave without sayin bye?
bani- bye? leavin where u going
jai- no where speacial..
bani- if i tell u to stop will u?
jai gets up goes towards her kisses bani on the forehead...n says...maybe...n take care
bani shocked...- jai? wait... n suddenly a big blow of wind comes..omg..stay here.. let me close the window..

bani closes the window...n turns around- jai??? n looks around n doesnt seem him n is shocked...goes in the hall...n starts walkin around callin jai's name...n comes to the ICU...n there shocked she sees jai! o. m. g!!!!!! omg lemme go talk to u in msn!!!

Okai back... yell mi fingers hurt from rytin AHHH on msn... lolz !! soo got the yellin part over with! OMG OMG OMG!!! IS JAI GONNA BE OKAI?! WAT is dis isha! u tell me dat i started puttin sad parts in mi FF (u no the sepa. part) yea and now ur puttin Saddy partz!!!!! WHYYYY!!!???? lolz...

btw LOVE DA UPDATE 😆

atleast mi babby boo is still alive...??? ryt??? he isnt gona die ryt? isha.. he ISNT gonna DIEEEE ryt???????? lolz

okaii bye isha [on msn]

now back to the commentz!!

Wonderfull Update!! Yayyy bani dear loves Jai!!! OKAII im totally gettin a new hope here... hehehe,.... yup mi hopez are going whooooooooooooooooo here... lolz totally excited fer the next update!!

AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME update!!!

loved it too pieces! lolz

i hope Jai getz better😊 cuz me no he IS stayin alive... HE HAS TOOOO..... ryt isha😃? ryT? ryt? ryt?

okai sorry bout that... okai back to mi normal self... sorry got a lil Hyper over there... lolz...

so yea!!

continue soon!!!

lov yaaa!!!

maddi... see ya (pm/email/ msn) soon...

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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part.
Jai is critical....Bani found out.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
please dont kill jai off other wise Im gone go mad 😡 😡
and come with a belan after u please please dont kill him
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwww that is so intense part she realising of her love for jai please dont kill him let them unite and fall in love
lil_isha15 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: perveen

please dont kill jai off other wise Im gone go mad 😡 😡
and come with a belan after u please please dont kill him

u wont be the only with after me with a belan😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: loranlee4u

Okai back... yell mi fingers hurt from rytin AHHH on msn... lolz !! soo got the yellin part over with! OMG OMG OMG!!! IS JAI GONNA BE OKAI?! WAT is dis isha!i dont know (showin puppy eyes) u tell me dat i started puttin sad parts in mi FF (u no the sepa. part) yea and now ur puttin Saddy partz!!!!! WHYYYY!!!???? lolz...thodi khusi thodi gham😆 😆

btw LOVE DA UPDATE 😆thanks alot

atleast mi babby boo is still alive...??? ryt??? he isnt gona die ryt? isha.. he ISNT gonna DIEEEE ryt???????? lolz hmmm...u'll find out soon

okaii bye isha [on msn]

now back to the commentz!!

Wonderfull Update!! Yayyy bani dear loves Jai!!! OKAII im totally gettin a new hope here... hehehe,.... yup mi hopez are going whooooooooooooooooo here... lolz totally excited fer the next update!! thanks alot tafi!

AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME update!!!

loved it too pieces! lolz

i hope Jai getz better😊 cuz me no he IS stayin alive... HE HAS TOOOO..... ryt isha😃? ryT? ryt? ryt? maybe lolz😆

okai sorry bout that... okai back to mi normal self... sorry got a lil Hyper over there... lolz...its ok...happens 😆

so yea!!

continue soon!!!

lov yaaa!!!

maddi... see ya (pm/email/ msn) soon... okie dokies😉

thanks for likin it maddi!!!

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