ff-Tumse Mil Ke updated!! Final part g46 - Page 25

Originally posted by: rooj-i

hi there,(sorry don't know your name, a newbie...)
Absolutely amazing! 👏
that's all i can say...
and thanks for such wonderful story to keep us entertain! 👏
It's among my Fav. and bookmarked on my comp. just to let you know... 😳 even though i'm new but have been a silent reader till now...😳
thanx again! hope you continue soon!
rooj-i

awwww thanks alot...my name is isha 😊 glad u liked it

Originally posted by: mandu

I just read all the 22 parts at one go and Im in such a sorry state....my eyes are red from all the laughing i did....tears of laughter and joy u see 😆 and I actually fell off my chair once....absolutely different and rocking...pls write the next part soon..
mandu

o i am sorry for makin u get to such a state 😆 but glad to hear u liked my fanfic 😊 n i hope ur ok...fallin off chair that hurts n i know 😆

Originally posted by: inavars

aww...jai and bani are so cute!!! and bani's hilarious 😆

yaar...update soon...don't procrastinate like me 😆

i got exams but try to update soon!😊

everyone thanks for all ur comments..hahah i have exams but i havent even started studyin well actually i was kinda sick n tired...so thought y not update n ya hope u all like it 😊


part 23
jai drops bani home...n wonders wats wrong with him? y is he so concerned for this crazy woman who he cant stand for even a mintue...but stil he goes n searchs for her...n his moblie phone rings..
jai- yes i dropped her home dont worry about it she'll never know...but u know i dont feel right doing this...she already crazy wat will happen if she finds out? o fine watever..n puts the phone down n thinks plz forgive me bani...i dont know wat i was thinkin when i agreed to this...
bani is sittin on her bed n thinks...maybe i shouldnt use jai...jus to teach that tarun a lesson...but...he its not jus for me...well maybe it is..but only a frand helps a frand ya...i will help jai find his true love...n that way...i'll help him n he'll help me!! n that tarun can go to hell...for dumpin me how dare he? n picks up her phone n starts dialing numbers.....
the next day...jai comes to his cabin n everything is normal...as his cabin is already a mess...meanin bani has been there...n the nurses r scared meanin she walkin around...n soon she come into his cabin callin him a duffer or some new word she might of learned...
bani- u idot! where have u been? waitin for an half hour
jai- idot...hmmm new name contiue...y were u waitin?
bani- ok ok...so fine...not hubby n wife...we'll say boyfriend ok...tarun is an idot anyways...he'll belivie basically anything..n ya hubby n wife i cant wear saris n dont u even think of sayin no to me cuz...u promised me u would help me!
jai- arghhh ur impossible...but i am too busy y not get someone else? it be better for u...but watever...n levaes
bani- arghhh i wish he'd actually think for once..but i guess i have to do that...n suddnely gets an idea...n smiles...n picks up the phone...jai gets called to head office...n its doc.rai
doc.rai- jai i am so glad finally u want to a break...well ur break apporved..now for 2months i better not see u around here..i personally wanted to tell u
jai confused- but i didnt ask for a break
doc.R- nonsenese ur frand...wats her name...Bani...called n said u asked but didnt have time so she is requestin it on ur behave...i thought it was great so didnt question her..
jai hits his head- well thank u...n leaves..n bani is standin out side smiling
bani- so mr.walia i heard ur on break now...so means u wont be doin anything...well i jus found out...taran went to Goa...so were goin there...n ya i already booked the tickets...were leavin today
jai is speechless- hey u didnt have to...
bani - dont worry i told them to charge u....so go home n pack come on!
bani leaves...n jai is standin there...smilin n shakin his head..
couple of hours later
bani n jai arrive in Goa its pretty late...n both come to the hotel...which is the best hotel in goa all money comin from jai's side...n grabs the keys n with jai to his room
jai- ok thanks i think i can open the door...
bani- move...opens the door...n puts her stuff down n smiles
jai- am i in the wrong room?
bani smiles breaks- duffer...no..ur stayin here too..were sharing...this have taran burnin inside...
jai- no way...u gotta go
bani- no i dont have to...u can if u like...
jai signs- fine but i am gettin the bed...n dont expect me to sleep on the sofa...or floor
bani-...well i am not either...n jumps in the bed.....takes pillows makes line up in the middle of the bed...dont u dare touch me..n ya u can sleep that side me sleep this side...its a king size bed...i think we can mange..unless u like the floor or sofas...but ya gud night...n smiles..
jai is still standin there in amazement..n thinks wat is she made out of?...like man...she is crazy...but i cant sleep on the same bed...n goes to see her peacefully sleepin...n puts the blanket on her...grabs the pillow...puts in on the sofa...n remembers bani the first time he met...how she was all drunk n smiles...n thinks maybe this wont be so bad...n falls alseep...


hope u all liked it 😊

oh so sweet...i wonder wat will she think wen she sees in the morning that jai sleeping on the sofa... im sure she will feel guilty...lol
wat is jai upto...is he on tarun's side? wat is he hiding from bani...
update soon

neetu

awww...cute yaar! 😳 😳
i love it 👏 👏 👏
i'm going to wait and see what happens next...hope Bani realize all this in the morning...lol 😉 😆 😆
keep it coming... 👏 👏 👏
rooj 😛

awwww....that was such a sweet part ishu!!! 😳 😳 😛

bani's hilarious...don't worry...i told them to charge you 😆 😆

i love the last scene....so cute! And Jai...what a gentleman...he won't sleep on the same bed 😉 😆

Good Luck on your exams hun!! I'm sure you'll do great 👍🏼

Continue soon 😛

ishu!
thanks for continuing!
dono taraf pyaar hone wala hai!!!!!

hey Jannu! I hav to leave fast but gonna leave a comment b4 i go...
AWSOME! ooo i wonder wat Jai is hiding!!!
Great! Great! Great Update!!!!
Loved it!
OOOO they are in the same room! OMG isha! Ur gettin mi BP high! LOLZ!
uPDATE aSaP!
i couldnt come online todaii on IF tat much... i didnt even update mines! lolz.. 😆 gonna hav to update the first thing tomorrow! lolz!

Cant wait to read part 24!
Continue Soon,
I guess its not much of a short comment is it? lolz... see i just cant stop talkin /// rytin to u! LOLZ!

okaii me gonna get into trouble now... gotta run!

LOV YA!
MADDI

thanks for readin everyone i update soon!! 😃