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Posted: 18 years ago
sorries for the delay i know it took forever! but before it was schoool n then i got really busy cuz of christmas i'll try to update soon! thanks for ur before comments 😊


Part 22
bani- jai ab kya hoga!! this is all ur fault!! ahhhhhhh
jai- my fault...bani dont get me started!
n suddnely a nurse comes in with krish n jai n bani r too busy fightin to notice
nurse- excuse me is this kid urs?
both look at the nurse n the kid n yell no...n keep on fightin the nurse leaves n both stop n look at one another
jai/bani- wait NO STOP KRISH!!!!!
n finally jai runs n gets krish bak...n suddenly bumps into tarun!
tarun- o u found ur kid
jai- no he;s not my kid...n that woman...
tarun- bani....
jai-how do u know her?
tarun- actually...i have known her n suddnely bani comes
bani- JAI honey u found the kid....hey tarun
tarun- u both r so weird...both refuse to be parents of this kid..n then now refuse to be husband n wife
bani- hahahhaa who refused?? jai is jus jokin he has some memory loss problem n forgot to take his medince let me go feed it to him...n takes jai to his cabin!
jai-wat the hell is goin...he sounded like he knew u...wats goin on?? n dont u even try to lie
bani- welll....actually...he does...dont yell...jus that...he's my ex-boyfriend he said..that i couldnt get married or settle down has no one will f?all for me...but HAH i showed him u see his face...n u know wat i heard he is going out with this new girl...how could he....move on so fast
jai- well u know he is kinda right...(laughs) ur still n not settle...n i am not helpin u out anymore...jus reliazed i was on the evil side
bani- JAI NO...ur gonna help me or i'll never talk to u again!
jai- really? thank god...ok now i wont change my mind..n leaves smiling...
bani is all mad..n thinks wat will she do now? how is suppose to teach that tarun a lesson now for leavin me? but before that how do i convince this duffer n suddnely an idea pops in to her head n she leaves happily
the next day jai going towards cabin..thinkin another day...n she probably siitin on my desk like always n start complainin about something god help me.....jai goes n for once his cabin is closed which suprises him..n wonders..y...he opens it to see no bani...n thinks maybe he is early today...looks at his clock its 8 n she always here for atleast an hour...as her office starts at 9...n thinks maybe she over slept...n its 12 now n lunch time..still no bani...he goes to pushkar's room where he's eatin n asks him but pushkar tells him that he hasnt seen bani either...now jai wonders...n its 5 almost time for bani's office to close but she isnt here still...now gettin worried as where is she? n then rethinks as y is he gettin so worrrid...its ok if she didnt come one day she has a life...jai walks up n down his cabin holdin his phone wonderin if he should call her or not? n then takes his phone dials her house number n rano picks up...who tells her she isnt home yet...again jai looks at the clock now is 8...n thinks of again callin...but cant as wat will her ppl in her house think....n sits down..but cant concentrate on his work...n finally gets up n leaves...n before he knows it he is infront of bani's house...n knocks...n again rano opens the door n sees jai n is suprised....
rano smiles - didi is gone to some party...i know ur worried so here's the address now i know whose been blank callin me all day long n laughs...jai is embrassed n leaves when rano calls him...mr.walia i am glad there is atleast someone other than di family that cares for her...jai smiles...n enters the club...n looks around...n finally hits him...n goes to the bar to see a girl in a white...dress....sittin on the stool drunk...n talkin to the drunk guy next to her...
jai- bani wat the hell r u doin?
bani looks up- jai? wat r u doin here....u started drinkin too?
jai annnoyed- come lets get out of here!
bani- nope!!..i am mad at u ...i dont like u...u refuse to help a friend in need u have to promise to help me n then only then will i bani dixit move!!!
jai- ur impossible ur drunk...come dont be stubborn! n picks bani up...n takes her out where she screams sayin she wont leave! n jai takes his hand n put it over her mouth tellin her to shut up..n she does..n bani gets mad n starts walkin! n jai right behind...
bani- stocker!!! stop followin me!! go away i dont like u! jai annoyed grabs her n turns her around n tells her help her...n bani smiles..n tells her to stay right here as in this place...not 20miles from here..he'll go get his car n drop her home...n leaves
n bani sits n puts her sandals on n smiles...n thinks yes i did it..i never thought this duffer would help but who can ever stay away from bani's jadoo...now tarun...watch out! n sorry jai...n smiles!

hope u all liked it 😊
Edited by lil_isha15 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lil_isha15

sorries for the delay i know it took forever! but before it was schoool n then i got really busy cuz of christmas i'll try to update soon! thanks for ur before comments 😊 np! nething fer mi dale!

Part 21

jai n bani both go shopping...bani is going crazy over the shoes n dresseshehehe just lik me... lmao! but jai finally puts a leash on her well not really he basically is holdin her handawww wat an excuse jai... to hold bani's hand! so she doesnt run off like she did every time he turned around....finally both come to a boutique bani doesnt like anyone of them execpt a few which jai doesnt like...finally he picks a really simple blue one..which bani refuses but then remembers the condintion that jai picked her clothes n takes it....bani takes it to the changeroom...n tells him that she wear this sari n impress Tarun...execpt when she goes to the changeroom she doesnt know how?....
bani- ahhhh jai!! i need ur help!!
jai cant enter the woman's changeroom n yells from outside...i cant come inside if u havent reliazed ur a woman n i am man n i cant enter.... heheheheheheh!
bani- jus sneak in...no is gonna care naughty bani!
jai- funny y dont u go to the men change room instead if no one is gonna care!
bani- jai plz....do something!! i am basically stuck!!
there r some women behind jai who r listenin n tell him to go ahead as they wont telllmao! okaii... i will not tell either 😉...jai thanks them n goes in but isnt sure where bani is n doesnt want to scare the women inside...n so he whispers bani's name n bani pokes her head out of one of the rooms n calls jai... silly bani!
jai standin outside -ok so wats the problem
bani- well the whole thing!! i cant get the pallo n the thing all around...n everything i hate saris who the hell made them was really dumb!! tell me bout it! all i can wear is jeans and pants and shirts... lmao... but then again im onli 14 😆
jai- ok calm down...start all over again n soon he goes through the directions but bani still doesnt get it the ladies that let jai in r laughin so rude!
jai- bani darlinahhhhhh!! he said DARLIN! he said DARLIN! plz hurry up as the women here r laughin at me as i am teachin u how to tie a sari!!!
bani- shut up n tell them to...well u dont shut up n n finally comes out lookin very nice in the blue sari n all the ladies there praise jai for his exllecent instrutions bani gets annoyed n pulls him out of the change roomis sum1 jealouse?...both r sittin in the car
bani sees ice-cream stand.- STOP JAI STOP!!!
jai- wat happened....n bani doesnt answer n runs to the stand..jai sees n thinks oh great...
bani goes...n stands there wonderin wat to get...n sees a lil kid..about 2 years old..n also lookin at the ice-cream..so she picks him up n gets him on too..but looks around n sees where his mom or dad is...she goes around n asks ppl but no one answers...n she looks at the kid n thinks how can i jus leave him here..hmmm i take him with me...n goes bak in the car with the kid...n jai is shocked!
jai- omg whose kid did u steal now?AHAHAHAHAHA n wat r u doin this time? plz i beg u go return the kid
bani- shut up i didnt steal him he was lost n so i brought how could i jus leave him out like that u duffer...n he is sooo cute..lets call him...ahh...tony!
jai- eww tony thats my butler's name plz...hmm..krish
bani- krish..hmmm nice name..ok how do u like ur name krishu? n the kid smiles...
jai smiles n starts the car...n soon it stops again as there is a traffic jam...bani tell jai she is gonna go see n takes krish with her...n goes n soon starts arguin with the traffic guard noticin bani's been gone a while jai goes to find her again...n sees her agrugin
jai- excuse me wats happen..bani wat u do now?
officier- plz take ur wife away even though the problem causin the traffic is solved now she is stoppin the traffic so
jai- first of all she isnt my... n more honks n beeps jai lifts bani even though she is screamin n in full figthin mode bak to the car...
n finally both sit in there...n jai ties his hands togther n says
jai- plz i wont help u if u keep this up!!
bani- fine sorrry but stil it wasnt my fault now drive fast n take me to tarun!!
jai n bani arrive at the hopsital...bani in a sari holdin a kid...n tarun comes along
tarun- hey jai i didnt know u were married n had a kid too...n no wonder u were tellin me she was pain ahahah she is ur wife
jai n bani- KYA!!!!!!!
bani- no i am not his...n before she can finish tarun leaves
bani starts cryin- jai u idot see wat u did omg!! now how will convince him
jai- my fault whose great idea of the bringin the kid n by the way where is he?
bani- right beside...looks n krish isnt there....me....ahhh i lost the lost kid!!!! JAI!!!!!
jai- dont worry lets go look aroun he cant go too far...
bani- this is the worst day ever!! ab kya hoga!!

Part 22
bani- jai ab kya hoga!! this is all ur fault!! ahhhhhhh
jai- my fault...bani dont get me started!
n suddnely a nurse comes in with krish n jai n bani r too busy fightin to notice
nurse- excuse me is this kid urs?
both look at the nurse n the kid n yell no...n keep on fightin the nurse leaves n both stop n look at one another
jai/bani- wait NO STOP KRISH!!!!!
n finally jai runs n gets krish bak...n suddenly bumps into tarun!
tarun- o u found ur kid
jai- no he;s not my kid...n that woman...
tarun- bani....
jai-how do u know her?
tarun- actually...i have known her n suddnely bani comes
bani- JAI honey u found the kid....hey tarun
tarun- u both r so weird...both refuse to be parents of this kid..n then now refuse to be husband n wife
bani- hahahhaa who refused?? jai is jus jokin he has some memory loss problem n forgot to take his medince let me go feed it to him...n takes jai to his cabin! ISHA... soo rude... now ur makin jai b sum mental retard?
jai-wat the hell is goin...he sounded like he knew u...wats goin on?? n dont u even try to lie
bani- welll....actually...he does...dont yell...jus that...he's my ex-boyfriend he said..that i couldnt get married or settle down has no one will f?all for me...but HAH i showed him u see his face...n u know wat i heard he is going out with this new girl...how could he....move on so fast
jai- well u know he is kinda right...(laughs) ur still n not settle...n i am not helpin u out anymore...jus reliazed i was on the evil side awww poor bani...
bani- JAI NO...ur gonna help me or i'll never talk to u again!
jai- really? thank god...ok now i wont change my mind..n leaves smiling... shocked!
bani is all mad..n thinks wat will she do now? how is suppose to teach that tarun a lesson now for leavin me? but before that how do i convince this duffer n suddnely an idea pops in to her head n she leaves happily
the next day jai going towards cabin..thinkin another day...n she probably siitin on my desk like always n start complainin about something god help me.....jai goes n for once his cabin is closed which suprises him..n wonders..y...he opens it to see no bani...n thinks maybe he is early today...looks at his clock its 8 n she always here for atleast an hour...as her office starts at 9...n thinks maybe she over slept...n its 12 now n lunch time..still no bani...is mi baby missin bani?he goes to pushkar's room where he's eatin n asks him but pushkar tells him that he hasnt seen bani either...now jai wonders...n its 5 almost time for bani's office to close but she isnt here still...now gettin worried as where is she? n then rethinks as y is he gettin so worrrid...its ok if she didnt come one day she has a life...jai walks up n down his cabin holdin his phone wonderin if he should call her or not? n then takes his phone dials her house number n rano picks up...who tells her she isnt home yet...again jai looks at the clock now is 8...n thinks of again callin...but cant as wat will her ppl in her house think....n sits down..but cant concentrate on his work...n finally gets up n leaves...n before he knows it he is infront of bani's house...n knocks...n again rano opens the door n sees jai n is suprised....
rano smiles - didi is gone to some party...i know ur worried so here's the address now i know whose been blank callin me all day long n laughs...jai is embrassed hahahahah n leaves when rano calls him...mr.walia i am glad there is atleast someone other than di family that cares for her...jai smiles...n enters the club...n looks around...n finally hits him...n goes to the bar to see a girl in a white...dress....sittin on the stool drunk...n talkin to the drunk guy next to her...
jai- bani wat the hell r u doin?
bani looks up- jai? wat r u doin here....u started drinkin too?
jai annnoyed- come lets get out of here!
bani- nope!!..i am mad at u ...i dont like u...u refuse to help a friend in need u have to promise to help me n then only then will i bani dixit move!!! there u go! b stubborn! just lik me and dale!
jai- ur impossible ur drunk...come dont be stubborn! n picks bani up...n takes her out where she screams sayin she wont leave! n jai takes his hand n put it over her mouth tellin her to shut up..n she does..n bani gets mad n starts walkin! n jai right behind...
bani- stocker!!! stop followin me!! lmao! omg dis remindz me of sum1 😳go away i dont like u! jai annoyed grabs her n turns her around n tells her help her...n bani smiles..n tells her to stay right here as in this place...not 20miles from here..he'll go get his car n drop her home...n leaves
n bani sits n puts her sandals on n smiles...n thinks yes i did it..i never thought this duffer would help but who can ever stay away from bani's jadoo...now tarun...watch out! n sorry jai...n smiles! nd tats y we call him duffer sweeto!

hope u all liked it LOVED IT SWEETY! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
third 😆
i feel like im givin attendance here yaar 😆
grt part
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Jai and bani now should start getting close
You know what I mean 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
very nice update...love this ff...jai is worried for bani...aww...he is falling for her..i think or he is too used to having a bugging, chirpy parrot around him...lol

update soon
neetu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!!! Bani is way tooo much..... hahahahahahahaha

its awesome buddy.... 👏

tum itne diin bad kyun update karti hoon???

plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww...jai and bani are so cute!!! and bani's hilarious 😆

yaar...update soon...don't procrastinate like me 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
I just read all the 22 parts at one go and Im in such a sorry state....my eyes are red from all the laughing i did....tears of laughter and joy u see 😆 and I actually fell off my chair once....absolutely different and rocking...pls write the next part soon..
mandu
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Posted: 18 years ago
well loved this part
he is indeed falling for her
continue soon
waiting for next parts
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi there,(sorry don't know your name, a newbie...)
Absolutely amazing! 👏
that's all i can say...
and thanks for such wonderful story to keep us entertain! 👏
It's among my Fav. and bookmarked on my comp. just to let you know... 😳 even though i'm new but have been a silent reader till now...😳
thanx again! hope you continue soon!
rooj-i

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