FF: AGAINST ALL ODDS - COMPLETE - Page 4

jai in swim suit haila me gonna faint 😳

Originally posted by: sabsj

thanks taz, i try adding in the tattoo too .................. am glad u like the difference ........... continue dreaming & swimming alongside a thinner jai. will continue soon.

love...sabs

now there's an image to drool over Taz - JW in a tattoo with the stud and those smoldering eyes!!! no grey streak though ok!!! 😛

sabsj so glad you started up again, i'm waiting for the next part - you better make it soon, i know how to blackmail you ok - all i need to do is send a certain barber after you instead!!! 😆

love you lots hun, keep it up! 🤗

just read part 2 - and you say i load up the suspense, ab tum kya kar rahi ho?!!! 😆

oh, and the wire-rimmed glasses, very sexy touch!! 😉

Originally posted by: Vedo

that was an awesome start sabsj 😃
Jai Walia...in a swimsuit..with a stud...haila!!! 😳
plzz continue soon!

hey vedo, thanks dear .............. u missed the tatoo ....... check out chapter 2 and let me know what u think of his tatooed arm ........... haila na ............... it seems only jw in the pool with his ear stud and swimsuit has caught everybody's attention, no one cares about bani in a bikini nor do they care about what i wrote 😆 😆 😆 thik hai jai ka raj hain

Originally posted by: sweetu144

👏 👏 👏
My, my so your back again huh?? ...i am not complaining!!!😆 😆 !!
What can i say but THANK YOU for writing another ff...the first part was very interesting....and was also well written!!
Just amazing!!
I do hope that you'll continue soon as i eagerly look forward to the second part!!!
La premire partie tait trs bonne !!!SVP continue soon!!
Luv ya
Sweetu
P.S. pls do continue soon!

hey sweetu, merci beaucoup.

glad to hear from u dear, am glad u liked chapter 1 ........ i should thank u guys for all the encouragement u provide, really makes the thinking and the writing fun ............. i hope i can continue to hold ur interest .....

have already posted chapter 2 ......... will continue with the rest soon.

love....sabs

Originally posted by: coolkidpoo

jai in swim suit haila me gonna faint 😳

nahin please do not faint ........ phir mera ff kaun padega, i need u to be in ur senses 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Cordelia

now there's an image to drool over Taz - JW in a tattoo with the stud and those smoldering eyes!!! no grey streak though ok!!! 😛

sabsj so glad you started up again, i'm waiting for the next part - you better make it soon, i know how to blackmail you ok - all i need to do is send a certain barber after you instead!!! 😆

love you lots hun, keep it up! 🤗

just read part 2 - and you say i load up the suspense, ab tum kya kar rahi ho?!!! 😆

oh, and the wire-rimmed glasses, very sexy touch!! 😉

hey cords, welcome to my world of fiction, no bird poop on jai's head ...... a definite no no ......... loved the way u described him ....... actually paused for a minute before i continued writing

see u did not even have to blackmail me ........... u demanded i complied .......... after all barber and roshni ke flicks ka sawal hain ....... i would not want to loose out on that 😆

as for loading up the suspense in part 2 ............ aapke sangat ka asar hain ............ have become very filmy too in ur company so blame urself 😆 now when i get my instalment, u will get urs ............ fair and square............ ball is in ur court now

i loved the glasses too ................ hot i would say ..........😉

Wow...the second part had me thinking harder... tattoo...pool...stud... ab aur kya baaki hai... 😳 😳 😳
I'm just sooo in my dreamland.... 😳
She's having trouble striking a conversation...and who is this guy... kuch bolega ya bas looks will kill...not that I mind.... 😳 😳 😳
Loved it.... 👏
and 🤗🤗🤗 u know what this is for...

Poo

ohh sabs thanx for the dedication, it was exactly what i wanted!!
Just thinking about jai with that tattoo, earing maybe riding a motorbike and all my dreams have been fulfilled!! 😳
Loved the glasses too
Bani's thoughts are soo funny 😆
Plz continue soon, im eagerly awaiting the next part

Lots of Luv

Taz

Originally posted by: sabsj

hey cords, welcome to my world of fiction, no bird poop on jai's head ...... a definite no no ......... loved the way u described him ....... actually paused for a minute before i continued writing

see u did not even have to blackmail me ........... u demanded i complied .......... after all barber and roshni ke flicks ka sawal hain ....... i would not want to loose out on that 😆

as for loading up the suspense in part 2 ............ aapke sangat ka asar hain ............ have become very filmy too in ur company so blame urself 😆 now when i get my instalment, u will get urs ............ fair and square............ ball is in ur court now

i loved the glasses too ................ hot i would say ..........😉

😲 aisi baat hai? ab kuch na kuch toh karna hi padega!! 😉

wow!! chap. 2 was awesome too!! 👏
that tatto is...hailaaaa!!! 😳 😳 😃 i love it!!
plzz continue soon! 😉