FF: AGAINST ALL ODDS - COMPLETE - Page 3

Originally posted by: putturani

Kahani mein twist hai...is it from Kareena Kareena?

nahin nahin, aise hi dialogue maar rahi thi, i was copying ekta 😆

Hey Sabsj,😊

I love your writing. even the last one you wrote was really good.👏👏 I am more like a silent reader. Anyways, this time i wanted to take time out and appreciate writers like you and like you said, encourage you guys to write better.👏

Like tazmanian wrote, I like the stud in Jai,😉 gives a whole new perspective to look at him from😆. Although studs look good only on some people, EVERYTHING looks good on Jai!😃😆😆!!!!

JUST to share with all of you, Ram Kapoor is one of those guys whom you just like LOOKING AT FOR A LONG TIME!!😉😃!!😆

Anyways, keep it up, weill be awaiting next part.

Lots of Love,😃

KP

Originally posted by: keshp15

Hey Sabsj,😊

I love your writing. even the last one you wrote was really good.👏👏 I am more like a silent reader. Anyways, this time i wanted to take time out and appreciate writers like you and like you said, encourage you guys to write better.👏

Like tazmanian wrote, I like the stud in Jai,😉 gives a whole new perspective to look at him from😆. Although studs look good only on some people, EVERYTHING looks good on Jai!😃😆😆!!!!

JUST to share with all of you, Ram Kapoor is one of those guys whom you just like LOOKING AT FOR A LONG TIME!!😉😃!!😆

Anyways, keep it up, weill be awaiting next part.

Lots of Love,😃

KP

hey kp, thanks a lot dear, that was really encouraging especially when one of the readers takes the trouble to give some feedback it makes it really worth the while, otherwise most just read and leave it at that so it it difficult to guage as to whether u r writing stuff worth reading or not.

i too like what i pictured in my mind, that is why i thought a small stud in one ear would look really cool especially since the way he has been looking of late ........... lean mean machine 😉 u r absolutely right, just about everything would suit our handsom hunk .............

thanks once again for your kind words, will definitely try to keep u engrossed. will update tomorrow.

love......sabs

Aha. I'm glad u wrote another fanfic....
n a great fanfic for that matter...the begining is awsome...n u know na ...well begun is half done... 😉
I loved the new version of both...imagining them ...actually him...in the gym... hhhmmmmm..... 😳 ...now I'm back from my dream world for a lil while....(I'll slip back again after I write my comments... 😉 )
ok imagining her in the gym...the pool was also a good idea... a very welcome chnage...

awsome yaar...u've done a great job... she's wondering who he is... 😳 ...

the stud part was a good touch...n now u will add a tattoo too... 😉 kya baat hai... yeh Jai Walia mujhe pasand hai.... 😳 😳 😳

great going... 👏

hope we get the next part soooooon

Poo

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Aha. I'm glad u wrote another fanfic....
n a great fanfic for that matter...the begining is awsome...n u know na ...well begun is half done... 😉
I loved the new version of both...imagining them ...actually him...in the gym... hhhmmmmm..... 😳 ...now I'm back from my dream world for a lil while....(I'll slip back again after I write my comments... 😉 )
ok imagining her in the gym...the pool was also a good idea... a very welcome chnage...

awsome yaar...u've done a great job... she's wondering who he is... 😳 ...

the stud part was a good touch...n now u will add a tattoo too... 😉 kya baat hai... yeh Jai Walia mujhe pasand hai.... 😳 😳 😳

great going... 👏

hope we get the next part soooooon

Poo

thanks poo, its becoz of encouragement that u guys give that i even bother venturing into a field that i kind of suck in........ i hope i live upto ur expectations.

the very thought of him in the pool not all covered up with his black suit and scarf makes u feel dreamy na ......... exactly my plight, can u guage how wild my imagination must be running while thinking of it 😆 and bani in a bikini, i could not avoid that 😉 and the stud in the ear, i just thought would add to his new lean image ........ real cool hunk na

even i have to figure out who he is 😆 😆 will try to add the tatoo, any specific requests, will make my job easier and since tumhe yeh jw pasand hai and i will oblige, u might as well tell me what more u wanna add 😛

next part tomorrow ........... 99% or then sun.

achcha so we can get our Jai Walia customized... 😉 😳 😆 .. I mean I can get MINE customized....😳
HAila... 😳 😳 😳
nahi nahi,...u keep him the u want to ... meri imagination n creativity itni nahi... but can we have him in some really nice casuals... lighter colours... I love black... but overdose na ho jaye.... 😆
rest I'll let u know... 😉
Poo

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

achcha so we can get our Jai Walia customized... 😉 😳 😆 .. I mean I can get MINE customized....😳
HAila... 😳 😳 😳
nahi nahi,...u keep him the u want to ... meri imagination n creativity itni nahi... but can we have him in some really nice casuals... lighter colours... I love black... but overdose na ho jaye.... 😆
rest I'll let u know... 😉
Poo

what if i say ki usko iss ff mein swimsuit ke sivay, doosre kapdo ki zaroorat hi nahin padegi 😆😆

Originally posted by: sabsj

what if i say ki usko iss ff mein swimsuit ke sivay, doosre kapdo ki zaroorat hi nahin padegi 😆😆

Okay now I'm stumped...no words left what so ever...😆

that was an awesome start sabsj 😃
Jai Walia...in a swimsuit..with a stud...haila!!! 😳
plzz continue soon!

👏 👏 👏
My, my so your back again huh?? ...i am not complaining!!!😆 😆 !!
What can i say but THANK YOU for writing another ff...the first part was very interesting....and was also well written!!
Just amazing!!
I do hope that you'll continue soon as i eagerly look forward to the second part!!!
La premire partie tait trs bonne !!!SVP continue soon!!
Luv ya
Sweetu
P.S. pls do continue soon!