FF: AGAINST ALL ODDS - COMPLETE - Page 5

Originally posted by: Vedo

wow!! chap. 2 was awesome too!! 👏
that tatto is...hailaaaa!!! 😳 😳 😃 i love it!!
plzz continue soon! 😉

hey vedo, liked the tattoo ahhh ...... it was a request from taz.

have posted chapter 3 too, hope u enjoy reading it.

love...sabs

Originally posted by: Tazmanian_Devil

ohh sabs thanx for the dedication, it was exactly what i wanted!!
Just thinking about jai with that tattoo, earing maybe riding a motorbike and all my dreams have been fulfilled!! 😳
Loved the glasses too
Bani's thoughts are soo funny 😆
Plz continue soon, im eagerly awaiting the next part

Lots of Luv

Taz

hi taz, am glad i was able to live upto ur expectations ........ phew ......... happy thinking .......... he does look delicious doesn't he. i wish i could add the bike too, unfortunately there is no scope for that 😆 so i leave it to ur imagination.

i wanted to make bani sound cute and funny ...... am glad it came across just like i wanted it. have posted chapter 3, pls do read it.

love...sabs

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Wow...the second part had me thinking harder... tattoo...pool...stud... ab aur kya baaki hai... 😳 😳 😳
I'm just sooo in my dreamland.... 😳
She's having trouble striking a conversation...and who is this guy... kuch bolega ya bas looks will kill...not that I mind.... 😳 😳 😳
Loved it.... 👏
and 🤗🤗🤗 u know what this is for...

Poo

hey poo, think even harder now ............. hope u slept well yesterday night, visited dreamland with the hunk on his harley davidson 😆😆

what if i told u that the guy is actually dumb ........ kahani mein twist, remember ........... all he can do is look 😭 aakhon ki gushtakiyan .....

thanks for the .......... u know what. posted chapter 3 pad lena.

love....sabs

Ok...I read it n loved it.... 👏
Its so good to see she's thinking of soooo many ways to strike a conversation... 😉 kya kya ideas aa rahe hain....
but yeh kya he didn't utter a word... now i also think its aankhon ki gustakhiyaaan..... 😳

great going.... 👏
I hope Bani comes up with a good plan to start a conversation...and she actually implements it... 😆

Poo

PS: yes my dreamland had him with the stud, the tatoo... 😉
kya scene tha.... 😳 😳 😳

Great parts Sabsj ... pl do continue
👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Ok...I read it n loved it.... 👏
Its so good to see she's thinking of soooo many ways to strike a conversation... 😉 kya kya ideas aa rahe hain....
but yeh kya he didn't utter a word... now i also think its aankhon ki gustakhiyaaan..... 😳

great going.... 👏
I hope Bani comes up with a good plan to start a conversation...and she actually implements it... 😆

Poo

PS: yes my dreamland had him with the stud, the tatoo... 😉
kya scene tha.... 😳 😳 😳

bechari bani ........ poo usko zara tips de na on how to win a guy swimming in the pool 😆 maine kaha na, kahani mein twist hain ........ bol nahi sakta hain bechara ....... my ff is "different" u see 😆 ....... bani ab kya karegi, sochan padega .............. abhi bhi dreamland mein ho ya ...... don't let the stud and tatoo get in the way of ur padhai. actually imagine him dropping u off to college on his harley .......... then u can say "kya scene tha" 😆

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Great parts Sabsj ... pl do continue
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hey sangs, thanks dear 😭 😭 me sad to see u sad 😭 will continue soon.

Loved part three!!
poor bani is trying soo hard to think of a way to strike up a convo but to no avail
U are really building the suspence, we still don't know anymore about this guy. Is he or isn't he Jai?
As for the motorbike i can dream!
U have give me enough drooling material to be getting on with 😆
Plz continue soon

Luv Taz

Originally posted by: Tazmanian_Devil

Loved part three!!
poor bani is trying soo hard to think of a way to strike up a convo but to no avail
U are really building the suspence, we still don't know anymore about this guy. Is he or isn't he Jai?
As for the motorbike i can dream!
U have give me enough drooling material to be getting on with 😆
Plz continue soon

Luv Taz

sabsj you're killing us yaar!!! 😉