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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
superb part.just too good.loved it. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
awesome is not the word... keep it up, lovely fanfiction.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
just read all the parts and i must say very good fanfic! very interesting! can't wait for the next part! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
Pyar toh hona hi tha!!

Excellent Rocky, can't wait for the next part! 👏

Please continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
Awww a blooming romance 😊
😆 I'm so excited
please do continue soon
thanx 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56

Part 6:

Next Morning…… Both Bani and Jai get up early…….. they couldn't sleep…

Bani goes to Vicky's room and see that he is still sleeping….she looks at him with much sadness in her eyes…. Jai also comes by and sees Bani sad….he immediately is able to connect and realises that she is imagining what could have been had they been unsuccessful……

Jai: Bani… its okay.. he is fine now……

Bani: Monlogue…

Mr. Walia…… main jaanti…..hun….. par abhi…. bhi meri rooh kaanp jaati hai jab mein sochti hun….. ki … agar hum Vicky to nahin bachha pate to kya hota…..

Mein Yash uncle ko kya jawab deti….Viren se kya kehti….Aap ko pata hai….. Maine kabhi …. Rano aur Vicky mein koi faraq nahin samjha…

Yeh mera Vicky hai….. woh vicky jo mujhse koi baat nahin chupata tha… use koi cheez chahiye hoti toh woh Yash uncle aur Viren se nahin… mughse kehta tha…..Yeh mera chotta sa Vicky hai…. jo Bani di… bani di aapni totli zabban mein kehta thakta nahin tha….

Pata hi nahin chala ki kab itna bada ho gaya…… aur itni badi baat usne mujhse chupaie….

Maine kabhi….. Yash uncle ko use daatne nahin diya…. Unhone to uski saari zimaedari mujh pe chod di thi….Main ab unhe kya jawab doongi….

Mughe apne Vicky pe kitna confidence tha… aare mughe to kal raat tak yeh bhi nahin pata tha ki wok drink bhi karta hai …what talk about anything else…….

Mujhe samagh mein nahin aa raha ki main kis muh se Viren ko batao ki kal raat kya hua… Aur Yash uncle se aankh milane ki himmat mere me hai hi nahin…..

Aise lag raha hai…. ki meri bahut badi haar hui hai…..

Mujhe kabhi apne bachpan… ke jaane ka dukh nahin hua… maine kabhi … Pia…. rano.. Vicky ko yeh nahin lagne diya…. ki life kya hoti…. Hai.... mein unke liye ma…. baap…. friend… guide saab ban gayi……

Par pehle.. Pia…. Fir.. Rano aur… ab….. Vicky ne mujhe hara diya…..

Jai heart goes out to Bani…. He also also gone through this pain…. He can empathisize with her situation…..

Bani suddenly comes back to reality…. And realises that she has let her heart out in front of her most hated enemy..Jai Walia……

She says… I am sorry Mr.Walia… mujhe yeh sab aap se nahin kehna chahiye tha…

Jai: Its okay…. Bani…. Mein samajhta hun……mein bhi en emotions se guzra tha … jab Pushkar ne bhaag ke shaadi ki thi…..

Jai looks into Bani's eyes and they both share a very deep understanding of each other's pain….. un dono ka ek akelepan ka rishta ban jata hai…. Dono ne zindagi mein bahut kuch dekha…..hai….

Just then Rano comes by and the moment is lost……

Rano: Bani di ….. don't worry sab teek ho jayega….

Bani looks at her with great determination on her face….

Bani: Haan Rano… Teek hona hi padega…. and goes……

At breakfast time….. Vicky finally wakes up and comes down…..everyone is in the living room…. some are having breakfast while others have finished…

Vicky comes holding his head and goes to where Bani is sitting with Viren….( Bani called up and explained the situation to Viren…. Who handed over the meeting to someone else.. and immediately came back…..)

Vicky: Bani di.. I am sorry……. for last night….

Bani is in one of her moods……

( Let me tell you about Bani's moods….. Bani has this habit of being extra nice when she is really angry…. Pia… Rano.. Viren.. Vicky they all are very well aware of this.. if ….Bani is extra sweet to tyaar ho jaoo …Bomb fatne hi wala….hai….It would be better if you take guard and don't.. .. for god's sake…Interfere.. if you know what's good for you….)

Bani: ( being extra nice) Aare Vicky.. .. sorry.. what about.. tumne toh kuch kiya hi nahin….

Vicky: Bani di…..( says haltingly) I know.. I am really sorry….

Bani: ( with sugary sweetness) Nahin .. Nahin.. Vicky…. Tumne toh kuch kiya hi nahin… who to hum log hi paagal hai jo aadhi raat mein chaat par chad gaye the… tum to us waqt so rahe the.. right!

Tum to drink karte hi nahi…… phir tum aisa kaise karte….Woh to maine pee rakhi thi…….

The moment she says this she has everone's attention…… Traun and Aaditya are particularly enjoying this…..

By now Vicky is really scared……..

And the whole Walia camp is looking speechless… they can't fanthom….. what's wrong with Bani……. Why is she not angry at Vicky….Only Pia and Rano know the actual situation and are dead scared……

Vicky: Mein jaanta hun Bani..di maine app ko dukh pahuchaya hai….. mujhe ap ko Naina wali baat batani chahiye thi….

Bani: Vicky kaun si Naina wali baat…. aisa toh tum kar hi nahin sakte…. after all agar aisa kuch hota to kya tum apni Bnai di ko nahin batate….. come on now… chalo breakfast kar lo…..sweetheart….. Mera Vicky to mujhe se kuchhhhhhh…… chupata hi nahin…..

Bani ……Vicky ko bheego bhego ke maar rahi hai…….

Vicky: Bani di….ab bas bhi kijiye na….. please mughe maaf kar dijiye….

He looks soulfully at Viren.. who refuses his look and stares back at him with great hatered….

Now the bomb explodes…………

Bani: Mafi….. Mafi… she gets really angry and grabs Vicky by his collar…. Mafi mangni hai toh… Masi se mango….. Dadi se mango….Mr. Walia…. se mango….. Aaditya…. uncle se mango… ki tumne unki mehman nawazi…. ka kya sila diya…

Mughse mafi mangne ki koi zarrorat nahin hai…. Yaad rakho Vicky agar mein tumhe bigad( spoil) sakti hun to tumhe sudhaaroongi bhi mein….

Aur tumhe kisne yeh haq diya…. Ki tum aapni zindagai ko zaya kar do… tumhari zindagi.. tumhari hi nahin hum sab ki hai…..tum kaun hote ho… is ke sath khilwad karne wale….

Vicky goes and says sorry to all …. .

Just then the butler comes and informs them ….. that two guys have come to meet Bani Dixit….

Bani asks them to wait….

Bani calls Vicky……

Bani: Vicky… apna wallet dena…. He gives…… car keys…..( BTW.. ..Vicky has a really swanky dark blue sports car….)

She gives all of that to Priya… who has also come with Viren.. ….

Bani: Priya… yeh car tum rakh lo… aur yeh sare credit cards cancel karva do….

Bani looks sweetly at Vicky…. who is looking shocked……

Bani: Vicky…… aaj se infact abhi se…. tumhari.. pocket money.. baandh… tumhare credit cards finished… now you are free to pursue your dreams….

Vicky.. looks at Viren…. Bhai… Bhai…. Please …

Viren: You know Vicky….. Bani ko pura haq hai who jo chahe woh kar sakti hai… humese koi use rokega nahin…..

As Vicky ….starts to leave…

Bani: BTW ….. Vicky….. as for Naina… I am going to make 100% sure that she considers you …..she stops… mid sentence….

Vicky is looking really happy…….thinking chalo.. …kam se kam Naina.. …..to milegi……

Bani: theworst possible choice for her….!!!!!!!!!!

Vicky is shocked… and Tarun who is sipping coffee…… coughs…. Every one has an incredulous look on their faces…

Bani: ( she rubs it in)

I have collected photos of these handsome guys which I am going to give to her father and hope that she gets engaged to one of them…. (Bani has some photographs in her hand…Priya has got them for her)

Whatever happens… I will personally ensure ……ki jis….. Naina ke liye ……tumne itna natak kiya… who tumhe kabhi na mile…….

Vicky is shell shocked that his Bani di…. Can be so cruel…..

Pia… decides to interrupt….. but Bani gives her a look to silence her….

Vicky makes to leave not knowing what to do……he can't stand all these people staring at him…..

Bani: Aur Vicky…. Don't even think about taking a risk with your life again…. Bahar do aadmi khade hain jo har waqt tumhare sath rahenge … to ensure that you are safe at all times….. They my dear….. are your bodyguards……!!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
😲 Halia Rocky i want this Bani in the show, to tell Jigs and Roshini 😡 , yeh Bani to kya Bani yeh 👏 To good yaar👏
Body Guards,for Vicky 😆 Poor guy
I bet after this Mr. Walia will think or Taurn or Aditya will say Man I thought Jai had temper but Bani, they will be all scared of her temper 😆 man i wish i could see the faces of the all the people especially Jai, Ranveer, Jigs and Aditya's 😆
i know how my friends and family members feel when i sweet talk them when i am mad,😆
Please write soon 😆 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
Only one word to describe this part....

Wow!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
OMG its just fantatic....really superb... 👏

i so luv this bani. i want to see tarun and jai's reactions on screen... 😆

pls continue soonnnnnnnn...plsssssssssssssssssssss 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
omg rocky.......tht was sum FF alrite 😛 👏 👏 ....i cudn't stop grinning 😃 ......fobulous hun 👏 👏 👏

wow!!! wat a change in bani 😃 .......hiala 😳 ...totally luved it 😛 ......i luved the way how she cud handle ne situation so well 👏 👏 .....n when i m saying so well...i really mean so well hun 😳 👏 ......trully n the dialouges u gave her......WOW!! WOW!! WOW!! 👏 ......i m speechless 😳 ......too good..... 👏

it was over all mindblowing....... 👏

n not only tht but she is such a soft n caring person inside 😳 .....awwwwwwwww 😳 😳

also luved the moments b/w jai n bani 😳 😛 ......n how bani opens up infront of jai....too kute 😳

amazing hun 👏 👏 👏 ......continue soon..... 😳
can't wait to read the next part... 😛

luv,❤️

LiSa

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