Short FF Concluding part pg.77 COMPLETE!! - Page 13

Originally posted by: khattimeeti

OMG u r so amazing...... i dont know wat u were worrying about u write fantastically... finally caughtup...... such suspense i could imagine the scene.........
Luv
KNM

aww thanks hun!!!!! lol yeah when i was writing it i kept on imagining the scene in my head but still something seemed amiss, no one still commented on how it could've been better, i guess i'll just wait and see if some one does.

thanks again.

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

wooww....hrr88 suspensee endinggg..!!!
will surely be waitingg for you to updatee soon..i hopeeu can make it b4 sunday
thnksxxx...babezz..
mwahh !!
thnksxx
updatee soon.
👏

thank you!!!!!!

i'll update tomorrow, i would've done it today but i am like dead right now. yeah so tomorrow for sure after 3.

Originally posted by: KHJL

Wow hun.....tht was 1 mysterious part......n yet an awesome 1 too 👏 👏 👏 ......i luved it 😛 😳

omg....i wonder who got shot????.....hope itz not my cuddles.... 😭

can't wait to fing out who the shooter was...

continue soon hun.....wating for the next part 😳 .......once again brilliantly handled....... 👏

cheers,

Lisa

Thanks lisa, your comments are truly amazing!!!!

lol yep everyone is wondering who the shooter is!!!!!! just wait till tomorrow and you might find out, or i will be like ekta and drag it. i don't know yet!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: lonely14

Lol sorry but you hve to wait. I just got back from college and i am really tired, so no update today.

In your words "suspense kills doesn't it"😊

now you feel what i do when you leave us hanging. hahah nah jp, i'll update tomorrow. till then you can guess. 😃

Hey i am the master in that!!!!!!😉😉

Okay here is part 8 hope you guyz enjoy it!!!!!

Part 8:

We see blood everywhere and then slowly both tarun and ranveer move out of the way to see that the shooter is already dead with blood all over, all three of them are covered with blood.

Slowly Tarun goes towards the shooter and unmasks him and is just shocked to see the person is none other than Arjun.

Both Jai and Tarun are just left speechless, Ranveer is in tears seeing the person lying there in blood but at the same time is also happy for whatever happened to him. (sorry I won't reveal who Arjun is till Jai himself decides to tell Bani about him, so like Bani all of you are going to be in suspense too)

Finally all three of them come to their senses and go towards Bani who is just standing there like a rock, with no expression as she is unable to comprehend what just happened. And she faints.

Before she falls, Jai just grabs her and takes her to the hospital.

Outside in the waiting room, all three of them are waiting impatiently for the doctor to come out to see if Bani is okay. Finally the doctor comes out.

Doctor: Mr.Walia, There is nothing to worry about, your wife has just receive a shock, she won't be conscious for another 2-3 hours, everything else is fine and your baby is okay too.

Jai heaves a sigh of relief and then asks the doctor whether he could meet his wife. Doctor refuses saying that she needs rest and he can meet her after she wakes up.

Jai then turns towards Ranveer and Tarun to know why they came to Park Road and how they found that the Arjun was going to be there.

Ranveer: Mamaji, I was with Ma and I received a call from my Roshini that Arjun is going to kill you tonight and that he has already decided a plan since somehow he found out that you were going to be there.

Jai is just shocked and keeps on listening.

Ranveer: As soon as I got the call, I left without telling Ma anything and then tried to find out where Bani Mami was since someone has been in contact with her and always informs her about your attacks, I didn't want her to take any stress in this condition, as it is she is already so grieving with the alimony claim because of me, I didn't want to trouble her more. (so actually guys Ranveer is a positive character and he knows why Bani is claiming for the alimony but poor guy can't do anything otherwise his plan will be unsuccessful)

Jai: you know why Bani is claiming for the alimony?

Ranveer(with his eyes downcast): yes mamaji, it is because of me, since she thinks I want all your property in my name and throw you out of my house.

Even though Jai knows all this(part 5) but he just wants ranveer to confess it, and maybe just maybe there is a reason behind his doing. He trusts ranveer to not do anything bad to him.

Jai: but how is that possible the property is already in my name so how can you take over?

Ranveer: actually mamaji, I made you sign the Power of Attorney, and now the property is in my name, and the only way to save your property from me was if Bani mami filed for a divorce and claimed for the alimony, that way your accounts will be frozen and I can't touch them.

Jai: But Ranveer, why did you do this to me? To Bani?

Ranveer: Mamaji, I had no other option, I had to convince Ma and Roshini that I am with them, and that I only want your property and I hate the dixit sisters.

Tarun: But why did you have to convince Jigyasa and roshini?

Ranveer: Because they were planning on separating Bani mami and Jai mama, and also they were planning to kill their child and Jai mama. At the time I didn't know anything, but when I was with them, I found out the PR raaz and also about Arjun.

Jai and Tarun cannot believe this. Jai cannot believe that his own sister would do such a thing and that Ranveer knows the truth.

Ranveer continues: so I made sure bani mami finds out about me taking over your property that way she can freeze your accounts, I sent Rashi to her and after that Rashi has been with Mami ever since and has been giving her the information. Since I couldn't do it myself otherwise Ma would've noticed something was wrong.

Tarun already knew that(from part 4), his agent told him everything and also about Arjun but Tarun decided he should wait till he himself confronts ranveer first but he never got the chance.

Jai didn't have any words, he just kept staring at them both realizing how much Bani loves him, and that she was doing all this to protect him and Ranveer was also with him even after knowing the truth.

Just then the nurse comes and informs them that Bani is awake and they can go meet her.

All three of them are so happy, Jai walks in followed by Tarun and Ranveer.

Hope you guys enjoyed this part.

Lol i know most of you out there would wanna strangulate me for hiding who arjun is but trust me i will come up with something to make it up. or you guyz can tell me what you want to read.

Please leave your feedback!!!!

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

Hey i am the master in that!!!!!!😉😉

Lol i know!!!!! you leave us hanging wanting to want more!!!!

man who is this arjun???????
please reveal him soon! 😉

aww...another gr88 part sweetti!!
well..whu is dis arjun...reveal his identity soon plzz..
thnksxxx... for updatin
and do continuee soon..
letss see what will be bani's reaction wen she finds out that jai knows the truth !! 😃
thnksxxx..
😊

WOW Shina!!! i'm soooo sorry that I missed the last few parts, but wow they were really good!!! I can't wait to find out who this Arjun is, and I'm sooo happy Ranveer is a positive character!!! Please please continue asap!!! Once again I'm sorry!!! 😭
Luv ya,
Meera