Short FF Concluding part pg.77 COMPLETE!! - Page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey lonely,loved ur preview yaar,waiting patientlyfor the next addition 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Okay here is the next part. i am posting this up today since i won't be able to update till the weekend. I hope you guyz like it. and if you don't please let me know. I guess i can welcome the belans and brickbats. 😆
I wrote it in a hurry that way you don't have to wait too long for another part. I hope you like it.

Part 7:

Ranveer on the other hand seems to be very disturbed, he keeps thinking just a few minutes. Whilst driving he gets another call, and is shocked to know the happenings.

Bani is just shocked, she thinks that it was her mother who died that night. So how is this person related to her? All of my mother's relatives are dead, so who is this? And why does he want to kill Mr.Walia? Is there something I don't know?

Jai gets the shock of his life. It can't be him or can it? I thought he was gone from our lives long time ago, he can't be back, especially since Bani is here, I can't let her know the secret. Oh god, how do I prevent this person from blabbing out the secret? I just need to somehow stop him before he says anything else, otherwise Bani will completely be broken.
Jai: What is the point of thinking about the past? If you want to kill me then go right ahead but don't say another word.

The shooter gets confused with this turn of events, he thinks why is he so eager to die? And why doesn't he want me to talk? There is definitely something going on here. Just then he sees Jai looking at his wife. The shooter turns around, and is shocked to know that Bani is standing there.

Tarun is driving and is thinking that this plan better work to get Jai and Bani together. I hope both have reached Park road by now. Even though I sent the anonymous text message to both Jai and Bani saying to reach Park road to save the other, I don't know if they will be able to solve their misunderstandings. Little does he know that the killer is also there. While in his thoughts his cell phone rings and its none other than Ranveer.

Tarun: yeah Ranveer whatz going on?

And then we see in mute and Tarun gets the shock of his life.

Tarun: okay I will reach there in 5 minutes, I will meet you up there.

The shooter: Hello Mrs.Walia, what a pleasant surprise, now you can see your husband dying in front of your own eyes.

Bani is shocked doesn't know how to react so just keeps staring at the shooter, she is unable to comprehend who that is and why he wants to kill Mr.Walia that too for the PR incident.

The shooter: I am sure you are wondering how I am related to Park road, your husband didn't tell you? Don't worry today before I kill him I will tell you the entire truth, and then you won't be able to face him or yourself for doubting him, and you will live in anguish your entire life. Your husband is very much trying to save someone, but alas I won't let that happen.

So basically the shooter has something against both Jai and Bani, and by killing Jai he will take his revenge, and now that Bani knows Jai is hiding something from her she will be in sorrow thinking about the PR raaz and that Mr.Walia might have been innocent.

Before he can do anything Jai comes up and tries to grab the gun from the shooter, and they get into a fight. Even though Jai has an upper hand the shooter grabs the gun and points it towards Jai, stunning him and is about to shoot when….

Tarun and Ranveer come there and grab the gun away from him, all of them get into a fight again. And there is a gun shot heard.

Bani is just dumbfounded seeing the person shot…


Let me know if you like it. I'll be on IF but i won't be able to post anything before friday or even saturday i don't know for sure.

and kavita here is the person who gets shot, i told ya i'll kill someone!!!

Edited by lonely14 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
A lil preview for next week:

The shooter's face is revealed and everybody is just shell shocked!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh snap who got shot???? is it d killer?? or tarun or ranveer??? awwwwwwwww man.. is there a 6th person there by any chance.. that was gr8888.. plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey Shina,i'm dying to know who got killed?Plz continue soon yaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr 😆 Very cool fanfic yaar,you should be one of the creative heads of balaji 👏 One of the fanfics ever 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

oh snap who got shot???? is it d killer?? or tarun or ranveer??? awwwwwwwww man.. is there a 6th person there by any chance.. that was gr8888.. plz cont soon 👏

Thanks hun, hey btw whatz your name??? if you don't mind me asking, whenever i have to thank you i say nyzbabigal, so i was just wondering.

hahah you have to wait till the weekend to find out!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: divya74

Hey Shina,i'm dying to know who got killed?Plz continue soon yaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr 😆 Very cool fanfic yaar,you should be one of the creative heads of balaji 👏 One of the fanfics ever 👏

hahah well wait and see who got killed. i am sure it seems obvious. and ofcourse you get to find out who the shooter is in the next part.

hahah me n one of the creative heads???? if i were one of them i would be so biased towards Jai, he would be the epitome of all men.

thanks for the wonderful comment. i feel very good.

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Posted: 19 years ago

thanks hun!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
didi..

i loved it!! it was gr8!!

👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

didi..

i loved it!! it was gr8!!

👏

how old are you hun??? you call me didi thatz why i am asking. don't mean to intrude.

Thank you!!!!!

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