Aap Ki Khatir- FF :Part 7, Pg 13 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

104

Views

17.4k

Users

35

Frequent Posters

Tomiko thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 19 years ago
#51

Oh wow hun!👏..........

Gosh, i love this new Bani!😉...........Waitingfor the next update!😛

$h@£aq... thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: nibbles

Oh wow hun!👏..........

Gosh, i love this new Bani!😉...........Waitingfor the next update!😛

samee her...u r tooo mamazingg...!!

do updatee soon....just lovee ur fanifc...!!

😛

Vishakha_Sakhi thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 19 years ago
#53
Wow!! a BIG thank you for all the comments 🤗 🤗 🤗 ...n for taking your time to read my ff, it really means alot to me! 😊
I'll try to post the next part soon!

I'm having a bit of a prob...I have no idea what to do with Jigs, do u guys think I should make her fall in love again...or kill her?? 😈 Plzz give me ur suggestions..Thanx 😊
$h@£aq... thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#54
aww i dunt mindd u killin her...!!
jst keep jai and bani together...!!
thnksxx..
👏
update soon thouh !!
j&b84 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#55
killing jigs seem to be gd idea
*Guli* thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 19 years ago
#56
Man this is soooo good!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!!!


i read all 4 parts!!! And this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i cant wait til u cont!!
Vishakha_Sakhi thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 19 years ago
#57


Part 5.

He swung around and was enthralled by how beautiful she looked in a strapless, pale yellow dress, with pale orange flower prints, which stopped a little below her knees.
(http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5633/bdresseh6.jpg)

Bani: "How do you like my surprise?"

Jai: "Which one? The flowers, the visit or the dress?"

Bani: "You like the dress?...I wasn't sure when I bought it but the lady convinced me...."

Unable to control himself any longer, he walked over and sealed her lips with his preventing her from continuing....kissing her long and hard...conveying his need for her.

"Jai...not here...look the door is wide open....anyone can walk in," she spoke into his mouth. He reluctantly let her go.

Bani holding up a brown paper bag: "So how does lunch sound?"

Jai, teasingly: "Lunch? I thought one of my kisses was enough for lunch!"

Bani, naughtily: "Just one? I'm much...much hungrier than that!"

Jai: "Hmmm....I love the new Bani!"

Bani: "I love her too...but not as much as I love you!"

He envelopes her in a warm hug, feeling like the luckiest man on earth. (Oh but u are!)

"Ahemmm!" They were startled by the voice at the door. He looked over and saw that it belonged to Pia who had a displeased look on her face.

Jai: "Pia...koi kaam tha?"

Bani noticed the irritation in his voice. "Hey Pia!"

Pia: "Its okay Mr. Walia...I'll come back later," then cheerily, "hey Di, you're looking beautiful today!"

Bani: "Thank you."

Pia: "Well, I gotta go...I'm swamped with work."

With Pia gone Bani locked the door and turned to Jai who was seated on the couch. "Are you sure she's my sister?"

"What? What do you mean?" he was stunned by her question.

"If she is then how come I remember Rano and not her? Remember you told me that I must've only remembered the people I loved and cared about the most...so why don't I remember anything about Pia? Didn't I love her or care for her?"

"Yes you did...I've no idea why you don't remember her. Maybe you were angry with her or something!"

Bani: "I don't like the way she looks at you...she keeps giving you these lovey dovey stares. Her intentions seem bad!"

Jai laughing at his wife's statement: "Someone's jealous..."

Bani rested the bag on the coffee table and plopped herself on his lap. She put her arms around his neck and brought her lips to his, kissing him softly.

Bani, huskily: "Do I have any reason to be?"

Jai: "If this is the way you're gonna react every time you are then you have a thousand reasons to be!"

Bani bit his bottom lip teasingly and kissed him once more.

Bani: "You only belong to me and I will never, never let anyone come between us."

Jai: "Same here Babe."

The rest of the time passed unnoticed as they ate lunch, feeding each other.

============================================================ ==

Jigyaasa was horrified to see Bani in her new dress. That lowly girl is trying to seduce my brother. I'll definitely have to show her her place.

Jigyaasa: "You're trying to seduce Jai Bhaiya, aren't you?"

Bani: "WHAT?!"

Jigyaasa: "You bitch! No wonder you're wearing such cheap clothes...you're trying to seduce him so you can get your hands on his money!"

Bani: "WATCH YOUR LANGUAGE JIGYAASA!"

Jigyaasa: "Who the hell do you think you're raising your voice on? Very soon I'll be the owner of this mansion and when I am...you'll be out on the road along with your two good for nothing sisters!"

Bani: "Stop being delusional woman! This hose belongs to Jai and he's not crazy to give it to you!"

Jigyaasa, smirking evilly: "But he already has...not only this house but his business as well, and you know this."

Bani: "What are you talking about?"

Jigyaasa: "Maine tumse kaha tha na, you WILL get the divorce but the money will be mine...all of it! You don't fool me with your "amnesia" act at all. I know you remember everything."

Jigyaasa walked off to her room, leaving Bani confused as ever. She surely had to talk to Jai about this.



Well here's part 5...please do tell me what you think. 😊

Min_3088 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#58
hey hun..it waz FABULOUS...and i loved it..that Jiggs... quick sumone get her more make-up before she smiles again and blinds us with those pearlly whites..LOL..anywayz great job! and plz do continue soon! 👏
SRKfever thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#59
👏 👏 awsome update
please do continue soon
thanx
goldie_ever thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#60
marvelous part dears
bani's going to talk to jai
ummmmm...should i take cover 😆 😆 😉
pls cont soon
can't wait for the next bit

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".