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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 15

Rano is dumbstruck and doesnt know what to say. Natwar walks inside her room with full confidence and closes the door behind him. 'I see that someone has already brought you flower, but don't mind Rano mine are more beautiful.' Rano just follows Natwar with her eyes as she is still not able to figure out what is going on. She watches him as he replaces the flower next to her bed with his. He then walks towards her desk and grabs her chair, put it next to her bed and drops himself on it. He gives Rano a million dollar smile and asks her how she is doing. Rano is so confused all she can think of is that this must be a stupid joke played by Sahil. Before she realises it she starts screaming. 'What the hell do you and your friends think?! What do you want from me? What have I ever do to you? Why cant you just leave me alone?!' Natwars smile vasnishes quickly and he tries to calm Rano down and make her understand why he came, but the girl is too angry to even hear a word he is saying. 'Rano please listen to me. I never supported Sahil and always told him to leave you alone. Please Rano just hear me out. Yesterday I came to apologise to you and take you to the collegeparty. Please just listen. Natwar puts his hands on Rano's shoulders in an attempt to get her attention, but that only makes her burn in fury more. She slaps his arms off her. 'How dare you touch me? Why the hell did you come?! Just leave! I cant stand you and I dont want to see you. And here take your stupid flowers with you!' She grabs the flowers and hits Natwar with them. She keeps hitting and screaming till the room becomes black infront of her and she faints.

Bani is searching the newspaper for a suitable vacancy. She is desperatly in need of a job. Its been two weeks after the accident of Rano now. Rano is doing much better and Bani has forced her to go in thearpy. But in order to pay for everything Bani really needs to get a job again. She is almost out of the little money she had saved. 'Didi?' Bani looks up from the newspaper and sees Rano standing next to her. She is looking nice in blue jeans and a baby pink t-shirt. Her face is still a little pale, but the doctor has assured Bani that Rano will soon be totally recovered. 'Didi, Natwar is standing outside waiting for me. He will take me to the doctor.' Bani smiles when she hears the name of Natwar. She remembers how Rano had bashed him up with the beautiful flowers he brought her. When Bani came back from mr. Walia's office that day she was shocked to find Natwar in Rano's room. The poor guy had scratches all over his face and arms, while Rano was sleeping peacefully. He explained to her what happend and she couldnt help but laugh at him. He gave her a puppy face before he bursted out laughing as well. The days after that Natwar kept visiting Rano daily and they became good friends. 'Didi?!' Rano's voice brings Bani back to their livingroom. 'Sure sweety, but tell Natwar to bring you back home early and invite him to dinner, ok?' Rano smiles in confirmation and closes the door behind her.

Tony is sitting infront of Anjali trying to make her eat her food, but she refuses. He has been trying to feed her for a hour now and she is seriously starting to get on his nerves. 'Please my daughter, have your food. I have still alot of work to do and your aunt will make my life a living hell if I dont do my chorus in time.' Anjali shakes her head in anger and things to herself that he should just leave her alone. She tries to speak her mind and say that she wants Bani to feed her, but her tongue is not helping her. In frustration she throws the tray away, spiling the food and drink over Tony and her carpet. Tony bites his lips in order not to scream or hit Anjali for her misbehaviour. Just then the door opens and mr. Walia walks in. He is suprised to see the state Tony is in. 'Tony? What is going on?' Tony gets up and sighs. 'I'm sorry sir, but miss Anjali refuses to have her food and she has thrown it away.' Jai gets angry. Anjali has been throwing tantrums ever since Bani stopped taking care of her and is pushing her father to dispear. He has already assigned two nurses in two weeks, but both of them left because Anjali gave them a hell of a time. 'Tony. Go and bring a new tray with breakfast. Anjali will have her breakfast whether she likes it or not!' Tony didnt like the look or the tone of his boss, but he left the room quickly and came back 5 minutes later. 'Thank you Tony. You may leave now.' When the door drops behind his servant, Jai sits himself infront of his daughter and tries to feed her. She looks angrily to her dad and shakes her head. 'Come on princess, you have to eat.' Anjali refuses again and every attempt of her father to make her eat fails. He tried to be sweet, to sing to her, to tell her a story even to bribe her, but nothing worked. 'What do you want Anjali? What do I have to do to make you eat?!' Jai has tried hard to control his frustatration but this time his tone had clearly something threatening about it, but Anjali doesnt notice it. She turns around and opens the draw next to her bed and grabs a picture of her dad, Bani and herself. She turns back to her dad and shows him the picture while she points at Bani. Just the sight of Bani makes Jai explode with anger. He snatches the picture out of his daughters small hand. 'Bani?! Bani?! Why the hell do you keep wanting to see her. She left you ok? And she doesnt want to be around you! This is the last time you think about Bani. Did I make myself clear?! And you will be a good girl. Have your food on time and go to bed on time and stop throwing tantrums and making your nurses run away from you! Now eat!!' Anjali looks at her dad with moist eyes. She sees how he fills a spoon with cereals and brings it to her mounth. Anjali keeps her lips tightly and shakes her head making her dad clear she doesnt want to eat it. She once again points towards the picture. Jai has now lost his total selfcontrol. He drops the spoon back and grabs the picture. 'You want Bani dont you? Well Bani is dead!' He torns up the pictures, not realising he is torning up his daughters heart. After that he grabs a spoon with the one hand and Anjali's face with the other. 'Now eat!' He forcefully puts the spoon in her mouth, making her almost choke. Anjali spits the food out as the tears flow down her cheeks. She cant believe Bani is dead and has left her just like her mother did. She keeps crying a heartcry while she looks at a shocked Jai and everything becomes black infront of her eyes.
Edited by Grumpyyy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG,....JAi 😡 .....how could he 😡

great part 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
please cont soon will be waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
Jai😡 😡 😡 how dare you say that Bani is dead 😭 😭 😭
bechari Anjali 😭 😭 😭
I hope Bani comes to her recuse
maybe Bani can work in has a nurse in the childrens hospital and she can meet Anjali there
Jai you better apologize to Bani soon
I hope i get to see a chemistry between Natwar and Pia
please write soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part! awww.. jai's just trying to hide his pain 😭 i feel bad for him 😭 update soon-- i hope bani comes back soooon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thx alot guys! Next part is coming up! 😉

p.s do u really want natwar and pia? or did you mean rano?
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 16

Bani checks one more time the address she had written on a small paper. A small smile confirms that she is indeed standing infront of the right door. She peeks inside and sees a couple of people sitting chatting to their heart content not aware of anything around them. Her smile grows bigger as she concludes to herself saying 'Cute place!' 'Yes indeed, but not as cute as you.' The manly voice makes Bani starrtle and turn at once. She is stunned to find Pushkar standing right infront of her with a huge grin on his face. 'What's so funny mr. Shukla?' Pushkar laughs out loud and anwsers Bani back saying 'Just you pretending to be angry. Just admit it you are thrilled to see me back. I can tell it from your eyes. Don't worry it's not your fault. You can't do anything about it. It's just the spell I cast on girls you know.' Bani bursts out laughing and streches her hand towards Pushkar. 'Nice to meet you again mr. Shukla.' He winks at her and shakes her hand. 'The honor is all mine miss ...' 'Bani ... Bani Dixit.'

'Natwar?' Natwar stops licking his ice creams and turns around to look at Rano. 'Yes?' Rano sighs deeply, but doesnt say anything. She keeps eating from her icecream while she feels Natwars eyes fixed on her. 'Rano? What did you want to tell me?' She carefully turns to look Natwar in the eyes. 'Well you know that day when you came by. I mean the day of the accident ...' 'Yes sweetheart how can I ever forget the most happy day of my life. You fainted right into my arms!' Rano giggles and pushes Natwar away. 'Natwar be serious. Please just for a moment.' Natwar grins. 'Ok, ok, whats about that day.' Rano frowns again and stares to the ground. 'Well my sister thinks I tried to kill myself that day. I think you are thinking the same, but I swear I never meant to kill myself. In fury I hit my mirror and got myself injured. I swear.' Natwar keeps starring at Rano not knowing what to say. All of the sudden she looks up and stares right in his eyes. He sees the innocence in them and the fact that she is telling the thruth. Well atleast she truelly believe that she didnt want to commit suicide. He doesnt know what exactly happend that day, but after looking in her eyes so deeply he knows he can trust her. He knows that she is telling the truth and that he should believe her. In the past few days he has looked her in the eyes many times, but there always seemed to be a wall between him her and her soul, but today was different. Her eyes were so bright and open, he could look right through her to see a vulnerable, sweet and beautiful person. A person who was emotionally damaged but innerly strong enough to fight back and live her life to the fullest. 'Natwar!' Natwar closes his eyes and opens them again. He sees Rano still starring at him with a worried look, eagerly waiting for his answer. Natwar hold her hands in his and looks her right in the eyes. 'Listen Rano. I dont know what exactly happend before I arrived at your house. All I know is that when you opened the door for me, you were bleeding and you fainted right in front of me. But if you tell me that all that has happed was just an accident and not an attempt to suicide I completely believe you. I trust you Rano and I know that you wouldnt lie about such a thing.' Rano feels so much relieved. She cant believe that there is acctually someone who believes her. In her moment of happiness she hugs Natwar and kisses him on the cheek. 'Easy girl, people are watching! What will they think of us?!' Rano hits Natwar and pushes him away as she giggles and joy fills her heart.

Pushkar looks at Bani who is sitting at the other side of his desk. 'Bani are you sure you want to take the job at this restaurant? Please keep in mind, that once you become an employee I cant flirt with you anymore. Its against our work-code. On top of that all the other waitresses will become jealouse and I cant handle them all.' Bani giggles. 'Mr. Shukla cant you ever be serious?' Pushkar gets up from behind his desk and sits himself infront of Bani. 'Alright miss Dixit. I will be serious now. To be honest I think you are a wonderfull person. Dont tell me how I know, because I dont. There is just this little voice in me telling me that you are a great girl. That why today I ... Pushkar Shukla, officially offer you my friendship. Mujhse Dosti Karoge?' Bani thinks to herself that Pushkar must be a very special person. He has made her feel at ease and comfortable so easily. It feels as if she has known him for years. She gives him a big smile and shakes his hand in conformation. 'Alright. Now lets go back to business. Since you will be head of the catering I want you to be just around the corner ... litterally. Next to your salary we will provide you with the house next door. You will be living on the top floor. Your neighbour downstairs is our chefcook mr. Khan. You will meet him in a few minutes.' Bani interrupts Pushkar. 'Sorry sir, but I cant live there. I have two sisters to take care of and I cant leave them all alone.' Pushkar raises his hand. 'Dont worry Bani. Your sisters can come with you. The appartment has two bedrooms. I think that will do for you right?' Bani nods and his overjoyed with her new job. She cant believe her luck. After completeling all formalities to runs home to tell her sisters the good news and make them pack their stuff. They will move by tomorrow morning.

Jai keeps walking up and down the corridor. The doctor is with his daughter and he is worrying sick. If something bad happened to Anjali he will never be able to forgive himself. 'What was the need for you to yell at her Jai, why?', he keeps asking himself the same question over and over again. the answer was everytime the same but he refused to accept it. The fact that his daughter loved Bani so much and couldnt let go of her, made him angry. The fact that he got confronted with Bani's absences in their lives every day made him go crazy. He missed her and wanted to forget her, but his daughter didnt let him to. 'Mr. Walia?' The voice of the doctor filled the corridor. Jai turned around and walk towards the doctor quickly. 'Yes doctor? Is everything alright.' The doctor looks down. 'Mr. Walia Im afraid I have some bad news. Miss Anjali has gone back to her old state. It seems as if she refuses to improve. She is hiding from realitly by living in her own world. Something or someone has affected her life and gave her hope and the will to live again. To come back into reality, but that something or someone seems to be gone again. Whatever or whoever it is mr. Walia, you better get it or that person back into your daughters life. Otherwise there is very little hope for her to ever recover.' Jai is shocked by the news and keeps starring at the doctor in trance.
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome parts
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part! I can't wait to find out how Mr. Walia will get Bani back.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ah...Grumpyy back with 2 parts 15 & 16. Loved them both. Jai is really turning out to be a big jerk. How could he be so with his own child 😡 . Love Pushkar and Banis freindship and Natwar and Rano 😃 .

Feel sorry for poor Anjali, to be saddled with such a father and relatives.

It would be fun to watch Jai begging Bani to come back but Bani refuses to move back to WM an tells him to let Anjali live with her in the new aprtment provided by Pushkar.

Now that would be fun to watch 😉 . Cant wait to see what you come up with. 😃

Hope you update soon, very very soon.

Love
Krishna😃

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