FF: Try To Remember Me..COMPLETED! - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
fab part
read this fanfic after long time πŸ˜•
do post the nxt part soonnnnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey this is the first time i read your ff its good keep it going
Edited by perveen - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ziddi

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Awwwwwwww Anjali and Bani are having bonding i am sensing in the future they will have a mother and daughter realtionship
I think Rano should teach Pia, Sahil and the gang the lesson by wearing make up and a decent dress without her specs like AMirta Rano's character did in Main Hoo Na, make her wear a beautiful salwar kammez with her hair open but not the behen ji type
plz write soon

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Agree with you completely. Rano should really teach Sahil, whos such a jerk a lesson or give him and the group a piece of her mind. So the biker boy is Natwar, not bad, you could make Natwar fall for Rano instead of SahilπŸ˜‰πŸ˜† Now that would really make Pai jealous.

Can't wait for the next part, Anjali, Bani and Jai, they already seem like a happy family. πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part. just tooo goooooooooddddd. lovedddddddddddd itttttttttt. pls continue soon. πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part please continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Sahil.......go shove your head down the toilet or something!!😑

Can Rano change her appearance to wow and make Sahil's mouth fall open, only to taunt him?!!πŸ˜‰..........or atleast something to get back at that jerk!

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Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ˜† loved ur rano-sahil comments guys! Dont you worry he will eat his words later. Ill make him pay for every word. πŸ˜† Thx guys for your nice, cute and funny posts. Ill try and post the next part this eve, but it will be quite late cuz I have to do some stuff first. 🀒
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG!!! hun..just read all the parts and your FF is FANTASTIC πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ i love it!!

i loved ranveer imitating jai in teh beginning πŸ˜†
how dare jiggy slap bani?! i hope bani gets to slap jigz in the near future 😈 πŸ˜‰
uh oh what's happening to pia?! i hope she doesn't turn negative

and poor rano..not ugly rano...pia's ugly...she's the cow 😑 πŸ˜†

and a big thappad for sahil!! actually make that two πŸ˜†

love the jai-bani parts 😳

can't wait for you to update hun!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thank you inavars that was such a lovely post! Ill start writing now, hope to be done soon. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 12

Jai is sitting in his office. He is thrilled with his daughters improvement. In the last couple of weeks she has learned to move both her arms and she is even able to produce some sounds. He can't wait for her to speak again. While his secretary gives him a cup of coffee he looks through some files. As concentrated as he is, he doesn't hear how Sonalia intrudes his office and keeps starring at him as he is working. 'You know Jai, you should smile more often. It really suits you.' Jai startles from the voice and looks up. He gets out of his chair to greets Sonalia with a big smile. He kisses her hand and invites her for coffee, but she doesnt agree. 'No, not coffee. After leaving me like that at your daughters birthday you have to buy me lunch. Only then I will forgive you.' She gives Jai a puppy face which makes him burst out laughing. He agrees to Sonalia's propasal and as he puts his hand on her back he leads her out of his office.

Ranveer is standing at the hotel ballroom, watching over the workers who are preparing for the charity dinner that will be hold at the hotel this evening. Ranveer is still mocking about his uncle's decision to employ Bani at the Walia Mansion instead of the Walia Hotel. Now he can't come up with lousy excuses to meet her. He thinks to himself that he has to give his uncle credit for his good taste. 'She is beautiful, young and naive. In short an easy prey.' Ranveer grins at his own thoughts and decides to himself that Bani isnt a lost case as yet. He puts his hands in his pocket, shouts some orders and then while wistheling the tune of Kuch Kuch Hota Hai he leaves to his office not having a clue he is closely watched by Raj. On his way he sees how his uncle is leaving the hote accompanied by the gorgeous Sonalia. Ranveer sighs again and wishes he had as much luck with women as his uncle.

Out of breath and with her heart still beating like crazy Rano drops herself on her bed and cries her heart out. She wonders why that jerk hates her so much, what did she ever do to him? Why did he always enjoyed making her look like a fool infront of everybody. Today he deliberately made her trip and fall infront of all his friend. She can hear his voice clearly. "What's up specy, aren't your glasses big enough? Maybe the studentbody should collect money and by you magnifying glasses as a charity." One of Sahil girlfriends giggled and added fuel to the fire saying 'I bet your parents can't afford buying you them. If they would, they would have bought you some decent clothes instead of those market clothes you are wearing! How down class!" She remembers clearly how Sahil kept looking at her, waiting for a reply, but Rano could only look at Pia who laughed along with the group pretending she didn't know her own sister. Rano felt so bad. Sahil's word would never hurt her as much as her sisters indifference. Her sisters shame of her. Everybody was laughing except for Natwar who was just looking at what was happening. The laughing of the gang keeps echoing in Rano's ears. All the scenes keep playing over and over again driving her crazy. In an attempt to make the voices stop she puts her hands on her ears and screams out loud. After a while she gets up and looks at herself in the mirror. She sees a skinny girl standing with teary eyes and glasses. She hates herself and before she realises she smashes the mirror with her hand. As she looks at the glass on the ground and the blooddrops that are sipping from her hand, she feels how the anger inside her is slowly leaving her chest. She drops herself back on the bed and closes her eyes trying to ignore the pain she feels and to forget the hatefull world she is living in. She silently wishes to die. She is sick and tired of this world. Even her didi who once was her source of courage is too busy with her new job to notice the pain and agony she is going through. Rano suddenly gets a long forgotten feeling back. She suddenly misses her mom. The same pain that had taken over her heart after her moms death seems to be back. Bani had taken that feeling away ages ago, but now that Bani is not around the feeling has some way or the other found its way back to Rano's heart. She feels the wound in her heart growing bigger with every heart beat. She realises how much she misses her mother and how much she is in need of her. She keeps lying on her bed for a while thinking about her life and the things she has been through. She loses every sense of reality and when the doorbell brings her back to reality she doesn't have a clue what time it is and how long she has been lying on her bed. With great difficulty she lifts herself from the bed. The dizzyness forces her to grab to the doorpost in order to keep herself standing. She forces herself to take little steps and walk down the stairs. While breathing heavily she gathers all the energy she has left to open the door. She cathes a vague glimps of Natwars face before he collapses and falls down on the floor unconsiously.

Sahil throws a last look in the mirror, grabs his jacket and leaves his room. He is ready to rock todays college party. He grins to himself when he thinks of all the girls that will be around. He meets Bani at the door and greets her. 'Are you going for a hunt.' Shahil laughs and gives a shy look at Bani. 'Today we have a college party and Im going to chill with some friends.' Bani giggles and replies to Sahil saying 'Yeah, yeah, yeah do you think I'm your uncle Jai?! Just dont break too many hearts!' Sahil laughs and tries to change the subject. He asks Bani if he should drop her home. Bani declines the offer, but Sahil insist. On their way they have some good laughs and Sahil tells Bani some funny stories. When they reach Bani's home she invites him in. Sahil is happy and agrees. 'You know Bani I really would like to meet your sister who save my sweet and cute Anjali. I'm really gratefull to her and I feel really guilty for not passing by earlier to thank her.' Bani tells him not to be silly and that he will now be able to meet her sister. 'But Sahil I have to warn you that she is very shy, so please don't think she is being rude if she doesn't say much.' Sahil winks at Bani as they get out of the car and assures her that he wont and that he and her sister will be friends for sure. Bani gives him a smile in reply and turns around to walk towards her small house, only to see an ambulance and alot of people standing infront of it.

Edited by Grumpyyy - 18 years ago

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