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wow your writing is sooo FANTASTIC!!...plz continue soon i reallie love it! 😛

Loved the punch lines...create some more.. hmmmm Can't wait for the next part.

pooooooooor baby
while his parents fight he could be fighting he is fighting for his life sooooo sssaaad
anyway
grrrrrrrrrrrrreat part
cant wait for bani's answer
pls cont soon
and take care

👏 Wow raania, I'm speechless. It's TRULY AMAZING. PLEASEEEEEEEEEE do continue soon. 😳 Wow once again 👏

Excellent Part 5-6, please continue soon.

Originally posted by: loranlee4u

ahhhhh how cute

btw wat do u mean
"we will create more" 😉 lolz jk

its was really cute and emotional... awww poor babyyy 😳

please continue ASAP! 👏

totally agree w/ u there maddi...........😊

seriously hun.......i have just finished reading all the parts of ur FF n trully itz wonderful👏👏.....i m so hoooked😳.......luved it😃.........n i totally luved the fact tht jai was so stubborn😛😉😆

really very well writen.........n i m so dying to find out wat will happen next.....wat will bani do?.......n the same for jai..........plzzzz continue soon hun!!!😳

once again amazing job👏👏👏

Luv,

LiSa

loved it!!!!! plz do cont!!!!! 👏

Thanks yaar so much for all ur lovely comments.....i hope u keep liking it till i finish it...

Part 7:
Bani didn't sleep at all that day and knew what she had to do…for her baby she wil have to go with what....... what Jai wants….in the end he had his way….he should have been a politcian she thought…he would have always got his way around things…she was disgusted….

Why is it so hard to love somebody and yet not be with him…she thought…..i love him so much it hurts…..isnt love supposed to be a blissful thing…. …why me….why me seemed to be her favourite words these days…..The world is corrupted she thought….who even invented the word Love….

Early dawn she went to the hospital to find Jai asleep aside of Jashiv…..why m I so mean…he loves his baby so much and I kept it away from him…..but what about me…oh why m I having these doubts….why does he want me back too…if he wanted he could have just taken Jashiv….but why me…...........silly he wants u to look after his child….stupid me and I actually thought he wanted me….........Bani was thinking all the things but coming to no conclusions….

Does he love me…if he does that what is Roshni…and if he doestn than why did he marry me…all these questions were hammering in her head from all the angles….she could scream!!!!!

A nurse saw her and said..i have never seen such love and dedication…when u are gone he is here and when his gone u are here……u must really love ur child and each other…its so nice to see such a lovely family….......with that the nurse left......... Bani had tears in her eyes….and she thought..if only u knew the truth….

Bani went over and saw the two most precious jewels in her life…her baby and her husband…oh how much I love them…she caressed her sons forehead n had the same urge to do her husbands….she did….luckly Jai didn't open his eyes…he was aware she was there …he smelt her perfume….Bani keep looking at both of them …full of love and care….her heart had the warmth a mother and a wife would have ….. and kept caressing their hair……Jai loved it…he didn't want her to stop….he knew it…she loves him…just a matter of time before I get her to admit it….

Bani smiled a teary smile and a tear drop fell on Jai's cheek..he knew she was crying…but he didn't stir…scared that she might stop….he himself started to get emotional and wanted to hold his wife and to tell her that his the same man that she had fallen in love with and had married…nothing has changed…whatever she thought was all a BIG misunderstanding….

He even knew that roshni had not helped in anyway…she infact had caused the misunderstandings to look real…she did nothing to help Bani when BAni had confronted her with all those questions….and he knew that if again Bani saw Roshni she once again can think of leaving Jai…he had to do something about Roshni…no matter what no way is Bani to find out that she is still working with him…..what little did Jai know that Bani kept up to date with her husbands life style…with a figure like him …no news was kept hidden and she had read everything from Business news to magazines….afterall she was still Mrs Bani D Walia….

more to come today guys...in a little while

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aww she will have to go back to her hubby 😳