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Posted: 19 years ago
well i decided to update it now since i dont have much to do and nothing good is going on the TV....

an hour later

Part 14

Bani was walking on air...she didnt know how to express her feelings..she and a mum again....it felt so new ....as if she is getting pregnant for the first time....maybe because she is happy...very happy.....she touched her stomach and just stood there.....

the doctor was so sweet...once the test proved positive she smiled at Bani and

Doc: so Mrs Walia....aapko ladka chahiye ya ladki????

Bani was over the moon..meh aur maa...she remembered all those nights in the arms of Jai....being loved and cared by him....walking her vision blury as tears of joy started to form in her eyes....meh aur maa....she kept saying....as if trying to convince herself.....than she remembered all those times when Jai would smile at her....or look at her...or just hold her....meh aur maa again the thought went thru her head.....not seeing how she was walking or that people were looking...she was lost in her own world.....

The front receptionsit saw that Mrs Walia was in a very unnatural state....worried she went up to her

Recptist: Mrs Walia???? Mrs Walia????....aap theek toh hai

Bani was on cloud nine....looking at the receptionist as if she was talking greek

REcptist: Mrs Walia ...???? aap theek toh hai...are you okay

Bani: OKAY...Bani saying loudly...im more than okay...laughing smiling crying...all emotions flowing now...she held the receptionist and spun her in a circle....im okay...im very much okay....and than she hugged the receptionist and kissed her cheek....oh im so very very okay....crying laughing smiling

The receptionist didnt know what got into Mrs Walia but something good certainly had happened as it seemed she was very happy......a confused yet smiling receptionist walked back to work....

Bani in amazement walked back to their room....it was almost 10.30am and Jai was still sleeping

Bani: yeh lo..sari duniya jaag gayi hai aur yeh sahaab so rahe hai...Jai????...Jai??? she wanted to tell him...but HOw??? she has never done that before...with Jash it was different...kaise kahu meh....patani kaise feel karege....not wanting to think of all that she kept waking him...Jai Jai...

Jai: hmmmm.....

Bani: Jai????JAI??????...utho nah...Bani got on the bed and started jumping....

Jai: aahmmmm..Bani (in a groggy voice) common babe subha subha.....aab phir chinese khana hai.....listening to that Bani smiled....knowing very well now why she feeling all weird past 2 weeks.......

Bani: loo...sari duniya uthgayi hai aur mere husband hai keh kya kahu....

Jai pulled his hyper wife into an embrace that she couldnt escape.....goodmrng my darling beautiful sexy wife...??kissing her fondling her....and mainly hugging her cose to him.....

BAni lifted one eye brow....darling aur beautiful toh suna hai...sexy???? tabiyat toh theek hai nah husband ji??

Jai: kya karu biwi aisi hai.....his kisses making Bani giggle in her childish tone...which was one of the things that made Jai fall in love with her some 4 years back....

BAni: jai woh meh...smilin and blushing

Jai thought his words made her blush...dammit woman how do u do it...make my hormones go mad....one look from you and im gone.....i love you BAni he thought to himself.....please ek baar kehdo nah that u love me too...

Bani: Jai meh woh

Jai: acha woh saab choro hugging her close to him....yeh batao ..pulling her much more closer to himself that Bani was practically lying in his arms...tum kaal raath koh mujhe jaga kar ..kahane ki tayari kara ke kaise sogayi..???

Bani: acting all innocent...meh aur khana...maine toh nahi kaha...smiling tongue in cheek...

Jai: oh really so i was dreaming it huh...

Bani: lagta toh kuch aisa hi hai...Jai started to tickle her making BAni laugh uncontrollably begging for mercy and finally admitting last nights event....

Jai: u are so beautiful

Bani: i know...(smiling now)

Jai: widening his eyes...do u now???

BAni: ha...aaphi neh toh kaha hai..isiliye....

Jai pulled Bani very close to him and kissed her ever so gently....one thing led to another and i will let u guys ponder on the rest..!!!

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Jai was in the shower while Bani was on the phone to Masi telling her that they will come on Friday night and not saturday morning....so that they are well rested for the pooja and can come back in piece on sunday....
she was missing Jash terribly...and wanted to see him..
after talking to Masi and Jash somewhat in his baby language.......she hung up the call feeling much better

Bani thinking to herself...her hands on her stomach...patani tum beta ho yah beti..joh bhi ho...apne papa jaise rhena acha....smiling she started to get ready for dinner on their last night at the beautiful hotel...

Bani also decided to wait for Monday on the doctors confirmed report on her pregnancy before she could tell Jai!!..as hard as it was she had to be really sure.....

Life couldnt be any better she thought....Goa trip was certainly the best trip of her marriage ....hmmm i wonder if Masi suspected anything!!!!!

In the meantime Jai humming in his shower...yeh BAni kuch zada hi glow kar rahi hai...i wonder whats up...anyway....he still didnt feel good about all the past events that had happened the past 2 years and wanted to hear from Bani himself that she loved him and all was well....oh Bani kui itna tarsati ho????

that night?? 😳



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Posted: 19 years ago
hey i am the one who read it first 😃 great yarr
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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW!! she is pregnant! rocking!!

plz di.. can u update asap!!

cheers!

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!! wow!! wow!! hun....... 👏

totally speechless...... 😳

tht was out of the world 👏 👏 👏 .....ur way w/ words r fabu 👏 .......luved it 😳 😛 😳

can't wait 4 the next part 😳 .....continue soon hun...... 😛

love you! 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was awesome raania plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
cont, can't wait for the next part. 😳 😳

Raania thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks friends so so much

i will definitly update it today...
love you all 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwww she is pregant !!!
that s great can't wait for the next part
plz cotnineus soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 15

Jai could see that his wife was extremely glowing and very happy….on Jai's wish she wore the dress that he wanted her too..this time she didn't even hesitate…it was amazing……..deep velvet blue…thin straps …. snug fitting till the knee and than flaired at the bottom….back was open upto midlength from her waist….….absolutely gorgeous….nobody could tell that she had a son……beautiful toh Bani thi hi…but today there was a glow in her smile …in her eyes…in the way she looked at Jai….he felt the luckiest man on earth

Making their way to the elegant restaurant of the hotel he said

Jai: toh Mrs Walia what would u like to have tonight

Bani: whatever your heart desires Mr Walia…

Jai almost tripped over the stairs….wow…is this woman really my wife…

Bani: what happened…kya hua...common darling lets go…im starving….and winked at Jai….

Jai straightened his tie and looked around to see if anyone had noticed….jeez Bani tum kya kar rahi ho

Bani: kya??? Very innocently…she came close to Jai and caressed his cheeks…common baby breakfast miss hogeya…lunch toh room meh hi tha…aab dinner toh acha se karle….giving him the most seductive smile ever….

Bani knew what she was doing…..Jai darling u don't know what u got in ur hands tonight…

Jai just stared…okay okay..she is just happy….and missing Jash and LOOSING HER MIND…gosh how does she do it…..his hormones were running wild…dammit why did God make woman….and this one to be precise….

Jai looked on and followed his wife….no sexy wife…

Bani went up to the waiter attending to them….our seats please

Waiter: certainly Mrs Walia..looking at Jai…Mr Walia

Bani: thank you …holding Jai they went…every mens eye had to be on Bani but hey every womans eye were on Jai himself….damn they wre lucky…

As they seated themselves…..

Waiter: can I get something for you to drink madam sir….while u look at the menu

Jai: yes…whisky…on the rocks….and madam ke liye….looking at Bani Wine???

Bani: thinking..would wine be wise …guess its just a fruity drink…one glass shouldn't harm

Jai: Bani??? Enquiring what is she thinking…kuch aisa toh nahi..ke pi kar mera rape karne ki soch rahi hai….poor Jai didn't know what hit his wife today…

BAni; yeah I would like a glass of this wine…pointing to the list on the menu….

Waiter: certainly madam sir…i will get to ur drinks and someone will attend to your menu whenever u are ready….i hope that you find tonights entertainment to your liking….enjoy!!!

With that the waiter left…..Jai looking at Bani

Jai: Bani saab theek hai nah

BAni; smiling…kiu???

Jai: nahi bus u don't look your normal self…that's all

Bani: aapko pasant nahi my darling (stressing on this ) husband…

Jai gave her one of his most sexiest looks….oh no…I am loving it he thought……every breathing moment of it…..this made Bani blush to her roots….but only she knew how happy she was….2 more days and I will tell u honey…I promise…

The dinner..the music..the atmosphere was so beautifull…Bani was having a blast….

Just than out of nowhere a lady with another lady friend approached Jai

Lady: Jai…jai Walia…is that you…oh my God …what has it been 6 years??...how are you …???

Bani lifted and eyebrow …as the lady bent down and kissed Jai on the cheek….after what happened with Roshni a very worried and hesitant Jai said

Jai: oh hi Laila…when did u return from London….

Laila: oh my husband and I didn't work out…she got herself cormfotable next to Jai and sat down indicating to her lady friend to go on and she will join later……wow u havnt changed a bit…still the same sexy hunk you were…I heard u got an empire of Walia industries now…touching Jai over his shoulders….ignoring Bani totally

Bani: uuhhhmmmm…clearing her throat and taking sip of her wine…..one after another….yeh kabab meh hadi kaun hai…lifting an eyebrow asking Jai with her eyes…

Jai knew what Roshni did to his marriage and he didn't want it to ever happen again….he knew that he had to clear this garbage away…she was also a past…again a hidden past from Bani…kya yaar acha khasa life chal raha hai phir yeh kaha se …..looking up as an indication of silent prayer….kya yaar tu mere saath aisa har waqt kiu kar rahe ho (asking God)..actually it was more of a beg….

Looking at Bani….honey (stressing on honey)…this is my friends wife…

Laila cut in….EX-WFE….

Jai: yeah..ex-wife….Laila…and Laila this beautiful woman here is my wife…Bani…Bani Walia

Laila: putting her right hand to her chest….my my u got married…oh common Jai what did she have to do to tie u down..you were a touch catch….

BAni was extending her hand to say hi when she just picked up the wine bottle and poured into the glass…..kamini she thought…..mere Jai ko choro…Jai knew BAni was getting mad…
Only Bani knew it wasn't madness but jealousy…

Bani: aahmm..so Laila what brings u to Goa

Laila looking at Bani…hmm so she talks too….oh nothing I just needed a break from things and we have a nice bunglow here that I can spend time at….why don't u come sometime Jai….giving Jai a smile….(indicating u know like we used to)…

A very ubcomfortable Jai was like…nahi I cant ..we are leaving tomrw….bani gave a stern look at Jai…wrong answer honey…she thought…but well she wasn't going to let another Roshni ruin her marriage…..Jai was hers and only hers..

Laila: so Bani what do u do…are you also from the business world…

Bani: oh certainly giving her one of the sweetest smiles and holding Jai's hands over the table…… I spend time shopping and taking care of MY man….stressing over MY…and his little man…our little baby boy…..there happy…..

Laila was like what??

Bani: tumne kiu apne pati ko chor di?? Sweetly she asked…this made Laila very uncormfortable…

Bani: very sweetly she added…I don't mean to be rude but u just said not wife but ex wife…so I was just curious….gotha ya witch thought Bani…..not waiting for her reply she looked at Jai….

Bani: baby im tired and full and I think the wine really got me today….shall we leave …standing up…looking at Jai most seductively and lovingly…its our last night im sure u don't want to spend it with some OLD friend of urs huh baby???

Jai smiling loved this side to his wife….he knew that his never going to loose her again and nothing can come inbetween them….looking at Bani getting the hint….

Jai: oh yes love..im tired too…and we are done with dinner..plus don't want this romantic night to end do we….im sorry Laila….looking at a dumbfounded Laila….maybe when u are in Mumbai next u can come visit and meet our son aswell….till than take care…

Taking Bani's hand and holding her waise both left….an embarrassed and slightly flushed Laila didn't know what got her..she got up to look for her next prey…

Jai: whispering in Bani's ear making her shiverish and hot…"that was sweet Mrs Walia"

Bani: whispering back…"that was nothing…next time thumari koi ex samne ai toh meh uski murder kardugi..samjhe"…pinching Jai….

Jai: ouch….hun suno nah

Bani just walked into their room and....

more to come!!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
😉 omg i read it first. awesome 👏 👏 keep it up yaar can't wait for the next part. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwww soooo sweet. it good to know bani could handle any of jai's ex's with ease now.

update soon, can't wait to read more!

anam

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