Determination...conclusion page27 - Page 12

hey Raania,

WOW!!! hun😊....i have finally caught up w/ ur FF.......but watz this??.... ur ending it😭....y??.....it was one of the koolest FF ever😛......i will really miss it......😭😭

i mean u got me so hooked😳....i cudn't stop reading....itz as if i had forgot to blink for a while now😳...😉😆

i luved ur FF hun❤️.......it was one of the best ff i have read😳....n tht too w/ so lil prob n a happy ending.....(my fav)....yipeeeeee😛

i luved the way jai confessed his love to bani.......it was so sweet😳 n emotional😭.....really hun...u r a brilliant writer👍🏼 n very talented 2👏

hope u continue to write more n more FF's for us😃......n as for now i m egarly waiting for ur last part😊....although itz killing me inside....like i said i will miss it😭

continue soon....take care hun😛

lotz of luv,🤗

*mwah*

~*LiSa*~

hey hun please continue soon 😛

Hey guys

thanks so much for all your loving words...i am sorry i didnt update it recently ...work has been crazy plus my sisters shadi plans is going on so been a hectic week...
i might contnue just a wee little bit before i end it coz if i end it now it will look too sudden...hope u guys enjoy it...

love you all and here goes more......i tried to make up for the missed days....!!!!
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A sulking roshni turned to find Jai right behind her…..

Jai: gohs roshni besahrmi ki bhi koi hadh hoti hai…..he took Bani's hands…chale honey!!!...out song is about to play and I wanna dance …..

cont'd

2 months later!!!!!

Bani was so happy…things were so good…Jai was so nice to her….he was always around her and Jash…..he was always at home on time…he did spend late nights at the office but made sure that he called her and let her know of his plans…. …everything was going on really smooth……she didn't even care for Jigyasa's criticisms or Ranveers looks…she was really happy in her own little world…kabhi kabhi dil meh daar rheta tha magar phir bhi woh khust thi…..

…Jash was walking now and would fall wherever he went…it was such a cute picture to look…father and son had such a good time together….whenever Jai got home no matter how late or tired he got he alwys went and saw Jash …and no matter how early he had to leave he had to make sure Bani was there to see him off……

Bani and Jai's marriage was complete…every moment spent with him was magic….she didn't want this magic to stop…….

Magar ek baath Jai ko abhi bhi satati thi…it wasn't Roshni..she was far picture ahead from their world…Jai had made sure that she would never ever come inbetween him and Bani again……Jigs aur Ranveer ko toh sabhi jante the…nobody even cared what they got up to…jai smiled thinking how Jash would always go upto Jigs and call her Ba Ba Ba…and Jigs would have to pick him up not able to resist the childs love…..he knew that one day even she would accept Bani…..but kyat hi joh Jai ko abhi bhi satati thi

He wanted to hear from Bani's mouth that even she loved him….he was yearning to hear it…for her to say it….life had never been better for Jai but he still wanted to know…in his heart he knew that she did orelse she would never have given this much love to him…he felt complete…everday he had her to go home to…every night he had her to hold…every morning he would wake up to find her in his arms...but he still had to know how Bani felt…he knew what he did wasn't all that exceptable but now that things were changed and she had seen that he was a changed man and no other woman meant anything to her than why wont she say it……..he was scared to even think that Bani did not love him…..

Yes, the almight strong business man Mr Jai Walia was scared of this one fact in life…!!!! But he also knew that he had to give Bani time…time for her hurt to go away…time for her to accept him fully as her husband again…time for her to realize her love for him…but how much was the question..how much time would she take or need…and could he survive that long….

Numerous times he had said I love you to Bani but she would just shy away or smile….or would just hug Jai but not say it in return…akhir kui????

On monday!!!

Masi: Bani beta…

Bani: feeding Jash…jee masi…

Masi: meh agle hafte (next week) chandigar jana chati thi….Bani gave masi a puzzled look…akhir aab kiu masi jana chati hai…..

Bani: magar kiu masi..aap yaha khush nahi hai…aap hamare saath nahi rhena chate hai…Jai ko aur mujhe….aur jash ko aap ki zarurat hai…she was all nervous now….kiu Masi

Masi: aarh beta tu toh kham kham pareshan horahi hai..meh hamesha ke liye toh nahi jarahi hu..sirf ek hafte…hamari joh khoti hai waha pe …meh chati hu ke meh waha pe ek puja rakhu kiu ki hamari khadan ki jade toh wahase hi shuru hui thi….isiliye….aur meh soch rahiti…ke

Bani: kya Masi ….cleaning Jash up and giving to Mrs John…..looking at Masi now….

Masi: beta mujhe lagta hai ki tumhe aur Jai ko bhi ana chahiye…..magar…

Bani: magar kya masi….yeh toh bhouth hi achi baath hai

Masi; meh weekend meh nikal ti hu Jash ke saath…Tum aur Jai …meh chati hu ke tum aur Jai kahi ghum ke Shaniwar (Saturday) shubha ko pooja meh ao…..mujhe pata hai mata rani ke kripa se saab kuch theek hai magar yeh tum dono ke liye…Jash ke bina kuch paal saath hoge….kuch ache paal….

Bani: was a scarlet red now…magar masi woh….

Masi: BUS mujhe kuch aur nahi sunna…maine phesla kardi hai toh kardi hai….meh Jai se baath karti hu abhi ….usko phone lagao…..

Bani: looked stunned at masi…yeh masi ko kya hua

Masi: Bani….beta phone lagan a

Bani: getting up…jee masi….

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Jai was having such a hectic day at the office…..Sahil and Ranveer were working on this project and PUshkar was on leave for his shadi…..and Aditya was handling the new project they recently had…so he was all left alone for the day to day decisions to make…and that meant reading endless proposals and going thru various meetings…not to forget the endless calls…he needed a break bigtime…..

He sat on his chair…undid his tie…(isiliye meh tie nahi prefer karta…magar meri pyari si biwi ko kaun samjhe )…he must say though..he did impress a few faces at the office with his dashing new looks…..high collar coloured shirts….new perfumes….more variety in colours of suits…he was a brand new man…..

Phew what a day and its only 3….

Ring ring

Ring ring……..his cell rang

Jai: another call..he was going to cut it when his face lit up….wow BAni…..must be my lucky day…

Jai: heeeellllllllllooooooooo…very seductively he said…

BAni: ummmm Jai…

Jai: hi baby

Bani: aware of her turning beet root red…with Masi standing there and smiling from left to right….

Jai: how u doing…missing me???

Bani; woh…amhh…meh…ummm…Masi…

Jai: oh Masi hai waha pe…toh chalo ek kiss phone par do

Bani: tum pagal ho…smiling…meh phone masi ko de rahi hu…

Jai: ek minute yaar…meh apne hi patni se ek kiss toh mang raha hu…..kitna kaam karta hai yeh thumar pyara pati aur tum ek kiss nahi deh sakti….bechara pyar ka mara….

BAni couldn't help smiling ….aaj kaal Jai was too romantic…..bani handed the phone to masi giggling…

Masi heard the continued conversation from Jai

Jai: kitna tarasta hai pyar ki khatir….itna busy din aur meri pyari patni mujhe ek kiss bhi nahi de sakti…..and than he was about to blow kiss on the phone when he heard giggles from masi

Masi: acha hai munna lage raho…magar meh thumar pyar patni nahi thumar masi hu…laughing

Jai: BAni ki bachi…meh tumhe dhek luga….laughign…ji masi…

Masi conveyed over the phone what she wanted Jai to do….Jai on the other side was beaming with a smile…gosh why didn't he think of that….

Jai: ha Masi aap bikul theek kherahi ho…I need a break from all this too…..meh abhi hi program banata hu…….

Masi: acha toh theek hai….meh bhouth hi khush hu….Bani se aur baath karna hai

Jai: nahi masi aab toh meh usko sham ko hi miluga…

A smiling Masi put the phone down and looked at Bani…well beta that is all settled…Jai arrangements kar raha hai….great …..Jash ki fikar mat karna he will be fine with me and Mrs John

Mrs John: ha ha madam…hum ok rahega….

All were laughing at Mrs Johnson's broken hindi….
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It was past mid-night and Jai wasn't home yet…Bani was restless and couldn't fall asleep…askhir yeh kaha hai…abhi tak aye kiu nahi….call bhi nahi ki….thinking and thinking….she fell asleep around 12.30 am or so….

Jai creeped in slowly into the room…he was so tired but inorder for them to leave next week he had to make his part of the job is all done….he saw Bani cuddled up on his side of the bed with her phone in her hand….uff he thought I didn't call her and tell her I would be late…aaj toh bhouth he naraaz hogi….he slowly took the cell and put the blankets on her…he was too tired to shower and got in bed ….

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It was going to be a beautiful mrng today…Bani woke up with a headache…..and she wasn't feeling too good…all urky inside…..she knew she hadn't slept well last night that's why….
Nothing that a nice long hot shower wont help…….

As she got out of the bathroom she saw that Jai was so deep in sleep and he looked so peaceful….Bani started to do everything loudly in the room….close the dresser…the jewellery box….everything….Jai stirred at the noise….yeh kya subha sbuha horaha hai….
He looked with a sleepy eye and saw Bani standing up with hands on her waist looking very pretty …..but mad at the sametime….oh ooow…

Jai: squeezing his eyes opening (Bani had opened the curtains so that the suns ray would come in)…..Good Morning baby

Bani: Morning

Jai: putting his hands back of his head and just smiling away….has anyone ever told you that u look very very pretty when mad…

Bani: meh aur mad nahi toh…scarcastically she said

Jai: oh knowing his Bani too well

Bani: ha kiu hogi akhir meh toh aapki patni hu…mera farz hai aapki baath suni…(very sweety she said all this singing it…) isiliye achi patni ki tarah meh Masi ke saath Tuesday ko chal jaogi Chandigar…theek hai….i mean after all hamare bache ka sawal ha na..uski look after bhi toh maa ko karna chahiye..

Jai wasn't expecting this…..
Jai: magar Bani tum kaise ja sakti ho…maine toh Goa ki sari plans banali hai…

bAni: kya karu…jab aap mere saath aisa karsakte hai…toh mein kiu nahi…hmmmm she turned and left for downstairs……hmmm I will get u honey this time….kiu mujhe call nahi kiya …hmmm

Jai: aareh yaar meri biwi itni ziddi kiu hai….Jash came up to his dad n started talking in his baby talk…..daddaadda….

Jai: aab tu hi bata apni maa ko….meh toh thak geya samhake …kaam bhi important hai naa….

Both were just laughing

At the breakfast table…

Rano: hey dids (she loved Bani as her own sister)…aaj shopping chale….

Bani: yah why not….khoob maza ayega….mujhe chandigar jane ke liye kuch saman bhi leni hai

Jai: Masi dheko naa Bani chandigar jana chati hai

Masi: aareh toh theek hai na beta mujhe bhi kuch help hojayegi…

Bani smled…thank you Masi you agreed to help me….

Jais face fell just like little kids when asking for candy don't get any…he looked pretty upset…

The weekend came by and Masi and BAni played along with Jai….Jai was upset but what could he do…he would just join them at the pooja on Saturday….

Meanwhile Bani didn't know what was wrong with her…she was getting sick very easily these days….colds….and than sore head…and feeling lazy…she said she needed to eat good and sleep well these days…

It was Friday and as Jai was about to pack up for the day….Aditya all smiles his usual self came in his office

Aditya: aareh Jai tum yaha kya kar rahe ho…

Jai: kiu kya hua

Aditya: aareh kaal thumara flight hai Goa ke liya aur tum yaha ho….ghar jao aur aaram karo

Jai: kya yaar tumbhi….Bani nahi jarahi hai toh kaise trip

Aditya: started laughing..kamaal karte ho Jai…magar maana padega…Bani toh tumse bhi smart nikli….areh stupid she must be playing with you….she called me two days ago and got all the ticket arrangements done….aur kaal raath ki flight hai tum dono ki…meh Masi ko aur tumlogo ko saath meh airport choru ga….Masi niklegi chandigar aur tum Goa…

Jai couldtn believe it and started smiling…BAni….oh BAni…u watch out…

But deep inside he was very happy...maybe Bani will confess her love this weekend...he packed all ready to go home!!!
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hey guys sorry for spelling errors...hope u like it....will finis my story in 2 more parts..

love you all 😳

wow! loevely..butt again..unfortunately i didnt understand anything..except for the english. lol

aww hun it waz sooo cute!!..keep up the FAB work and do plz continue soon! 👏

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thanks guys heaps...will definitly continue tomrw... 😳

loved it di!

plz do continue!!

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