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tht was awsomeeeeeee omg i loved it sooooooooooooooo much plz do contiue soon

wow simply amazing yaar..plz continue soon!

that was REALLY GOOD! please continue! cant wait to read more!

i feel sad fer jai ... actually i feel sad fer bani... jai is soo strong 😆

nvm ... welll newayz do continue!

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what a out burst from both of them 👏
i wish both of them said their feeling like this
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she closed her eyes for a min and remember how painful her pregnancy was …early mrng pukes…swelled legs…..sore breasts….mood swings and most of all cravings…she used to crave for stuff t

he got hold of her duppata laughing his evil laugh....and threw in on the floor…he kissed Bani hard on her right shoulder making a mark almost bruising…...Bani tried moving away....before Jai got hold of her ...oh no u dont honey!!! he said ......i will tell you how much I have wanted you BAni…..i have been so bloody patient with you and u..u have the nerve to question me…..he got her earrings….necklace…kissing her demanding her to let go.......undit her kameez tops buttons….....bani closed her eyes…..she was mad scared furious yet she had this hidden feeling that she didn't want to let go…...how can this man arouse feelings in me when im so mad at him.....she didn't want Jai to know that he was not the only one who was craving for what they once had…..Jai started to kiss Bani…on her eyes…ears….cheeks…chin…neck…shoulder…her chest…going down slowly touching her everywhere…one thing led to the other and Bani was lost in her own little world which she had forgotten that existed…..hunger led to passion …and passion

Clothes bundled up all over the floor ….windows open…the bedroom phone in pieces on one corner…her jewellery on the other…the weather singing for them…….it was raining

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hey guys thanks for letting me know..i must have slipped reading this part on fanfics...i did get carried away and in future will keep it in mind...

sorry guys

cheers
Raania

Part 11:

Next few days Bani stayed away from Jai as much as possible…after what happened that night she knew that if she pushed too much it can happen again….but one thing was for sure though they were husband and wife once again in every aspect…………….

Jash was a happy baby…he was loving the attention he was getting and was growing day by day in becoming more playful and demanding…..just like his father was….

Friday afternoon the whole Walia House was set up as a bride…it looked so beautiful with lights and candles all over…..all the beautiful flowers everwhere…..it was just amazing…there was a big cake in the centre for J & B and their little bundle….

Jash and Jai wore cherwani…same type and exact same colour..both father and son looked amazing……Jash even had a pagri on his head….what a cute little bundle he was….very gorgeous….Jai was taking his son around to meet everybody….all his employees …business associates…and the whole lot….

All the Walia family were there…..Sahil his wife Rano….Pushkar (Jai's right hand and best friend) and his girl friend soon to be wife Pia…Anu..Jigs daughter and her husband Rohit…..Dadi …everybody……Ranveer with his wife Raashi were there too….Raashi and Bani wre of the same age and best friends..however Ranveer didn't treat Raashi right as there was a whole lot of controversy when they got married….…Rano was like a little sister to Bani…Pia however liked Bani but Bani didn't like her coz she manipulated PUshkar a lot….and Pushy was Jai's favourite…she didnt like the way Pia demanded Pushkar at times….an she made sure that Pia knew it whenever needed…Pia liked Bani a lot even though bAni taunted her most of the times…she saw Bani as her big sister she never had…..all the girls came from very rich families as Bani!!!

Masi: aareh munna….ja kar Bani ko lao…cake katna hai nah

Jai: oh yeah Masi…my princess is not here yet..laughing he went to get Bani

Roshni entered…..and ahead of her was Pia Pushkar Sahil and Rano..they were helping guests infront in getting their seats…

Pia: excuse me I don't see an invitation card for you here

Roshni: giving and evil look…I don't need and invitation….

Pia: im sorry Mr Walia ke strict instructions hai that only invited guests are allowed and im sorry but ur name is not here….Pia didn't like Roshni much coz Roshni always tried to compete with her and make her feel small at company parties when she went with pushkar….

Roshni: what the hell….before she could complete

Jigs; arreh rohsni pleas ao na..

Roshni: wahi toh kar rahi hu..magar koi aane de toh nah

Jigs: Pia beta….please use aane do…she is my guest

Pia: magar Jigs aunty she is….

Jigs: its okay I will tell Jai

A furious Roshni went in .giving Pia the evil looks….how dare jai not include me in his list….

Meantime In the bedroom

Jai: baby??...baby??...hun??? he looked for Bani in the room and came across her near the dresser setting her ghagra….

Bani had never worn a ghagra and this one was showing her tummy and it was open in the back…she wasn't too cormfortable….thank God the dupatta helped..but still she was thinking twice…..

It was an elegant organish reddish piece with thick borders at the edge of the skirt and sleves…..beatuiful dupatta with the same design but see thru in the middle…..she had her hair all pulled up right in the centre on top of her head and curled all down…it was stunning….a single bindya on her forehead with bindi on as a ticka…sindoor in place….matching huge necklace and earrings…not forgetting her mangalsutra……..she had thick kangans that Masi gave her as bangles on both her hands and her huge rock on her left hand….she looked stunning…Masi had made sure that Bani looked beautiful today as her bahu had returned to her sons life and not alone but with her grandson she had awaited so many years…..that was her gordh bhrai token that Bani had missed…Bani remembered how Masi had said that she understood Bani and how shel felt in Jai's life but she also told Bani that Jai loves her more than anything and that's why she is back in his life again….she had kissed Bani and her baby and wished them all the happiness….Bani had got so emotional…she had bent down …took Masi's blessings and hugged her really hard…a emotional Masi and Bani had both come to terms with the situation

Jai stopped a sec to admire his wife…damn she looks so beautiful….woman just look pretty in outfits…but with Bani..she makes those outfits worth wearing…..

Jai: honey?????…bAni was lost in her thoughts

Jai: if you are done with admiring on how gorgeous u looking tonight than maybe u could enlighten the atomosphere downstairs with ur beauty….

Bani realizing Jai was there turned and said to him

Bani: Jai tum hume kiu lekar aye….agar tum jash ko chate toh meh understand karti…magar mujhe kiu….

Jai was totally shocked to hear that question come ouf of Bani so suddenly …he wasn't expecting it…..and she was so calm….Bani was really serious and had been thinking something very hard…….

Jai: Bani meh

Ranveer: mamaji…knock knock..aapko aur mami ko neeche bularahe hai

Jai; hum ate hai Ranveer…thanks

Bani: koi baath nahi chaliye…

Jai stopped Bani…straighted her bindiya and kissed her on her forehead full of love and affection…I will answer ur question Bani..i promise….when the time is right…

Bani thought when Jai when wil the time be right…

Both J&B walked down the stairs…looking elegant….all the photographers were clicking their cameras non-stop

People would comment…wow look!!...or don't they look so beautiful and happy!1…or no wonder Mr Walia went and got his wife back!!....or who could not want a wife that beautiful!!! or both are so lucky

Roshni was burining with jealousy and rage and swore she would get back at Jai…agar meh khush nahi toh tum bhi nahi hoge Jai…!!1….

Jai held onto Bani's waist and made his way to his baby who was laughing seeing his parents….jai holding his baby on one hand and wife another….smiled at the cameras and said…

Jai: today I feel the luckiest man alive…I have a beautiful gorgeous wife and she has given me the most wonderful gift on our 4th wedding anniversary…our little son…..he looks at Bani…

Jai; tumne poocha tha nah Bani…maine kiu tumhe laya wapas….aur sirf jash ko nahi…its because….because he looked deep in BAni's eyes with his head turned towards her hands still on her shoulders…its because " I LOVE U"…I cannot imagine a life without you Bani…..when u left me I couldn't face life again…I had become a zombie who would do the normal routine in a day but I had forgotten to live…it was because of u Bani…when I went looking out there for you and couldn't find you u don't know what went thru me…I was so scared that something might have happned to you…..the public was told you wre studying but only in my heart I knew what truly had happened and could not forgive myself for letting u go……I should have been there for you and I was not….im sorry Bani magar meh badal juka hu……I loved you and I had thought my love alone was enough…but I guess I need u to feel that love too and be there for you …Jab mujhe thumari pata chala tha toh maine kuch nahi socha and only wanted to get u back…back into my life….but I didn't know how to…..bhagwan ne woh bhi mere liye aasan kardi and I got the biggest surprise of my life..my son…our son..hamari pyar ki nashani…I promise you I wont give u a reason to complain anymore…just ..he looked down again and with tears in his eyes…he said…just don't leave me again…shayad meh aab ji nahi pao…..thumare bina….coz I need you our son needs you…..
As much as time u need to trust me…take it I will give it to you but promise me that u will never leave me….

A very emotional Bani didn't know what hit her…she had not expected this….Jai loves her so much and she left him…she just shook her head as a yes too emotional to say anything….…how could she have been so stupid and not trust him….how could she even think of depriving him of his son….ohhh Jai she thought im so sorry…so very sorry she thought…..

The whole crowd got so emotional…even Jigs started to cry….everyone knew how much this two people loved each other and what time had done to them….

Bani with silent tears just hugged a very emotional Jai with their son hovering over their head…mamam mama dada dada…an emotional Jai and a crying Bani both laughed together looking at their son…and the crowd joined in….

Everyone seemed so happy but in one corner a selfish caniving Roshni just ful of rage and agnony cursed Bani under her breath….

The party began in full swing…everybody having a blast…..Mrs John was dancing and tango and making everyone laugh…..
Jash was getting sleepy so Bani let Mrs John enjoy …excusing herself her and masi took Jash to bed…..she changed him ….wiped him up with warm water and let him sleep…masi returned to the party informed by Bani that she will be down one min....while Bani came out of the room…she was stopped by Roshni

Rohsni: yeh maat samajna tum jeet gayi!!!!!

Bani: nahi meh toh aisa kabhi hi nahi samjhu gi

Rohsni: puzzled at Bani's calmness and reply…..shayad tum samjhi nahi

Bani: nahi Roshni…folding her hands infront of her very calm…..meh theek samjhi hu aab…shayad tum nahi samjhi……meh kaise jeeth sakti hu jaab ki koi competition hi nahi thi….common Roshni….why are you tyring to kid…there is no fight….Jai loves me..and only me….i had been a fool all these years trying to look for something that was in my own backyard…..so nahi Roshni there is nothing for me to win……you on the other hand need some serious therapy….kiu aisi cheez ke piche bharahi ho joh thumari nahi hai….na hi kabhi ho sakti hai….BAni for the first time was so confident because she knew now what Jai felt and wanted…

Roshni: how dare you???...she was so mad…to hear the truth…….

Bani; no Roshni ..how dare you…mere hi ghar meh mujhe question karne ki himat kaise hui thumari……I would suggest that if u cant be part of my happiness than don't create a scene and leave….this woman was too much BAni thought…no wonder Jai aruge nahi karte ise….

Roshni: u u..b****she tired to slap Bani…Bani held her hand

Bani: aaha aah…maine kaha tha nah Roshni…meh phele wali BAni nahi hu…she swang Roshni's hand down and inreturn gave her one good slap on her right cheek…..now leave my house and don't ever think of showing ur face again…..

A sulking roshni turned to find Jai right behind her…..

Jai: gosh roshni besahrmi ki bhi koi hadh hoti hai…..he took Bani's hands…chale honey!!!...out song is about to play and I wanna dance …..

2 months later!!!!!

Hi guys, this is the second last part of my fanfic...next part i will be ending this fanfic.....thanks for al your support in this one and once again i apologise for the rated stuff i put in...i honestly wasnt aware of the rules...

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how cute!!!! please continue rannia 👏

awesom part dear

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