Determination...conclusion page27 - Page 9

great part.loved it.just too good.eagerly waiting for the next part. 😊

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh where's d rest?!!!!!!!!!!!aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhh hehehehe i am addicted tot his ff.. i think its the best soo far, since its in a different stroyline all together.. it's a bit more mature than the rest... i like it! lol heheheheh can u include a scene where rosh gets a slap from bani and jai ehhehehhe that wud be fuuuuunnnnyyyyy lol heheh well do write soon k?

awesome part
bani kicked some tush but so did roshni :(
poor jai run buddy
pls cont soon
hope little bambito is okay

omg ... that ROSHNI 😡 besharam lady! gosh! cant she just leavve jai alone!!!!

well no one can hes just too hot 😉 😆
but seriously!
poor jai i wonder wats waitin fer him 😕

please continue!

😳 ohhh thanks guys so much for ur lovely comments...i promised tomrw...but i will add some today before it all ends....
and i will take into consideration into all ur thoughts... 😛

lots of love
Raania 😳 😳

wow your a great writer keep up the good work

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well well well dont think i am mad..... coz i am laughing like that...... i am laughing coz i was imazing Bani beating Jai with a broom & the baby laughing, clapping & jumping....😆 😆 😆 😆

plzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzz cont soon 😊

simply love ur ff.......... 😃

WOW! didi.. 2 good! jai tu to gaya aaj!! lol!

roshni i am coming to kill ya!! 😡

awesome part didi... plz do continue!!

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Part 10:

hey friends here goes part 10...i promise i will make part 11 and 12 even more masala

lov ya all
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Bani was so mad….she couldn't do anything to calm her nerves….was it anger that he wasn't there for Jash or was it jealousy that roshni picked up his phone when she was expecting him to pick it up….or was it both…
Uff ……….mujhe kya chahe jo kare…Roshni ke saath rangralia kare ya phir mare….mujhe kya….mujhe kiu bura lagraha hai…meh kiu uuse jealous hu…..akhir pichle do saal maine uske bina hi guzari hai….maine apni pregnancy survive karli toh yeh kya hai….

she closed her eyes for a min and remember how painful her pregnancy was …early mrng pukes…swelled legs…..sore breasts….mood swings and most of all cravings…she used to crave for stuff that she couldn't have…thanks to Mrs John atleast she get stuff to eat to get her going…..and to add onto that the 32 hour labor…..oh God…she didn't even want to think of it…..she had missed Jai so much there…she had known had he been around she would have got all that attention she needed…..yet she couldn't have him around her …oh how she craved to be with him all those months…to see him…feel his presence…to be held by him…..

Thinking all that Bani had tears in her eyes…but she wiped it away with anger…Nahi aaj meh toh uske ghabar lugi…if he wants me and his son in his life than he will have to live up to that expectation….what Bani wanted was her husband back in every way but she just didn't want to admit it to herself….

She kept on waiting

Jai was worried…what happened last time came flicking back to him and he got so scared….oh God meh kya karu….last time Bani almost killed herself in rage and hurt and than she left me….aur agar aaj…no no…..she couldn't do that…she knows I will claim rights on Jash if she did…but what if she did????...thoughts were killing him….oh how I wish I could strangle Roshni…she was a past of his he wish he could just erase…..

Kya karu meh…kuch aisa joh Bani ka gussa kum kare…if he knew his wife she was a wild tigeress and he knew she was all ready to pounce on him as he got home…mujhe kuch karna hoga…..magar what….

Bani saw lights in the driveway….hmmmm agaye maharaj….it was almost 9pm…..she had called around 7.15 when Roshni picked the phone and now it was almost two hours….aab mila inko fursat……

Jai got out of the car and was taking his laptop out when he accidently closed the door and closed his index finger……shit shit shit….he cursed….and looked at his almost swollen finger….ouch shit…aaj hi hona tha saab….he made his way to the house like a scared kid…he was freaking hungry too….

Jai: laptop bag in the other hand with this one in his mouth…..Bani????

Bani was about to say….when she saw his hand…..Kya hua…running up to him

Jai: seeing the look of distress on his wifes face knew immediately what to do…

Jai: meh siriyo se gir geya tha…..

Bani: eyes widening KYA??? Kiya kar rahe the aap…dhikai nahi diya…she was mad….but not about the call but about her hubby who got hurt……why do u have to have to carry everything to the car…naukar kaha the saab…aur siri kiu…lift nahi use karsakte the….do haath do…meh dheku kya hua??

Jai was stunned….wow when I entered she was ready to eat me up alive aur aab…mujhe yeh nahi pata tha it would have been so easy….supressing a smile

Jai: nahi its okay….thora sa swollen hai…it will get better…aur kahi nahi chot lagi…hai …badan meh thori se dard hai agar tum chaho toh…..aaahaam….meh aaram karuga toh theek hojauga

Bani not listening to Jai who was trying to pull his hands snatched his hands and took a look at it…she gave him a slap on his upper arm…..jai was amused at the thought and Bani was very serious…

Bani: tum undhe ho…dek kar kaam nahi kar sakte

Bani: aareh yeh toh kitna fulgaya hai….and its bleeding a little…chalo mere saath

JaI: Bani…its ….one stern look from Bani and he knew she wouldn't listen to him….gosh Jai Walia ko aise toh kabhi kisi ne nahi data…

Bani took him to their bathroom …washed the finger with cold water…and than wiped it off…rubbed some antiseptic onto it…and than gently blew on it….she was hurting to see Jai hurt….
Jai all this time kept starring at her from the mirror…..agar tumhe meri itna hi fikar hai toh kiu chor kar gayi thi tum Bani……??? He thought to himself…rather asking her with his eyes

Bani looked up at that instant sensing the question and looked at Jai with concern and love in her eyes…tum dek kar kaam nahi kar sakte…dheko kitna laal hogeya hai….kya tumhe apni kheyal nahi hai…she asked him with her eyes…..Bani knew it that she loved this man and wanted to care for him but she just couldn't trust him…..she looked away…..

Jai noticed the love and concern and saw that flicker of emotion in her eyes and than suddenly it became rock hard…dammit Bani tum kiu nahi samajti…he thought

Jai: Jash kaisa hai

Bani: agar tumhe itni fikar hoti toh tum yeh nahi puchte

Jai: what the hell do u mean bani…getting mad and his voice rising….

Bani putting everything away in the cupboard replied back….u know what I mean….meh thak gayi hu samjhe tum…agar tumhe roshni itni hi pasand thi toh (she was shouting now) toh toh tumne mujse shadi kiu ki….KIU??????
Agar mere liye ya mere bache ke liye thumare paas waqt nahi hai toh kiu laye hume yaha par

Jai was hit like a thunder bolt…what the hell are you saying Bani????

Bani: loosing it…what I mean …u want to know what I mean….holding Jai's hands she pulled him to the room….and threw the reports at him…Jash ki tabiyat kharab thi…sham se…sham se meh yeh thumari (picking up the house cordless phone and throwing it on the floor….it went all over the place in pieces) thumari stupid si cell par try kar rahi hu…mujhe usko doctor ke paas lejana tha…he was picking up temperature aur meh dar gai hi….aur phir tumne hi doctor ka arrange kiya tha….she was just screaming on top of her voice…..meh meh uss Roshni ko nah…agar woh mere saamne ayjaye toh meh meh…she was hysteria now…..

Jai: kya..tum…Jash??...all worried about his son…..

Bani: oh stop ur acting..please meh bhouth dhek juki hu…..i have had enough…aab mere bache ko to chor do….putting her hands together as a sigh of plead she shouted PLEASE…..

Bani: agar tumhe woh itni hi pasand hai toh usko ghar meh kiu nahi rhaklete ho….aaa…kiu nahi mujhe chor dete ho….kiu??? akhir kiu mujse shadi ki tumne….

Jai had had enough…he could throttle her neck right here right now….Bani stop it…

Bani: kiu bura laga sach sunke…..

Jai: bani jaab tumne phone

Bani: mujhe kuch nahi suna hai…samjhe tum….putting her hands on her ears…KUCH NAHI

Jai: bani meri baath toh sunno

Bani: still with her hands…just go…just go to her….

Jai: was so mad he swore that he will not spare Roshni….bAni meri baath toh sunno…meh…

Bani: mujhe nahi sunna…meh thak gayi hu…kiu lekar aye tum mujhe…kiu …isike liye….meh bhi insaan hu,….mujme bhi feelings hai….mujhe bhi dard hota hai….agar Jash ko kuch hojata toh??????????

For a second Bani saw fear on Jai's face and than it passed as quickly……..

Jai: Bani Jash ko kuch nahi hoga…..meh hu na aur phir….she wouldn't let him finish

Bani: NAHI…tum nahi ho…agar Aditya uncle nahi ate toh meh kya karti meh nahi janti…..par tum..tum

Jai: had enough….BANI SHUT UP…JUST SHUT UP OK….MEH BATHROOM GEYA THA .FRESH HONE KIU KI MUJHE GHAR ANAA THA…TUMKO AUR JASH KO DHEKNA THA……I don't know when Roshni came into my room and she took that call….sach mano mera meh uske saath nahi tha

Bani: jhoot phir jhoot…..she looked at him and said ….tum usi ke saath the…uske ghar meh…bistar me…isiliye itni der se aye ho

Jai had enough…….u are going to regret ever saying that Mrs Bani Walia….Patience ki bhi koi hadh hoti hai…and I am way past it……..with that he moved towards her ..anger on face………hunger in eyes…….Bani moved back..hey bhagwan maine yeh kya kardi……she felt the walll….Jai one hand on her right side wall from her waist and the other on the left side of the wall near her shoulder…."kya kaha tumne"..meh aur roshni"…"bistar"….tumhe lagta hai meh Roshni ke saath …???...oh no my darling baby u don't know nothing about ur husband…he only craves one body and one only…his hunger is only for one person…and he has been very hungry the past 2 years……he was speaking very low and his voice was very very husky and his eyes had this delvish look in them….bhouth intezar kiya hai maine…..bus aab nahi…I only want u…and only u….u only satisfy this thirst in me…aur tumhe lagta hai ke…..he got hold of her duppata laughing his evil laugh....and threw in on the floor…he kissed Bani hard on her right shoulder making a mark almost bruising…...Bani tried moving away....before Jai got hold of her ...oh no u dont honey!!! he said ......i will tell you how much I have wanted you BAni…..i have been so bloody patient with you and u..u have the nerve to question me…..he got her earrings….necklace…kissing her demanding her to let go.......undit her kameez tops buttons….....bani closed her eyes…..she was mad scared furious yet she had this hidden feeling that she didn't want to let go…...how can this man arouse feelings in me when im so mad at him.....she didn't want Jai to know that he was not the only one who was craving for what they once had…..Jai started to kiss Bani…on her eyes…ears….cheeks…chin…neck…shoulder…her chest…going down slowly touching her everywhere…one thing led to the other and Bani was lost in her own little world which she had forgotten that existed…..hunger led to passion …and passion erupted in a fire as two body and souls once again found each other!!!!!

Clothes bundled up all over the floor ….windows open…the bedroom phone in pieces on one corner…her jewellery on the other…the weather singing for them…….it was raining heavly…as the the sky agreed with these two lovers becoming one again ….it was crying in happiness...in joy for Jai and Bani…

Bani didn't know what she did tonight….but one thing was certain…her even thinking of even leaving Jai again was not even a thought……Jai had made sure to make her his in every way…and he even admitted it that he wanted her……and only her…but was that enough for Bani….was this only what her marriage to him will be like….what of Roshni…what of her love for him….what of his feelings for her….will she ever find out ….will she know if Jai feels anything for her….???? With all this thoughts Bani drifted off into a deep sleep….not knowing where the tides of love were carrying her!!!!!!

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awsome part I wish in the real sreials Jai would control Bani's anger like that, but instead he became a devdas after Bani. Great continue soon