A tryst with fate - updated final chap 11 - Page 17

First let me congratulate you on a FF
that was written very well, 👏
I just came
across this and read all 10 parts in one
seating. I was glued, luvd the way Jai
hides his feelings and how Pushkar shows
Bani the way. Pls post the next part
soon, really want to see what happens
next, again congrats.

aha...here we go....
Very well done....the best part till date .... 👏
hhmmm....so bani can belong only to him...and no one else....well i support that thought Mr. Walia.... 😳
I loved his jealous side.....their tension....
bechaara pushy bas bach hi gaya....Mr walia could have eaten him up ...God he was sooo jealous....and I was sooo happy... 😳
"HIS BANI"...i love this thought of his....
the telephonic conversation....I simply fell for it...the tension between the two is so well written...i can picture it completely....
awsome part....I can say....Definately worth all the wait... 👏
Poo

I hope you are planning to continue soon. Loved all the parts.

I love your fanfic, but yaar, I wish you wouldn't take so long to update.

-Rimpy

AAAAAA i just read the WHOLE fanfic and its SO SO SOOOOOOOOOO good, PLEASE update it ROX

Hi Kav,

The update is long overdue...and I am not going to promise when I would be updating it...as the others are pretty much aware, that I promise but don't keep to my promise...so would just plead to have immense patience and hang in there till I update the next chapter...btw thank you soooooooooooo much for liking it...

garf

heyy garf!
that was PROMPT. ok, it was super super nice so pleeeeease update ok, i know how hard it can be to sit down and write but please try for me ok?(:
i read the whole thing today and it had me on the edge of my seat for the whole time. and it was SO GOOD! omg im now such a fan!!
pls PM me when you update oK!

lovekav

hey buddy..... where r u??? r u alr8??? 😕

such a long time nooo update..... 😕

plzzz plzzz plzzzzzzzz cont soon.....