Pyar To Hona.....-FF LAST PART!!!PG. 55 - Page 21

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Part 22:

Three Weeks Later:

Bani shook her head in disagreement as the tailor showed her many designer wedding lehengas. They were beautiful dresses, but just not what she's looking for. Bani wanted one that suited her perfectly, and so far she hasn't seen one that did. Her sisters brought many to her, showing bani how beautiful they were, but again bani shook her head. Her sisters sighed.

Bani: I'm sorry you guys, but it's just not me.

Bani sat down miserably onto a stool, tired of searching and not finding a wedding lehenga. Rano also gave up hope and sat down next to her sister. Pia walks away, not wanting to give up hope, continuing to look. Bani fiddles with her engagement ring, moving it around her finger. "Only one more week till the wedding, and I still haven't found my dress," she thinks sadly. Rano hugs her upset sister.

Rano: Don't worry didi, we'll find one.

Bani smiles weakly to Rano. She sees Pia walking back towards them, holding a dress in her hands.

Pia: Di! I think I found the one!

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Vijay continues to stare at the well decorated wedding card in his hands and traces the gold cursive writing with his finger. Jai Walia Weds Bani Dixit, he traced over and over again, sadly. Vijay wipes a tear away and sets the car aside on his working table. He covers his face with his fingers, resting his face in his hands. "Bani….why?," is all that Vijay thought to himself.

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Muskaan, cheerfully glides down the steps of the temple, thinking of Vijay. Today, Muskaan had asked for Vijay's happiness, he seemed so depressed these days, she wanted to see him smile again. She badly wanted to know the reason for his depression, but decided against it, not wanting to bother him. As Muskaan walks down the side of the street, walking back home, she stopped near by a flower cart, admiring the different kinds of beautiful flowers. Instantly, she thinks of Vijay and picks out his favorite flowers. Muskaan quickly pays the man and gladly continues to walk away from the cart as she sniffs the flowers, smiling to herself. Minutes after, a white van comes to halt near an oblivious Muskaan, who continues to admire the flowers in her hands. The car door opens and two strong looking men charge towards her.

Muskaan feels two firms grips on her arms and sees two men on each side of her. She opens her mouth to question them, but they drag her towards the van, while she screams and struggles to get away. One man drains away her screams by wrapping a handkerchief around her mouth. Muskaan looks around her with her teary eyes, looking for help, but there was no one around. The two men throw her into the van and close the door behind them, as they drive off down the street.

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All three sisters hurriedly enter the house, excited about bani's wedding lehenga. They throw their shopping bags on their beds and hand over the dress to bani to wear. Happily, bani takes it and walks into the bathroom. Moments later, bani steps back out, wearing an approval smile, while she models for her stunned sisters. Bani looks absolutely drop dead gorgeous in her lehenga. The lehenga is a nice deep shade of pink net Lehenga Choli with gold embroidery and the duputta nicely draped over her right shoulder. Pia whistles while bani blushes.

Rano: Wow, didi! Jai jeeju won't be able to take his eyes off of you!

Bani giggles in happiness as she walks back into the bathroom to change.

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Vijay enters into his dark home, now looking lonely. "Muskaan?…," he says loudly. He waits for a response by the cheery girl, but gets none. "Muskaan?," he repeats. There is only silence. Vijay switches on the light, seeing no one in sight. He calls out muskaan's name yet again, and receiving silence back. Vijay makes his way around his house, searching for her, but sees that the house is empty. He begins to feel terrified. "Muskaan, ….where are you?…," he asks hopefully for one last time, his voice shaky.

part 23 pg. 37
Edited by indian_godess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow i loved this part...Bani shopping for her shaadi to the sexy Jai Walia...too good yaar..plz continue soon cant wait for the wedding!
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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW great story, this is getting good, please post the next one soon, want to the see the wedding!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
didi!

i loved this part!! look forward to the wedding!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
having fun here, keep going. The kidnapping of Muskaan, another dimension - really hooked here. Waiting for the next instalment
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Posted: 19 years ago
finally caught up...it's really amazing
can't wait for jai and bani's wedding
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Posted: 19 years ago
aaaaaaaaaaaawwww bani and her trademark pink suits! lol hehehehhe poor kid, she's in love with the colour pink. lol. but, hmmmm i can only imagin how beautiful she'd really look in a lehenga like dat! hmmm, she already looks drop dead gorgeous in everything else!!! hehehehehehe i loooovvvvveeeeeddd reading bout bani's nervousness for her walia shaadi! but, poor muskaan adn vijay, their lives are like and episode of sindoor! nothing ever goes right for the poor people! do continue soon. i patiently waiting for it
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Posted: 19 years ago
superb part.loved it.too good.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
i had to catch up a lot...but it was worth it..it was just fabulous.......plzzzzzzz cont soon...... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 23:

Vijay sat down, looking distressed, on the couch. Pooja and Suraj continued to stare at Vijay, not knowing how to comfort him. He had rushed over to his bhaiya's house telling him the news of Muskaan. It has been four days so far, and still no news of where she is. Vijay was torn up inside.

Vijay: (voice shaky) It's been four days, and still no news of her, bhaiya. The police are searching for her, but haven't found anything yet, I even posted her picture in the newspapers, but still no response. The police say that maybe she left on her own, but where would she go? She doesn't know anyone else.
Pooja: (puts her hand on Vijay's shoulder) Vijay, don't worry. Wherever Muskaan is, she's probably safe. Maybe she did leave.
Suraj: But where would she go, pooja? Vijay is right, she knows no one in the city, she has no one of her own, and why would she leave without informing Vijay?
Pooja: I think that she is absolutely fine, wherever she is. And why do you care so much, Vijay? She was bound to leave soon anyways.
Vijay: (silent)

Vijay didn't know why he was so worried about Muskaan. He just wanted her back with him. The past three weeks, Vijay had become so attached to Muskaan.

Vijay: (tears begin to form in his eyes) I just want to know where she is, if she's safe….(he says lowly)

He covers his face with his hands, not saying anything for a while.

Pooja: Vijay, you look so tired, you need to rest.
Vijay: (uncovers his face and sighs) no, I'm fine. Besides, I won't be able to sleep in peace without knowing where Muskaan is.

Pooja and Suraj continue to watch Vijay, silently, not knowing what else to say. The three hear giggling and laughter and turn around to see where it's coming from. Bani, pia, and rano come out of their room, all dressed up, and ready to go.

Pooja: Bani, where are you three going?
Bani: (sensing the tension in the room) um, bhabi, the wedding is only five days away, so we're going to finish up with the shopping.
Pooja: Acha, teek hain. (Eng Trans: Ok, fine)
Bani: (not moving from her spot) Bhabi, is something wrong?
Suraj: (lies) no, everything is fine. You girls go and have fun.
Bani: Ji.

Before leaving, bani takes a quick glance of Vijay's face, noting how disturbed he looks. Pia, rano, and bani leave the three in the living room.

Vijay didn't bother to look at bani or feel upset about the wedding, right now he was only thinking of muskaan and wondering how she is.

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Muskaan's eyes flutter for awhile and then are wide open. She looks around the dark gloomy room with her tired eyes. Her body ached with pain, she felt so weak and helpless. It took a while for Muskaan to realize where she was. She looks at her wrists which were bounded by rope and tied tightly onto a pole. Her feet were also bounded up as well. Muskaan's mouth was tapped shut with duck tape, making it difficult to even utter one single sound. She began to feel scared and worried all over again. Tears rolled down her red cheeks, as she thought about what was going to happen to her. She felt so lonely and terrified in the cold dark room. Her thoughts traveled quickly to Vijay. "What is Vijay ji going through right now, is he missing me, trying to find me?," she thought desperately. Muskaan thoughts are interrupted by the harsh creaking from the opening wooden door. She looks up to see who it is and begins to feel fear and anger at the same time, as the person walks to her holding a plate of food in his hands. Vinod bends down next to Muskaan and holds out the plate for her. More tears begin to flow out of her eyes as she stares at the horrible man in front of her, smirking to himself, enjoying every minute of Muskaan's pain and torment.

Vinod: (wickedly says) Muskaan, tumhare liye khanna…(eng trans: Muskaan, food for you..)

Muskaan boils with anger as he continues to smile wickedly.

Vindo: (laughs) wait, how can you eat when your hands are tied up?

He laughs cruelly to himself. Muskaan glares at him with hatred. She completely despised him.

Vinod: Do you want me to feed you?

She continues to glare at him.

Vinod: ok, ok. Don't have to give me nasty looks. I'll let you eat by yourself.

Vinod uncovers her mouth, leaving a stinging effect on her mouth, and unties one of her hands, making it free. He hands the plate to Muskaan, waiting for her to take it. She looks at him for one cold second and then eyes to food, looking disgusted. Vinod is taken aback when muskaan throws the food onto the floor with her free hand.

Muskaan: (angry) I DON'T WANT ANY OF UR FILTHY FOOD!!!

Pissed off, Vinod looks at spilt food lying on the cold concrete floor. He then looks at Muskaan, angrily. Vinod bring his hand up, ready to smack her across her face, but stops himself. He folds his hand into a fist, putting it back against his side.

Vinod: (shouts) FINE DON'T EAT! GO AHEAD AND STARVE URSELF TO DEATH!!!

Vinod grabs muskaan by her throat, making her gasp for air. Tears begins to well up in her eyes again, as she tries to pulls Vinods firm grip off of her throat. He pushes her back, making her head hit the wall behind her, and lets go. Before leaving, vinod gives one cold look to Muskaan and slams the door shut behind him, leaving her alone once again in the darkness. She gasps for air and touches her throat lightly with her trembling hand. Muskaan is filled with hope as she gazes at her free hand, vinod has forgotten to tie it back up. She immediately begins to untie her other tied hand.

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At a Resturant:

"Di, …hello?! Di?!," Pia tries to snap bani out of her thoughts. Bani blinks and looks at Pia who is looking down at her.

Pia: What do you want to eat?
Bani: Huh? Oh. (bani looks at the restaurant menu and puts it down onto the table) Actually pia, I'm not all that hungry. I had a pretty big breakfast to eat.
Pia: Di, you were the one who suggested for us to go out and eat. (puzzled)
Bani: yeah, I know. But I'm not hungry anymore.
Rano: Didi, what's on your mind. You seem so out of it today.
Bani: (folds her hands) I was actually thinking about how our lives have changed so much. And also wondering what else has life have in stored for us.
Pia: (places her hand on top of bani's) I don't care what happens to us in our lives, all I want from life is for us to stick together forever and be happy. And I know that will happen.
Rano: yes, I agree with pia. (she also places her hand on theirs)

Bani smiles happily and hugs her sisters, thinking to herself how lucky she is to have two wonderful sisters.


will continue soon.... 😊 hope u guys liked it! i wanted this part to focus on vijay and muskaan more.

part 24 pg. 39

Edited by indian_godess - 18 years ago

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