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Posted: 19 years ago
Thank you all for reading part nine!
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and thank you even more for your very sweet and supportive comments, they are much appreciated it!

Part 10 will be up shortly, what can i say but that i love to write, even though i don't very well 😳 .
Thank you all once again! You all are too sweet!

Luv
sweetu.
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was VERy wel written!! it was awsome... 😊 ...
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Posted: 19 years ago
Here you go, do leave comments. I hope that you like it….
Part 11...lets just say will be more eventful :)
This part is very long an not written well at all...i do hope that you like it..leave comments would gladly appreciate them.

Part 10

Tears fall into a cocoon of silence and fill the air with anguish. Nothing to soothe her discomfort for having been separated from the one thing that helped her to live. She waits amongst the very darkness, in her room, that is helping her to soothe all and bring the two things which she lost running back…for now she awaits in torturing silence….
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The moon shines down elegantly on the pavement which two souls absently walk upon amongst the darkness of night. Entwined in one another's arms walking in content towards an unknown destination, just wanting and needing to be with one another….

He pulls her closer wrapping his arm around her waste as tightly as possibly only to murmur "Bani…." And nuzzle her neck gently letting the smell of her hair take over all.
"Bani…" saying it once more huskily letting the sound of her name sink in…" why do you have to look so beautiful, wasn't it enough that you kill me with your looks but what about all the others…other men in the restaurant…" He laughs loftily in her ear, letting his fingers trail her mangalsutra "all of them just couldn't stop looking at you…I felt sorry for their partners…"Teasing her, but getting no reaction, and then kissing her softly on the head, letting it nestle gently against his chest, protecting it from the cool chill biting wind, as they walk towards the car….

She is completely content to be tucked safely against his chest, allowing his arm to entwine around her waist protecting her from all. She smiles at her fate.

They approach the car, he as a true gentleman opens the door pushing her gently in and closing the door firmly behind. Her eyes follow his strong strides to the driver's seat, admiring his every apt movement....cursing herself for being so mesmerized my him.

The long slow drive to the hotel is somehow a pure comfort, surrounded by no noise complete silence and the only light... the moon….guiding then to their place of slumber.
Her head rests gently against his shoulder, few strands of her hair fall on his front coat blocking her face. Yet she does not care of her annoyance only content to be with her love knowing that he too must feel the same way. She sighs and gently closes her eyes still clasping her purse against her heart.
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Tears still falling uncontrollably she knows he is approaching….oh how her heart cries for it…she goes up to her neck but touches nothing, as it is now bare adorning nothing…she weeps in silence….wanting it now more than ever.

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Drawing closer to the hotel he looks at his angel who rests lovingly against his shoulder, not wanting to wake her just wanting to watch her sleep in deep contented slumber. Now in front of the hotel giving his keys to the driver…he takes her into his arms holding her close, yet failing to notice her purse slowly slipping from her hands… head still resting gently against his chest. He kisses her already flushed cheeks from the heat noting a little to late her purse as it drops spilling its contents everywhere.

He narrows his eyes, unsure what to do and where to keep his sleeping wife…..but then she stirs suddenly and looks dreamily at him ,kissing him softly on the lips before realising that he is holding her and how close they actually are….she can feel his heartbeat racing and his breath tingling her skin.
Minutes pass by as their eyes lock and both get lost in one another….
Then reality dawns upon her and she struggles from his firm hold and he gently obliges and puts her down…yet still not letting go. Holding her tightly…he returns the favour and kisses her deeply letting his hands caress her back and only then letting go…and winking at her.
Shocking her no doubt he smiles sheepishly and bends down towards her spilt contents and starts picking them up, her eyes wonder down to his and she murmur's
"Jai…what are you doing" He laughs loftily and lets his eyes meet hers "what does it look like…I am cleaning the carpeted floor" he winks at her and she blushes realising her stupidity.

She too now bending down helps her prince to pick up her possessions, she sees him peer into her purse cautiously still holding some of its fallen contents. She watches his eyes as shock appears….he drops all that he holds immediately and reaches in to pull out a golden chain with a symbol locket made of the a single letter "S".

She watches the colour drain out of him, and his eyes harden in complete shock and anger, all love which she saw is now replaced by mock anger. She whimpers softly scared…knowing that what next to come is not good. Getting up slowly now not caring for anything just clutching her purse like a frightened puppy, she slowly backs away…knowing and scared. Confused as to what brought her husbands sudden change in mood….wondering about the necklace….yet at this moment having no wish to be near him as all thought leaves her….she turns to run from her blazing husband... yet a strong hand clasps hers firmly…digging fingernails deep into her…she flinches and whimpers and meets the eyes of a man who now holds no compassion. She can see his body all uptight and shaking his eyes blazing…

"jai.." she murmurs scared not understanding..."jai…what happened…jai why are you looking at me like that…jai no…jai...please…tell me…"
His eyes are hard and blazing all thought has left him…"What do you mean what happened…bani…where the hell did you get this….bani I am asking you a question damit…tell me…" He holds up the chain to her face….
She whimpers as he shakes her, her eyes wonder around not daring to meet his, not knowing the answer to his question…many people stare back curiously wanting to know why he holds her so tightly…his eyes sere into her flesh…drawing them upon his…yet then he notices the many that surrounded…he forcibly puts a fake smile and roughly, not showing it, forces her face towards his pushing her chin and kissing her hard( catchin her off guard..)…assuring those that watch on that all is ok. Their eyes lock his still blazing hers whimpering…he gathers her in a tight embrace…yet then softens as the smell of her hair takes over all senses, making the kind compassionate jai walia to return but only for a moment.…he trails his fingers gently down her back…eyeing now the golden chain he holds...feeling her shiver…his grip tightens and all escapes him, now all anger suddenly returning… he whispers harshly…
"do not think that you have escaped me this easily mrs.walia…just smile and pretend that all is ok, so that then these probing eyes can leave….and you still have not answered my question…he lets his fingernails dig deep into her...wanting an answer…needing it…wanting to soothe his troubled mind…which keeps shouting…
"Talk to bani calmly…" yet what can he do…if his past comes haunting back and he finds the one thing he fears most secretly in his wife's bag…

In the light of the hotel the cursed chain shines showing all….once more….making him relive all…making him…yearn…yearn for "her"…

"Forever we entwined
Together as one
Our hearts shall
Always meet as one
As long as you have yours
We are forever one…"

JS-symbol engraved with love….



Bani, closes her eyes, not knowing the reason for her husbands discomfort and anguish not knowing how this golden chain reached her of her purse, only aware that all has been brought upon by that golden chain. Her brain kicks in as she realises he has never gifted her chain of complete gold…it is as if he is scared. She whimpers and cries on the inside feeling his fingers sere into her flesh…killing her…she casts her eyes downwards as he shakes her off him grabs her hand roughly and drags her into the hotel…where unknown monsters of words await her arrival…she wines….yet….to no avail…scared she no longer can protest…. She catches the glint of the chain….reading and finally understanding all…a single tear escapes and all finally crumbles and breaks…the darkness devours her whole as reality creeps in…blinding her very existence.

"One emotion holds two people together, it is what they both live for….yet it is also the very same which can give them unknown torture of cruel pain….what is the truth…and what is not….?"
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Tenth part…very long not that interesting, yet I tried my best I hope that you liked it. All I can say is that the 11th part will be very eventful....and i think that you all will like it...at least i hope so. Please do leave comments. I am sorry once again if anyone finds any thing from this part disturbing,
Thank you all for reading my fan fiction.

luv
Sweetu.
Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
OMGGGGGGGGGGG .. that was so nice.. the endin was WOW.. šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago

Wow jaan...that was awesome!......and the way you described Jai's anger....Haila!

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Edited by nibbles - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
didi!!! i loved part 10... i dont know why u say it is bad!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
i dont noe what your talking about its noe bad at all...plz continue i wanna noe what happens next! šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey sweetu! sooo glad u decided to cont ur ff!! n btw its not bad at all if it was u woundt have thousands of views on it šŸ˜‰ cant wait to read the next part! luv ya n god bless!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sweetu, that part was just wow!!!! Please continue with Part 11 soon!!! We can't wait to read it!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
SWEETU...... READ UR FF 4 THE FIRST TIME AND IN ONE GO. šŸ‘ UR A STRIKING WRITER AND A GEM OF A PERSON TO CONTINUE WITH UR FF. JUST SIMPLY KEEP IT UP šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼ EAGERLY WAITING 4 UR NEXT PART 😳

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