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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: timothy

excellent fanfic i loved it 😊



Thanks! i'm glad you enjoyed it! the next part will be up soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: mkzara

its extremely good. keep on writing 👏 👏 👏


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Thanks😳... i'm posting the next 2 parts nowl.. i hope you enjoy them as well

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Posted: 19 years ago
HEY GUYS! I'M ON A ROLE.. HERE ARE THE NEXT 2 PARTS.. THANKS FOR READING AND I HOPE YOU ENJOY THESE NEXT 2 PARTS!
Part 15
It was a beautiful morning and Bani and Jai were fast asleep when the sun woke Bani up!
She got up and stared at her hubby with the most lovable look and proceeded to get up and take a shower when a hand held her back!
Jai: Where do you think you are going! You know that my day doesn't go good if I don't see you right in the morning

Bani: Mr. Walia please (laughing) I have to go wake Dhruv up and get him ready.

Jai: oh so now my son has become more important than me… you know he wouldn't be here if it wasn't for

Bani: MR. WALIA! PLEASE!

Jai smiled : Okay sorry sorry (laughing). You go get ready and I will wake our son up
Bani smiled and said: now that's like a good husband!
They both smiled and Bani left for the restroom and Jai went to Dhruv's room

Jai: BANI!!!!!
Bani came rushing to Dhruv's room from Jai's scream

Bani: Whats wrong Mr. Walia

Jai: Bani, look Dhruv has a high fever

Jai and Bani had to be very careful with Dhruv. Being a premature baby he was doing great but Dhruv became sick very quick so it was important that Jai and Bani kept him in a good conditioned environment.

Bani: Your right Mr. Walia! We will have to take him to the hospital

Dhruv had fevers before but this one was more intense and it seemed that he was having some problems breathing as well. They rushed him to the hospital and awaited for what their family doctor had to say

Jai held Bani close to him
Jai: Bani…Bani please…don't cry everything will be okay

Bani: Mr. Walia our son is so sick… why did it have to happen to Dhruv

Masi showed up after hearing the news about Dhruv

Masi:Jai and Bani!! What happened! Is our Dhruv okay

Jai: Masi we don't know yet.. I went to go wake him up and noticed that he was running a high fever

Masi: He Bhagwan…

Masi took Bani and stood infront of the idol of Ganpati that had been placed at the hospital!

Masi: God, you finally brought my munna and his wife together and brought them the happiness they deserve. And now that everything has been going good, you want to take their son away from them.. Please save their child and I personally will come to the mandir and donate to everyone there. Please save their child.

Masi and Bani stood infront of the idol and prayed for Dhruv's life


Then the doctor came to give news about Dhruv!


next part added!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 16

The scene shifts to Ranvijay and Roshini.

Roshini: Bhaiya I've decided that I'm going back to get Jai! I can't live without him.. Bani must still hate him and by now she must have moved out. And Jai must have had enough time now to forget about Bani! I'm going back

Ranvijay: Roshini it's still not safe to go back. We don't even know if Jai or Bani know the truth behind the park Road incident!

Roshini: I don't care! But I'm not staying here and letting time past by. I'M GOING BACK!

The scene shifts to Jai, Bani, Masi and the Doctor at the hospital

Jai; Is my son okay!

Bani: Please Doctor how is Dhruv?

Doctor: Mr. and Mrs. Walia.. Your son is doing just fine.. One minute he had the high fever but it seemed that his own body fought the battle and won. He is doing just fine. Your son is one brave boy!

Jai,Bani and Masi were so relieved. Bani went and hugged Jai right away!

Bani: Our Son is just fine! Dhruv is just fine!

Jai: Yep he's just like his dad. A strong individual

Jai and Bani laughed

Bani went and hugged Masi. They both went back to the idol and gave their thanks

Masi: HE did is part and now Bani we must do our part and go to the mandir

Bani nodded and her and Masi decided that they would go to the mandir later that week.


Couple days later Dhruv was brought back to the Walia house to find everyone there to greet him! The whole Walia family was anxious to see that Dhruv was okay. Though Jigyasa and Ranveer were missing!

The scene shifts to Jigyasa and Ranveer in a room

Jigyasa: So the kid is back! Ranveer what is going to happen. My dream of you and Sahil running the Walia empire are being shattered day by day

Ranveer: Don't worry Ma! Since this baby mamaji has forgotten about the business! He will eventually have to hand it over to someone. Don't worry

Jigyasa: I hope so

They headed to where everyone was gathered.

Jai: Listen everyone! Dhruv is doing just fine now! And now I want to make sure that my son lives a great life and he is never deprived of anything. Dhruv deserves the Best! That's why me and Bani have decided that I will write all my property under my son's name and until he is 21, Bani will be the caretaker!

Everyone was so happy to hear about this. Masi congratulated Jai in making such a huge and great decision. Though Jigyasa and Ranveer were so shocked. They both stared at each other and left the room immediately

Jigyasa: Ranveer! What happened to don't worry ma mamaji will hand everything over to me! (sarcasm)

Ranveer was so shocked himself

Ranveer: HOW CAN HE PUT EVERYTHING UNDER HIS NAME! a mere 5 month old kid!!!

Just then Jigyasa's phone rings

Jigyasa responds rudly: HELLO!

" WOA WOA! Calm down Jigyasa! Is this anyway to talk to your friend!"

Jigyasa: WHO IS THIS!

" tsk tsk.. itni jaldi mujhe bhol gayi! Jigyasa its me your friend.. your partner in crime.. ROSHINI!

Jigyasa held the phone in shock
Edited by vaidahip - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow u r on a roll lol plzz contiue jus a one thing if u dont mind i think bani should stop callin jai mr.waila n call him jai instead sorry if i am interfering
Edited by lil_isha15 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: lil_isha15

wow u r on a roll lol plzz contiue jus a one thing if u dont mind i think bani should stop callin jai mr.waila n call him jai instead sorry if i am interfering



aww hun you are not interfering... I will take it into consideration😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wonderful, I love your fanfic! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
Beautiful...... plz do cont!

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Posted: 19 years ago
😲 i hate her and her partner in crime.. thank god dhruvie is fine 😊 😊 😊 that was gr888888.. luved it.. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg u got to continue now i want to know wat roshni and jigz will do together to break jai and bani 's relationship 😈

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