7 months later.. LAST PART..PLZ READ! - Page 27

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hey i just read your whole fan fic it is seriously very awesome and amazing u r very talented the way u wrote whole fanfic is so deep and touchy just loved your great work pleasee continue this i will wait for your next part 👏

kasak

Originally posted by: priya-verma

Vaidahi!!!!!!

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Originally posted by: minks

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I'm sorry everyone i've taken a long time to update... i actually have now figured out a great story line that i bet all you will enjoy. I will update today... i PROMISE .. i will write 2 parts today... once again i'm truly sorry...The next update will be up soon😊😊😊

luv Vaidahi

Part 13

Jai turned around to see Bani in tears and sat back down and held her hands with both his hands.

Jai: What did you say? Repeat it..

Jai was so happy to hear those words that he felt the need for her to repeat them

Bani: How dare you?

Jai: Nahi Bani…. After that

Bani: decide to leave me?

Jai: Yes Yes but after that Bani

Jai was becoming restless and Bani knew exactly what Jai wanted to hear but she decided to play along

Bani: I don't know Mr. Walia… What is that you want me to say?

Jai looked away and in a low voice said: Never mind
Then Jai stood up and was going to go walk towards his Baby when Bani said

Bani: I NEED YOU! I need you because I love you!

Jai was overwhelmed he sat back down and starred at Bani with such affection. Bani was shocked herself from saying what she just had said. She always had these feelings for him but always kept them barried because of the misunderstandings between them.

Jai: Bani I've waited so long to hear these words from you. You have made me the luckiest person today. Bani there is nothing else left for me to say but that…. I….I …I love you too…

Bani had avoided his eyes till now.. Him saying those 3 words caught her attention and then they both locked their eyes and continue to stare. That was quickly broken with the cry of their baby.

Jai: Bani I'm so glad that we both have cleared our misunderstandings and now finally we can live as a family with our new child.

They both starred at their child.

Bani: Your right Mr. Walia. Our child needed both of us. I know how it feels to grow up with just one parent.

Bani started to get teary and continued to stare at their baby.

Jai: Bani, I can understand! But now that I know who the real culprits are…believe me I won't let them live! They will pay for what they did to your family

Bani: Nahin Mr. Walia. I will take care of Roshini and Ranvijay myself. They still think that I hate you and hold you responsible for my mom's death. I will have them pay for what they did.

Jai understood but said he would do anything to help Bani in do what she had planned.

Bani: Enough of that Mr. Walia.. We have to now think about the future of our child. First of all we need to come up with a name, Mr. Walia.

Jai give a slight laugh and said: Of course how could we forget that! Do you have a name in mind?

Bani looked excited

Bani: yeah how about Aayush

Jai: Aayush … I like it (laughingly).

Bani was excited and stares at her baby

Bani: Aayush Jai Walia

Jai: Nahi Bani… Aayush Jai-Bani Walia.

But that excited was quickly broken by someone coming into the room and saying

" NO! THIS NAME IS NO GOOD! IT WON'T WORK!"


Next part is added!

Part 14

It was masi who had entered into there room

Masi (laughingly): It's great to see that my Munna and my Bahu have made up. But the name Aayush won't work for my munna jr.

Bani: Aye Masi. Why won't the name work?

Masi: Arre Bani munna jr. name has to start with a D according to the raashi(is that what is called 😕)

Bani had forgotten about that. She looked at Jai

Bani: A name with D?

Jai: Ummm…. Lets see how about ….umm… Dhruv

Bani loved the name immediately

Bani: Dhruv Walia.. its great!

Masi also loved the name.

Masi: Arre, I forgot to tell you! I just talked to the doctor and he said that Bani you and the child… Dhruv (laughing)… are just fine now. We can take you home but they would like to keep Dhruv under observation for a little while.

Bani was hesitant to leave her child but after much talk from Jai and Masi, Bani agreed.


The scene shifts to Roshini and Ranvijay!

Ranvijay: you were right we did need to get out of India. Atleast here in London we will be safe from Jai!

Roshini: But bhaiya we don't even know if Jai knows the truth. But seeing Bani slap Jai still gives me HOPE bhaiya. I will return back some time later to get my Jai.

The scene shifts back to Bani and the Walia family at the walia house a week later

Bani: Rano is everything ready in the baby room. Dhruv will be coming home with Jai any moment!

Rano: Come down didi! Everything is all set.. The colors you wanted are painted, the stuff teddy bears are all organized and all the toys are set as well

Bani was excited. Then the door bell rings. Bani rushes to open the door and is happy to see Jai with their soon. Bani does a small pooja and all three enter into the Walia house
Bani is so happy to finally have the family she has imagined.

Bani: We have everything we need Mr. Walia! I couldn't ask for anything more

Jai: Your right Bani. You have made me the happiest person in this world

The scene shifts to showing 1 week old Dhruv sleeping soundly in this new room. The scene then shifts to 5 MONTHS LATER with Dhruv now showing his facial expression to Bani talking to him in baby talk.

--side note--- The fanfic will now start from Dhruv being 5 months old and Jai and Bani still happily in love--- Bani through these 5 months has tried to find Ranvijay and Roshini to punish them for what they did but was never able to locate where they were hiding—She and Jai eventually forgot about them and focused on their new family that was now perfect!—Jigysa was still quite jealous of them and still wanted her two sons to run Jai's empire but stayed quiet because of Jai---


I hope you guys don't mind that I skipped 5 months. I have a story line planned out so I'm hoping you all will bare with me and enjoy the twists and turns that will come!

Luv Vaidahi

wonderful part hun
n can't wait for the twist and turns
pls cont soon
ps dhurv awww

awwwwwwwwww yay that was gr8.. dhruv walia awwww.. 👏