7 months later.. LAST PART..PLZ READ! - Page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago
I have never read such a great fanfic, this is your first try! Please do Part 5 soon, and I think you should save these and here's a note to Ekta Kapoor:
Are you hearing this?! Write it down! Write it down! 😆
Vaidahip you are definetly going to get a job! 😉
Okay, so please continue we are ALL waiting for your brilliant comeback!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was awesome! i enjoyed reading it. So please contiune.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Lovely.........!! please do continue!

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: cool breeze

I have never read such a great fanfic, this is your first try! Please do Part 5 soon, and I think you should save these and here's a note to Ekta Kapoor:
Are you hearing this?! Write it down! Write it down! 😆
Vaidahip you are definetly going to get a job! 😉
Okay, so please continue we are ALL waiting for your brilliant comeback!!!




OMG that has to be the most sweet comment ever!!😳😳 THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!! i'm so glad that you enjoyed the fanfic.. wow i'm speechless.. that was very sweet of you 😳😳😳
thanks again..the next part will be up soon

❤️ vaidahi
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Posted: 19 years ago
everyone has been sooooo sweet! thanks again for reading.. here is the next part

Part 5

Masi: It's okay Jai… please take your time.. remember we are all here with you.

After gaining some confidence to speak Jai responds.

Jai: Masi…… umm…. I'm …..uhhh… Masi your… you're a
dadi!!

Roshini couldn't believe what she had heard. She was standing way in the back but no one had noticed her because they were all waiting to hear what Jai had to say

Masi: KYA! And you were worried to tell us that…. WAIT… how is Bani… JAI…. How is Bani ?!

Jai: Masi I don't know…the doctor just told me that they have saved my child.. but.. but Bani has lost to much blood… they … they are trying Masi

Roshini to herself: FINALY!! Some good news. So what if the child is here, I'll raise it with Jai and never let it know about Bani and who she was.

Masi: this can't be happening

Rano was soo excited to hear that she was a masi. That one moment of happiness was snatched away from what she heard. She couldn't believe that her di, whom she had accepted as her mom, was in that operation room fighting for her life.

Jai: Masi this is all my fault. The one moment of happiness.. my child, who should be welcomed to this world with happiness from both parents may now grow up to have just one. I GAVE BANI STRESS! ITS ALL BECAUSE OF ME!

Rano couldn't believe what she was hearing. Mr. Walia was blaming himself, when it was all Roshini and Ranvijay that had ruined her di's marriage. She started to walk backward from shock and hit the hospital wall. She stood there for a while trying to digest what she had just heard. Out of the corner of her eye, she spotted Roshini and that too with a big smirk on her face. HOW DARE SHE COME HERE. Rano was ready to pounce on her and kill her for what she had done to Bani

Rano: TUM!!! YOU RUINED MY DI'S LIFE AND NOW YOU ARE HERE TO SEE WHETHER YOUR PLAN WORKED! MY DI IS FIGHTING FOR HER LIFE AND YOU ARE STANDING HERE WITH A SMILE ON YOUR FACE!

Roshini couldn't believe what Rano had said .Sure she knew that Rano had hated her but this much anger. WHAT IF SHE HEARD MINE AND BHAIYA'S CONVERSATION? OH NO!
Roshini was now positive that Rano must of heard and she now had to get out of there fast before Rano spilled the beans about the park road incident.

Rano: WHERE DO YOU THINK YOU ARE GOING?! I'M NOT DONE WITH YOU YET!!!!

The whole Walia family was shocked to see such behavior from Rano.. so much anger..

Rano is shown running towards Roshini and Roshini running as fast as her legs could take her

Rano: YOU ARE NOT LEAVING AFTER WHAT YOU DID TO MY DI!

Jai: RANO… WAIT!!

Jai is shown running behind Rano while the rest of the family looks on with confusion….

After i wrote this.. i couldn't help myself from laughing!
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i hope you enjoy it and THANKS AGAIN FOR YOUR SWEET COMMENTS...THEY ARE REALLY VERY ENCOURAGING!

do you think Roshini will survive the angry beastlike (at least right now.. otherwise she is soooo sweet) Rano?

Thanks again luv ya all
🤗 ❤️ 🤗 vaidahi
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Posted: 19 years ago
Gr8 part!!
I hope that roshni gets whats in store for her from rano 😡 😡
Can't wait 4 the next part plz update soon

Luv Taz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz continue 😊 😊
We all are waiting 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
ohhhhhhhhhhh that was gr88888 i hope rano tells everythin to jai.. go rano 👏 👏 👏 i can picture roshni running 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Tazmanian_Devil

Gr8 part!!
I hope that roshni gets whats in store for her from rano 😡 😡
Can't wait 4 the next part plz update soon

Luv Taz

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thanks for your comment😳 i'm not sure if i should kill roshini's character or injure her😉 hahah we'll have to see.

thanks again for reading

luv vaidahi
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: f_Lida

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plz continue 😊 😊
We all are waiting 😳 😳



aww thank you i will soon😊 thanks

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