’AJNABI’ (COMPLETED...FINALLY!)

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princessjojo

@princessjojo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 19 years ago

#11

AMAZING!! What a unique idea that was!! Loved reading it! And loved the way you wove your story with the episode when the Dixit girls come to JW for help on that fateful night. And you mentioned the forgotten crystal too.... 😃

👏 The result was worth all the time you put in, MT!

Jojo

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sweetu144

@sweetu144

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#12

👏 !! AWESOME FF!! loved it!!
just one complaint.....WHY did u stop?? pls write a little bit more...On bani and J...just a bit more, if u dont want to conitnue that is....just to see them together...in each others arms 😳 !!!

awesome ff!! ur writing never stops amazing me!!
luv
sweetu 😃

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FATEMA HASHAM

@tima91

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#13

wow...tht was fabulous... 👏 👏 👏

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zaakirah

@naughtybutnice

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: mistletoe

😆 My hubby has gone off to a Party and I am waiting for him to come back, else the poor thing keeps ringing the door bell and we guys are busy snoring, even my Dog doesn't bother to wake up.....I am being the good Indian Wife that I should be and waiting for hubby to come back home!😃

Naah, I am just having fun with you guys and when Hubby comes back, I can rub it on him, that I kept waiting for him whole night!😆

Cheers,

MT

wow u wait for ur hubby till late at night

ur 1 devoted wife mt

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**Tinkerbell**

@**Tinkerbell**

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#15

MT i have no words to express.how good it is....it was seriously super... 👏 👏 well done you seriously are very talented

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sima

@xsimzxchickx

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#16

Once again u felt me speechless and stunned with your beautiful fiction!

too good mt!!! wow

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sadaf

@sak87

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#17

that was simply outstanding MT!!!!! 👏
would be eagerly waiting for the next part.
Love
Sadaf

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Jaseeka

@Jaseeka

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#18

Very good MT.
I think thats very very short! 😆 😆 Just kidding

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Amber24

@Amber24

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#19

OMG, you are superb, what a great idea connecting the dots of J&B's life and the cystal, wow that was amazing, I am still trying to sink the story in. But it is another nice link between Jai and Bani. Thanks for sharing 😊.