’AJNABI’ (COMPLETED...FINALLY!) - Page 5

fantabulous story MT! 👏 👏 😊
ur such a gr8 writer...thanx for sharing it with us
i enjoyed reading it verrryy much!

if she was sleeping on the couch oppoiste to the stranger, did he not see her face before leaving in the morning.

like always i love to read ur ff , please cont....

Originally posted by: bhanu

if she was sleeping on the couch oppoiste to the stranger, did he not see her face before leaving in the morning.

like always i love to read ur ff , please cont....

Yeah he did, but he simply did not recognize her after 7 years.......A girl completley changes when she is in her Teen years....But a man remains almost the same physically when he is between 30 - 40!😃

And yaar, it is a Fan-Fic.......😆 Thoda uncha neecha toh hoga hi!

As I mentioned before, Jai did not see the picture on the Mantle-Piece clearly, because it was too dark for it! And anyway, the Jai of my Fan-Fic is supposed to have a terrible memory!

If you guys really liked it, then I am continuing with the story.....

Cheerios,

MT

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I am completely in awe.

That was EXCELLENT. ...You write with such detail... just wow.. i'm speechless.. it was too good! 👏 👏 👏

it was just MINDBLOWING!!...MT..will u continue with this FF...?...would love 2 read it!!..its just amazing just like ur other fanfics.. 👏👏

hi MT. that was excellent! pls continue. you along with many others who have spent hours of their time writing up stories should submit your work to balaji. i'm sure they need new creative ideas and thoughts too. you write so well, you should seriously think up writing as a full time job! great job and keep up the excellent work! look fwd to reading more!!

Hey, I added a few lines and a para's to the story!

Cheers,

MT

awww,it was just mindblowing. 👏 👏 👏 ur fan-fics have something which just moves the heart.keep writing more. 😊

😃 PLS MT pls do continue with the storry pllls 😃