’AJNABI’ (COMPLETED...FINALLY!) - Page 4

awsome 👏 👏
please do continue soon
thanx 😳

MT, what a beautiful story! Thanx

Your imagination shaped an enchanting little story: Kasamh Se's own small piece of history.

So, now we know of this and thus can we begin to understand how it came about that Bani seemed to have a sense of loyalty towards her devellish husband, from the very first day that their marriage was forced upon them.

no, this is just a little nonsense, I only wanted to express my appreciation in a such a way as you deserve, but sadly I'm no writer.....

That was the sweetest story!Looking forward to the next chapter.CAT

MT......

it was superb!!

do write another when u get a chance!

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👏 👏 👏 Great story MT. Only one question.....If he knew her mom, how come he did not recognise her in the family pictures he saw at her home 7 years ago?? 😉

Super Duper Awesome story....... 👏 write more.....weekend hai....aur vaise bhi party mood hai....to party ke theme par hi kuch likh do MT jee

btw as someone said above...i must say you are a very devoted wife 😛

superb story just continue this one.

Originally posted by: Sugar&Spice

👏 👏 👏 Great story MT. Only one question.....If he knew her mom, how come he did not recognise her in the family pictures he saw at her home 7 years ago?? 😉

If you read the story carefully, Jai wasn't able to the pictures on the Mantlepiece because the room was quite dark, he could only make the outlines.....

Cheers,

MT

Once again your writing has left me in a daze..it was beautiful, MT!! Keep writing more!! 👏

This story nicely links to the real KS story, I think they should seriously consider showing this in a flashback, and we can once again see the young JW!! I liked the forgotten crystal locket being included, that was a nice touch and very thoughtful too!! 😊 😊

That was an excellent story, but i just found one mistake. If Jai knew Bani's mom, why wouldn't he have recognized her when he saw the family picture of them? well, that's the only mistake i found, but anyways, Excellent story. I loved it. ❤️ 👏