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Sarah

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Posted: 19 years ago

#31

awsome 👏 👏
please do continue soon
thanx 😳

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maria-n

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Posted: 19 years ago

#32

MT, what a beautiful story! Thanx

Your imagination shaped an enchanting little story: Kasamh Se's own small piece of history.

So, now we know of this and thus can we begin to understand how it came about that Bani seemed to have a sense of loyalty towards her devellish husband, from the very first day that their marriage was forced upon them.

no, this is just a little nonsense, I only wanted to express my appreciation in a such a way as you deserve, but sadly I'm no writer.....

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catcat

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Posted: 19 years ago

#33

That was the sweetest story!Looking forward to the next chapter.CAT

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Aakriti Mehta

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Posted: 19 years ago

#34

MT......

it was superb!!

do write another when u get a chance!

👏

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Sugar&Spice

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Posted: 19 years ago

#35

👏 👏 👏 Great story MT. Only one question.....If he knew her mom, how come he did not recognise her in the family pictures he saw at her home 7 years ago?? 😉

Edited by Sugar&Spice - 19 years ago

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Pyar Mein Twist

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Posted: 19 years ago

#36

Super Duper Awesome story....... 👏 write more.....weekend hai....aur vaise bhi party mood hai....to party ke theme par hi kuch likh do MT jee

btw as someone said above...i must say you are a very devoted wife 😛

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poddav

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Posted: 19 years ago

#37

superb story just continue this one.

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mistletoe

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Posted: 19 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Sugar&Spice
👏 👏 👏 Great story MT. Only one question.....If he knew her mom, how come he did not recognise her in the family pictures he saw at her home 7 years ago?? 😉

If you read the story carefully, Jai wasn't able to the pictures on the Mantlepiece because the room was quite dark, he could only make the outlines.....

Cheers,

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Dhruvie

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Posted: 19 years ago

#39

Once again your writing has left me in a daze..it was beautiful, MT!! Keep writing more!! 👏

This story nicely links to the real KS story, I think they should seriously consider showing this in a flashback, and we can once again see the young JW!! I liked the forgotten crystal locket being included, that was a nice touch and very thoughtful too!! 😊 😊

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~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 19 years ago

#40

That was an excellent story, but i just found one mistake. If Jai knew Bani's mom, why wouldn't he have recognized her when he saw the family picture of them? well, that's the only mistake i found, but anyways, Excellent story. I loved it. ❤️ 👏

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