FF: After 07/12 *Mujhe Maaf Kardo* - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Please do continue.

Thanks šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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šŸ‘ šŸ‘ awsome parts
please continue soon
thanx 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😭 awwwwwwwwww such a sad promo
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Posted: 19 years ago
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didi.. wat a sad promo......!! please make a little happier!

but still i loved it!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW!!! Ur writing another one?? I wonder where u get all these great ideas!!! Congrats on the ff!!! So how many total does this make it now?? I totally love the concept of this one.....pls continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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this one is awesome too....plzz cont šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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jaanu that was fablous so real šŸ˜› keep it up šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 5

Jai: Masi???

Masi: what is going on here???? U and ur child?? Bahu…

Jai has a shocked face!!

Bani is looking away

Masi: U mean…. Bahu… ur…..

They look up at her

Masi has the biggest happy face!!!!!!!

She yells at everyone to come

Jai and Bani are looking at each other

And don't know what to do!!

Everyone comes

And they ask her whats wrong?

She announces the good news to everyone

And boy o boy

Are they shocked or what!!!

Jigs face just drops!!!

Jigs: what??? Are you kidding?

Masi is saying no!!

Everyone is stunned

And they don't know what to say!!!

Masi: But… what was going on?? U two were fighting?? Bahu??

Jai tries to control it

And says that

Bani was a little upset with me

But everything is okay!!!

Masi: Okay!!…

She smiles

Everyone was still a little confused

But they walked off!!

Masi was smiling

And congrats them again!!!

Jai closes the door

And he turns back

And looks at Bani

Jai is telling Bani…

Plz don't tell Masi about us!!!

Bani: Don't worry! I wont say anythinig to masi that will hurt her!!!!!

Jai is looking at her

Bani: And I have to stay here now! I have no choice!!!

Jai is sad!

Bani: But…. I will stay here!! But I will have nothing to do w/ u!!

Jai is shocked!!

he is stunned

Bani: we have to live under the same roof….. and sadly in the same room too!!!

Jai: Bani please don't make this difficult for me!!

Bani: For u?? what about me??? So now what? Its all about u??

Jai: I didn't mean that…..

Bani just walks away

Jai is sad!

He leaves the room

He goes on the roof

And he's standing and is looking

And the song

Aadat is playing in the background!

He's pours a drink

But then

He's about to drink it

But he doesn't!!!

And he throws it off!!

In the night

Bani is sleeping on the bed

Jai isnt there

He's still sitting on the roof!

Bani turns around

And sees that he's not there

She falls asleep!!!

At 2:00 a.m..

He still isnt there

Bani sits up
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
Part 6

And is thinking where is he?

She goes out

And looks for him

She goes to his study room

But not there

She goes on the roof

And sees that he's there

Jai is sitting there

Sitting in space

Bani: Mr. Walia…

She says it in a little attitude

Bani: Mr. Walia

But he's not moving!!

She goes and shakes him

He snaps out

And looks at her

Bani: Its 2.. if someone sees u what will they say?? Come down!!

And she walks off

Jai goes back into the room

Since there is no couch

They have to share the bed!!!

Next Morning

Bani is awake

And she gets ready

And goes down

Everyone is looking at her

Masi is smiling!

Masi says u stay right here

I will be back

Bani is sitting

Jigs is asking her

What kind of joke is this??

ur pregnant?

This cant be true!!

Bani is looking at her

She is looking down!

Jigs: Ur lying??? Ur not pregnant!

Jai: Yes she is

Everyone is looking at him

Cuz he's coming down

Jai is saying

He doesn't want to hear anything

Bani is pregnant

I am the father

And that is final!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone is stunned!

Masi comes back

She didn't hear anything

And she gives something to Bani

To wrap around her arm

Saying its good for the baby!

Bani is smiling

Masi is soo happy!

She kisses Bani!

Masi tells Jai to come down

He comes

And both sit next to each other

Jai and Bani look at each other

And now the faces has changed

Bani has the mean look

Jai has the innocent look!

He is looking at her

With such a loving look

Bani is giving him a mean look!!!!



The End!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
Note:

There will be no update tomorrow or Saturday!!! i am sorry! my cousin is getting married.. so will be busy with that! i feel bad cuz i enjoy writing these!!!!

next update and preview will be posted on Sunday!!!!!!!!!!!!!


thanks!!

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