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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: soapaddict

Oh crap! The proverbial S*** is about the Hit to fan!!! OMIGOD! Aditee.. way to build the tension yaar. Even though there was no so called explosion, you built the tension brilliantly! I for one appreciate there not being anything intimate in today's section... it makes his longing and her anger that much more real. I hope Bani gives him a talking to! He may be sexy as hell..but he needs to know, from her, that he can't walk all over her... till he kisses the hell outta her!!!

I can't wait to see what happens!

I may get massacred for this...but I really liked the way that you created/built up Tarun's character. He's not some snivelling idiot. Seriously, despite the fact that he's not another JW (and a likely opponent in that sense).. he's almost more challenging to JW, as despite the fact that he isn't rich or powerful as JW.. he shares many of THE SAME qualities, one could venture to guess. He also is loyal, strong minded, a person of conviction, someone who doesen't bend to others' will.. and someone who adores Bani. They are natural opponents without realizing it... more alike than not! I loved it. JW may just have reason to fear this man, when it comes to Bani.

Ok, maybe not.. but he doesen't know that, and you built that up well.

I loved everybit. Its the set up section.. and we wait for the delights to come!

Soap



Ab I am not sure mere ko yeh padna hain...shayad will try that extra ounce of patience and wait for tommorrow's. Now I should be ready for the blasting...but I can handle it. 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee


Adi....knowing that this is the prelude to the eruption that's gonna follow itself is making me excited! 😉

The worst part of it was the plane ride, obviously for her, her hubby had actually called her after she reached wanting to know whose hand she had squeezed the blood out of, she had responded saying some old lady who was seated by her, who was visiting her daughter and that she did thsi trip once every month!!!

HOw sweet of him to ask! 😳

B was wearing a Ivory Black form fitting skirt a lil above her knees and a Lemon chiffon colored bloused on top,

Hmm to match her hubby eh? 😉 Isko kehte hai ESP! 😛

Bani had not shared with pia what else has been going on with her and hubby, no surprise how Pia would react on hearing THAT! a reconciliation in the physical sense was not Bani's idea but JW left her with NO choice, HE made the decisions. All he had to do was to kiss her and she'd change her mind. Part of her wanted him so much it was an impossible ache and she had been succumbing to it when ever opportunity presented itself. All the issues still remained, plus there was Tarun and Sanjana now in the picture. Her body's response to his touch had never before been this intense. He was fond of her, she knew that, he never failed to surprise her by reading her mind acurately each and every time, But.......she wanted them to feel the bond lovers do, married people have, that did not exist......

You know Bani you always think at the wrong times! 😛 Now you have the best physical relationship any woman could have and you insist on thinking about all the other silly issues! 😛 Stay focussed woman! Learn from your hubby! 😉


Their bodies communicated better than their minds. Her sixth sense alerted her of his presence every time, and each time her body reacted as if he had reached out and touched her..............

Oh to be Bani at that moment! 😳 What injustice to the rest of us!!! 😛
Nice Adi.....another realisation of the communication beyond words!

She had gone shopping last nite despite JW's warnings, she had not asked the hotel for the next flight's tkt.............

Just wait till JW finds out what a bad girl you've been Bani! Waise all your punishments are way too sweet to be afraid of! 😳 On second thoughts maybe we shouldn't complain to him afterall! 😛

Her driver Yadav was there to pick her up, she had e-mailed JW in the morning abt her flight details, deciding not to call him, lest he showed up at the airport.........

And he couldn't have shown up if she e-mailed him? 😕 Only Bani understands her logic! 😛

though she had spent the majority of the time at the airport and on the plane thinking about him and wanting him...............

It's called the JW syndrome.....you're in the final stages of it...there's no treatment for it....mainly coz noone wants to be treated for it! 😳

B waits and pulls a chair and sits down................... She sensed the same emotional reserve in him that existed in her, he would say simple things to her that would make her feel happy rather than pay her a stunning compliment each time she walked by. She didnt have to be on guard constantly with him pysically and emotionally. He didnt unsetlle her equilibrium quite the way hubby did, her heart did not race when she saw him or she didnt feel the electricity when he touched her.

And that is why he's the friend and JW is THE HUSBAND! 😉 Bani stark difference in the 2 terms......hope you're able to explain it to T in your meeting with him! 😛

she knew he is a very strong man, with firm opinions on everything, extremely well educated and intelligent and can be perceived as arrogant by people who didnt know him, but Bani knew it was just his ploy to cover up his innate shyness. He had big dreams for himself in the hotel biz. He eventually planned to go on his own. He came from a business family in Delhi, though not as affluent as JW but was quite well known in the auto parts business. tarun was the dark sheep of the family, who actually went to work for some one! That too a man like JW!! Despite working for a man like him he was holding his own, in fact Mr A may have named him the successor of his biz had he not sold out..........

Hmm.....I guess different from the opinion I had of him....interesting....still nothing in comparison with JW....sorry Adi you can't sell him to me! 😛 Maybe Soap might take up on the offer! 😉

T: bani I cant do this, is liye maine un se poocha why is eh sending me he said "boss's orders"
B:I dont believe this
T: Main milkar aa raha hoon abhi Mr Walia se he didnt have time for me yesterday. He either wants me to take the transfer or quit!!

Great going JW! 😉 Kaante nikaalna toh koi aapse seekhe! 😉

B: OMG!! (her rage beginning to simmer inside her)
T: You know what Bani, just becoz woh chahte hain main DJ jaaoon main nahi jaoonga.

T watch what you say.....JW ke spies honge.....un tak pahunchegi toh tumhara kya hoga! 😛

B shuts her eyes in disgust, OMG, here begins juvenile battle of supremacy between the only two men she has ever been close to in life. And the prize at stake was HER!

Poor Bani...what a terrible situation to be in! 😛 Even if I tried I couldn't sympathise with this woman! 😛

B:Tarun please......
T: You are very reserved, you are not expressive, but bani main chup nahi rahoonga.

Umm.....are we talking about the same Bani who was ahem ahem quite expressive with her hubby! 😳

T:I was reading about thsi guy on the web jab main ghar pe tha, all the interviews and interviewers call him either a hawk or a panther, he has a very deadly reputation for going after what he wants and getting it Bani,

Kya luck hai tumhari Bani....the object of his attention is you now! Hum sab ki nazar zaroor lagegi tujhe! 😛

It said every time that he has the power and influence to financially ruin any adversary without any qualms.......but for once I think he has found his match.(lot of conviction and confidence in his voice)

Bechara T....he's hallucinating....Bani you better set him right before he leaves or else he's headed seedha for therapy! 😛

T: Bani tum to kahogi nahi unko, that u care for me or like me or what ever I myself dont know what u feel, but main itne easily nahi chhodoonga.

Yup....either therapy or hospital for sure.....JW agar yeh sunleta toh tum apne ek haath aur ek per ko bhool hi jaao! 😛

T: Bani I know what you mean to me, from what you have told him about me, I think you should not go back to him.....

Btw T have you met Pia Pia? I think you and her would hit it off perfecctly! She thinks so like you! 😛

B: He is a very powerful man Tarun, I know him (blushes)

B you crack me up! 😆😆 Bechara T yahan tension se mar raha hai aur tumhara dhyaan kahan jaa raha hai! 😳

T: maine unke aaj tak ka har interview padh liya, his employees, friends and family LOVE him but his enemies either hate him or just say that because they fear him......

Well that's JW for you T....the extremist....when he's in love he's the softest teddy bear and when he's mad you don't want to be anywhere near him....hint hint T! 😛

I know he plays dirty. Mujhe dar nahi hai, agar tum mere saath ho.

Again with the hallucinations! 😛

T:Tum chahti ho main DJ chala jaaoon?
B thinks "Why is it so easy for me to say "Yes" Why dont I wnat him to stay, after all the nasty, devious things JW has done to him, why do i still wnat him to go?"

Thought like a true Mr.s Walia! Finally Bani....you have your priorities set right.....stand up and give a bow...you've made a breakthrough! 😃

Why did Tarun's opponent have to be JW. the match was over even before it had begun.................... She knew JW would go to any extreme to stop what he wanted to or get what he wanted to but she had never in her wildest dreams ever imagined him doing anything like this. A bitter smile creased her face"Hey, he has brought you into his house blackmailing you about the loan, Tarun is small fry"

You're on a roll today Bani....realising your hubby's power and accepting it will def earn you some extra brownie points! 😉 You might just need them when you go and discuss T first thing meeting him after 10 days! 😛

B's heart starts roaring, her skin suddenly seems too tight for her body as her nerves have expanded

The fear he invokes in her is quite amusing....yet she doesn't leave any opportunity to irk him! 😛

B:Oh!
MS Ya somebody ruffled the lion's mane today, he is NOT happy

JW the king of jungle....how apt! 😉

MS: I am sure he's been missing you thats why the tantrum, go on, he cant wait to see you

Oh how adorable....MS you're the next cupid after Maasi! Keep up the great work hun! 😃

SLAMS it behind her locking it................J

Scene set! 😉

W completely stunned by the sudden entry his wife looks up in shock from his laptop,his incredibly dark eyes almost black, his sensuous mouth, well cut hair stylishly groomed, dressed in black shirt, three buttons undone, giving generous views of the hairs on his exposed chest..........sleeves rolled up till the elbows teamed with Cold grey trousers black shoes, rolex in place, hair thoroughly ruffled, eyes kinda red,he looks brutally sexy...... Oh! what a lovely lovely way to die Bani thinks as a wave of sensual delight clogs her breath seeing him like that.................

Hai THIS is how I want to die! That's it I've decided! I'm having a word with the Big Guy! 😳 Adi....you were right he's YUMMY enough to be EATEN UP! 😳😳 and 3 buttons undone.....aaj toh meri lottery lag gayi! 😳😳😳 Thanks hun!!!! 😃

JW:Ya (he senses colo, rush to his face at the sight of his wife, hasnt seen her for over 10 days.................. his eyes travel up and down her length drinking in her, skirt, the blouse, her hair TIED!....his hot gaze noting the volcano waiting to erupt.....,

Itni badi gustakhi Mrs. W......but I see it Adi 😉 Smart move! 😉

JW (calmly) Hello! Mrs Walia, welcome home!

Ok Adi...you've set the scene perfectly now I can't wait for the next part! Kal tu pehle FF likh phir baad mein kuch aur kaam kar! The suspense is killing me now! 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: soapaddict

Oh crap! The proverbial S*** is about the Hit to fan!!! OMIGOD! Aditee.. way to build the tension yaar. Even though there was no so called explosion, you built the tension brilliantly! I for one appreciate there not being anything intimate in today's section... it makes his longing and her anger that much more real. I hope Bani gives him a talking to! He may be sexy as hell..but he needs to know, from her, that he can't walk all over her... till he kisses the hell outta her!!!

I can't wait to see what happens!

I may get massacred for this...but I really liked the way that you created/built up Tarun's character. He's not some snivelling idiot. Seriously, despite the fact that he's not another JW (and a likely opponent in that sense).. he's almost more challenging to JW, as despite the fact that he isn't rich or powerful as JW.. he shares many of THE SAME qualities, one could venture to guess. He also is loyal, strong minded, a person of conviction, someone who doesen't bend to others' will.. and someone who adores Bani. They are natural opponents without realizing it... more alike than not! I loved it. JW may just have reason to fear this man, when it comes to Bani.

Ok, maybe not.. but he doesen't know that, and you built that up well.

I loved everybit. Its the set up section.. and we wait for the delights to come!

Soap


I knew it Soap! You are a secret T admirer! 😛 Accha hai...kam se kam Adi toh khush hogi! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
THANKS PI AND SOAP, AD ABHI KE ABHI PADH I ORDER U
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

THANKS PI AND SOAP, AD ABHI KE ABHI PADH I ORDER U



Sorry yaar I am chickening out of this one...u can blame Stephen King and whomever that other author is who have inspired me---they are pleading to Rowling that HP must not die. Ab meri baari...kaal ka padne ke baad himmat karke yeh padh lungi.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Adi, What can I say .... just fantastic. I am reading all the parts in anticipation of the next cherry desk eruption action 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
I cannot believe how FINE this man is...really. Today's episode where he takes the bag from her hand and tells her she doesn't need to go. Prachi ke expressions I'd rather not get into but his eyes said it ALL. It reminded me of a puppy...one saying 'sorry' w/all his heart. There was one dialogue in the whole scene...and yet it said 10x more then Jigs ranted and screamed abt throughout the entire episode. RK I have no clue wat method acting is but watever it is...u have really got a hold of it!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: armaandeewani

I cannot believe how FINE this man is...really. Today's episode where he takes the bag from her hand and tells her she doesn't need to go. Prachi ke expressions I'd rather not get into but his eyes said it ALL. It reminded me of a puppy...one saying 'sorry' w/all his heart. There was one dialogue in the whole scene...and yet it said 10x more then Jigs ranted and screamed abt throughout the entire episode. RK I have no clue wat method acting is but watever it is...u have really got a hold of it!!!


I know eh AD! 2 dialogues that I loved in today's US epi was the one where says he doesn't know whether to thank/apologise to her and the other was when he takes the bag from her hand! Those eyes are disastrous I tell you! I mean he just draws you in with them....you can't help but look into them with all the longing and desire in the world! 😳 RK's expressions are his forte! Ab woh method acting ho ya kuch aur...as long as he keeps doing what he's doing I have no complaints! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Piscean


I know eh AD! 2 dialogues that I loved in today's US epi was the one where says he doesn't know whether to thank/apologise to her and the other was when he takes the bag from her hand! Those eyes are disastrous I tell you! I mean he just draws you in with them....you can't help but look into them with all the longing and desire in the world! 😳 RK's expressions are his forte! Ab woh method acting ho ya kuch aur...as long as he keeps doing what he's doing I have no complaints! 😛



The disgusted face as he and Bani listen on when Jigs says she can do watever she wants to Anu as she is her daughter blah blah blah. The disgust that comes on his face...as well as the shots of him when Jigs says the biggest mistake she made was sitting Bani down in the mandap w/him...right on w/the expressions.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: armaandeewani

Stephen King and whomever that other author is



Irving...that is the other author.

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