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Posted: 19 years ago


I am sorry guys for disturbing. I dont even know whether I should be here.

But this is what I exactly feel like when i am reading Aditee's fanfiction. 😉

its too good - but thats an understatement

hope u all wont mind my intrusion
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Posted: 19 years ago
AF...be sure to read MT's write-up on the latest SBS 😛. Would definitely like to see the video when it's posted.
Edited by armaandeewani - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hi gals...
Adi, you are also stopping at such a suspense yaar.... me dying to know about the verbal onslaught now... 😆 and am hoping the volcanoes will not erupt before the onslaught 😉

my b'day is on the 15th of this month.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Bani got off the plane at 3.35PM the day after the papers got transferred, glad the trip was over. The worst part of it was the plane ride, obviously for her, her hubby had actually called her after she reached wanting to know whose hand she had squeezed the blood out of, she had responded saying some old lady who was seated by her, who was visiting her daughter and that she did thsi trip once every month!!!

she really likes to push his buttons..humesha usse challage kar ti hai..but it was soo sweet he called her, darr gaya hoga ke kahin kissi goodlooking ladka ka haath na press kardiya ho..Jealous are we Mr.Walia😛

B was wearing a Ivory Black form fitting skirt a lil above her knees and a Lemon chiffon colored bloused on top, she hadnt carried the jacket that went with it, as the weather in both places had not warranted any warm clothing on.....

oh, wow Bani in a form fitting skirt..only Adi's Bani could pull this off😉
Pia could not understand how Bani could feel anything for this man, how she could continue to atke his orders, work for him and accomplish biz deals for him.

Pia tu apni bakwaas bandh rakh..tu ja jake pushkar ko Push Kar ke aa..Bani ka paise leke jo bhaag raha hai😛

Bani had not shared with pia what else has been going on with her and hubby, no surprise how Pia would react on hearing THAT!
yehi kahe gi..that JW ne tumhe drug karke preggers kar diya hoga😆
a reconciliation in the physical sense was not Bani's idea but JW left her with NO choice, HE made the decisions. All he had to do was to kiss her and she'd change her mind.

what a slut😆 j/k iss mein Bani ki kya galti he is just such a damn sexy kisser ke his kisses just have that affect on people😳

Part of her wanted him so much it was an impossible ache and she had been succumbing to it when ever opportunity presented itself. All the issues still remained, plus there was Tarun and Sanjana now in the picture.

see she admitted it she wants him..PHYSICALLY...who cares about Sanj and Taru they can both go to hell for all I care😛

Her body's response to his touch had never before been this intense. He was fond of her, she knew that, he never failed to surprise her by reading her mind acurately each and every time, But.......she wanted them to feel the bond lovers do, married people have, that did not exist......
Their bodies communicated better than their minds.

kya baat hai Bani tere dimaag mein aaj kal yeh kya chalne laga..acha hai lagta hai tujhe akal aane lagi hai..tu badi ho gayi hai meri bachi😛

Her sixth sense alerted her of his presence every time, and each time her body reacted as if he had reached out and touched her..............

Thankgod her sixth sense alerts her of HIM and not DEAD PEOPLE😕

Jigyasa, Ranveer and Rashi were back from the sojourn as well....... Rano had alerted her to the impending danger. Bani told herself that it woudl be JW's resposnibility to explain his actions of bringing her back into the house. Jigs dare not ask her about being ina different room, cause if she did, she would want to hear what bani has to say about her dear brother.............

chalo ab bajen gi ghantiyaan..pandit ji to aagaye hai..JAI MAHARAJ!😆

had wrung a promise out of her that she wud be back with hubby on a holiday pretty soon. Bani knew thatw ud never happen but just promised anyway.

Never say never Bani😛

Her driver Yadav oo, oo can this character be played by Rajpal Yadav..I just love his comic sense😆

She insisted on going to office as yadav(Rajpal😉) was instructed to take her home only. She didnt want to go see Jigyasa so soon. She had hardly prepared herself mentally yet.......

iss mein mentally prepared hone ki kya baat hai..you should be prepared physically my friend😉
walks by to tarun's desk and is shocked!

uski photo pe haar chada hai!😛
She sees him packing his stuff, she is not sure if he is going on a trip or quitting
aww..he's still alive par chalo duniya se chutti nahi milli toh office se toh mil gayi na😛
B:Hi! Tarun, ab main aa gayi to tum DJ jaa rahe ho?
T does not respond continues clearing papers from his desk

good boy..boss ki biwi hai..you should not answer bak😉
B is sad and almost driven to tears

aise namard ke liye kya aansoon bahana..JW ne abhi usse sirf office se nikala hai..agar tumhare aansoon dekh liye toh is duniya se nikaal dega..aisa hai mera munna😛
He didnt unsetlle her equilibrium quite the way hubby did, her heart did not race when she saw him or she didnt feel the electricity when he touched her.

not everyone is JW Bani..I thought your sixt sense might have already told you that😃
That too a man like JW!! Despite working for a man like him he was holding his own, in fact Mr A may have named him the successor of his biz had he not sold out..........

Oh please! yeh toh peon ki job ke liye bhi layak nahi hai..successor my foot😛
T:Bani I have been transferred!!!

damn sirf transfer..arey yaar isse koi fire karo na😆
T: bani I cant do this, is liye maine un se poocha why is eh sending me he said "boss's orders"

LONG LIVE JAI WALIA😛
T: Main milkar aa raha hoon abhi Mr Walia se he didnt have time for me yesterday. He either wants me to take the transfer or quit!!

isse kehte hai pyar..mindblowing..kya aadmi hai😉
T: You know what Bani, just becoz woh chahte hain main DJ jaaoon main nahi jaoonga.

agar is duniya mein rehna hai toh jaana padega beta😛
B shuts her eyes in disgust, OMG, here begins juvenile battle of supremacy between the only two men she has ever been close to in life. And the prize at stake was HER!
now when did she come close to Taru..they act more like 4th cousins😆
T: You are very reserved, you are not expressive, but bani main chup nahi rahoonga.

if only you knew Taru how expressive and unreserved our Bani can be..all you need is JW and a bed..thats when the cat comes out of the closet😉
T:I was reading about thsi guy on the web jab main ghar pe tha, all the interviews and interviewers call him either a hawk or a panther,I love them both😛 he has a very deadly reputation for going after what he wants and getting it Bani,maante ho na! It said every time that he has the power and influence to financially ruin any adversary without any qualmsA dangerous man Taru..oh how I want him.......but for once I think he has found his match.(lot of conviction and confidence in his voice) 😆 😆 😆 Adi I fell off my chair laughing after I read that...yeh nunna munna, sukka sadda Taru..JW ek ungli lagayega toh yeh 2feet dhoor girega..yeh Taru kiss khet ki sadi hui mooli hai..JW toh isse kacha chaba jaye😛 Adi but ek baat galat hai..first of all JW ka comparison nahi..none what so ever, no one can even come close to our JW..aur agar tumne comparison kiya bhi toh woh bhi Tarun ke saath..yeh toh insult hai re😛

T: Bani tum to kahogi nahi unko, that u care for me or like me or what ever I myself dont know what u feel, but main itne easily nahi chhodoonga.

arey woh kya kahegi..JW ek Chumma dega..toh woh tumhe kya iss duniya ko bhool jayegi😛
B: He is a very powerful man Tarun, I know him (blushes)

aagayi na line pe😉
T: maine unke aaj tak ka har interview padh liya, his employees, friends and family LOVE him but his enemies either hate him or just say that because they fear him......

dekha uske toh dushman bhi usse darr te hain..wah kya aadmi hai..Adi tumhara JW toh kissi underworld don se bhi zayada acha hai..I always tell my family ke kaash mera ek BHAI(don) hota..lekin agar mujhe tere JW jaisa koi mil jaye..toh apna yeh Bhai wala sapna chod doongi😛
I know he plays dirty. Mujhe dar nahi hai, agar tum mere saath ho.

kyu usse scapegoat banane ka irada hai..darr nahi lagta tu ruk abhi saale..darr ke maare JW ne teri chaddi na utaar di toh mera naam bhi Simran nahi😛
B thinks "Great! her life's most imp decision, being made over war between husband and freind"

tu kitni idiot hai Bani...kaise kaise aadmiyon ke saath naata rakh ti hai
any way I will quit I feel, coz main ab inke liye kaam nahi kar sakta.

acha hai..tu chala ja..warna JW tera halwa bana dega😉
B thinks "Why is it so easy for me to say "Yes" Why dont I wnat him to stay, after all the nasty, devious things JW has done to him, why do i still wnat him to go?"

dekha...aakhir aa gayi na akal theekhane pe..Kahan JW ke saath woh passionate nights...aur kahan iss bandhar ke saath boring coffee dates😛
Bani starts boiling and stewing on her ride to hubby's office. HOW DARE HE! This line kept ringing in her brain over and over again. Why did Tarun's opponent have to be JW. the match was over even before it had begun....................she knew JW would go to any extreme to stop what he wanted to or get what he wanted to but she had never in her wildest dreams ever imagined him doing anything like this. A bitter smile creased her face"Hey, he has brought you into his house blackmailing you about the loan, Tarun is small fry"

Teri FF Wali Bani bahut smart hai Adi..nothing needs to be said to her
MS Congrats BTW U pulle dit off, he is extremely plzd with you, atleast he WAS (frowns and shakes her head)

kya baat hai Bani..tu jaanti hai na uske impress honeka matlab kya hai..ek aur passionate steamy night..teri toh lottery lag gayi😉
MS Ya somebody ruffled the lion's mane today, he is NOT happy

hmmm..Adi I like the LION better than hawk or Panther..what can be better than a jungle ka raja😛
MS: I am sure he's been missing you thats why the tantrum, go on, he cant wait to see you

awwww..how sweet..he misses her😳
B:I cant wait.... (TO KILL HIM, she thinks)

did I hear TO KISS HIM😉
his incredibly dark eyes almost black, his sensuous mouth, well cut hair stylishly groomed, dressed in black shirt, three buttons undone, giving generous views of the hairs on his exposed chest..........sleeves rolled up till the elbows teamed with Cold grey trousers black shoes, rolex in place, hair thoroughly ruffled, eyes kinda red,he looks brutally sexy...... Oh! what a lovely lovely way to die Bani thinks as a wave of sensual delight clogs her breath seeing him like that.................

kya sight hai..waise PI I won't say much here because I know this is a dedication for you..but can I say he looks sooo YUMMMYYYY
JW (calmly) Hello! Mrs Walia, welcome home!

I think I just died and went to heaven..That Mrs. Walia just kills me everytime..chal I'll take that as a dedication to ME😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
aur koi ho na ho..SOAP ko yahan zaroor hona chahieh.. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sangita,
the AF is still not logged in... but I can speak for them.. you are definitely NOT barging in on us. Please feel free to join us.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sangitadas



I am sorry guys for disturbing. I dont even know whether I should be here.

But this is what I exactly feel like when i am reading Aditee's fanfiction. 😉

its too good - but thats an understatement

hope u all wont mind my intrusion


You're not disturbing Sangita....everyone's welcome in our thread! I'm glad you liked my review! 😉 Adi's FF is amazing! And we don't mind the intrusion at all....feel free to come in and post whenever you like! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Vazz, Sim, sangita, Hi!
Good to see u sangita

Soap is the fisrt one to get to work. Oh Well I dont have a job 😭 and me and Pi and AD live on the other coast actually, so we let Soap take the lead in the mornings, aaj pata nahi kahan gayi

Too many errands last nite I think, what say u soap?
Pi, kyon kya khayaal hai?
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Posted: 19 years ago
You have more than a full time job.. Adi... 😆 Keep the FF running and also keep your house running.. not an easy job...
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Posted: 19 years ago
Belated B'day Adi.. how was your b'day?

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