Pyar Ko Hojane Do....Updated PG 17 09/27 - Page 11

WOW!! its a beautiful part!

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Originally posted by: Raania

thank you thank you thank you 🤗 🤗 .🤗 .🤗 .🤗 love you all..
today doesnt look like that much of a busy day..so i will definitly continue...

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Yay!!!!! I'll be waiting. Make it long plzzzzzz.😛

Jai was crying by laughing and holding his stomach..tum mere liye pareshan thi kiu ki tum Jiyasa ki soch rahi thi….aur meri business….Bani that is the most funniest thing I have heard…..

Bani looked down with her cup almost empty in her hands and smiled….

Jai…coming close to her…..kaho nah…Bani kya sirf isiliye tum is toofani raath meh bina car ke…mujhe dhoond rahi thi??? Looking at Bani who was looking down….Bani very embarrassed and shy……

Jai holding her shoulders…Bani??....tumne kuch kaha nahi???....very softly seductively he said

Bani looked up…smiling….with tears in her eyes...tears of joy and relief…….Jai could see the love and care in her eyes for him….the longing the worry……

Bani: mr Walia woh…..
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CONCLUSION:

Bani was all blushing…she looked up so lovingly to Jai's face….putting the cup away she caressed his face so very gently taking his face into her hands and looking up to him…..
Jai's hands were on her waist all this while….he expected Bani to come into his arms but was not expecting such a reaction….Bani's hands felt so nice and soft and warm on his face….he thought to himself…Bani u better not start anything u cant handle!!!!...

Bani smiled and looked up ….tears in her eyes…but this time tears of joy

Bani: Mr walia woh…..woh meh pareshan thi..yeh nahi soch kar keh saab chinta karege…yeh soch kar ki meh kya karugi…if something had happened to you…what would I have done….meh kaha jati…..i know I have been so mad at you and have kept u away from me…par khete hai nah..pyar jitna bhi chupaya jaye nahi chupta…with that she leaned forward and put her head onto his upper chest area right below his next…it was the perfect fit….Jai gently soothed her hair back while Bani carried on talking

Bani: meh ne bhouth koshish ki ke meh aapse nafrat karu..yah phir aapko bhul jao…magar jitna bhi bhagna chaha uthni hi aapko apne kareeb paya….aur phir jaab aaj woh call aya all I could see was u hurt and lying somewhere all alone and I just had to get u in my arms and keep u away from all the troubles in the world

Jai was silently acknowledging what Bani was saying at the sametime smiling to himself…go on baby im listening…..he thought to himself…..

Bani: I don't care what ur past is Mr Walia….now I realise that nobody has control over time, fate and destiny…what has to happen will happen….u came in my life for a reason and now I know why…..its because……she smiled to herself

Jai pulled her away from him looking down……because what Bani

Bani: all shy and looking down…because I need you because I love you and because I cannot live without you…her words were so soft just like music to Jai's ears…

Jai could not believe his luck…..kya?? kay zara phir se kehna…very huskly he said

Bani: laughingly gave him shot into his tummy….u heard me…don't pretend….Mr Walia…aaahaam yane ke Mr Jai Walia aapki patni Mrs Bani walia aapse bhouth hi pyar karti hai…shouted Bani….she was so happy…and she cannot live without you…so don't u dare leave her ......ever again..very seriously she pointed her finger at his chest…..

Jai pushed Bani into him….in a tight aggressive hug….never my love..NEVER…duniya chahe idhar ki udhar hojaye…nothing and nobody can ever take u away from me…..never….i love you bani….i love you….

Jai: after what seemed like eternity..jai spoke up….waise kafi smart ho tum….aakeli is barish meh mujhe khojne nikal gaithi…..plus its freezing outside….woh saab bhi kiu ki tumhe chinta thi ki Jiyasa worry karegi….laughing he started again

Bani: Jaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii???...in a very serious note yet full of fun she said….

That shut Jai up…what???….kya kaha????…wanting to hear it again and again and again!!!

Bani: maine kaha…..pushing him towards the bed…that if u don't stop right now Jai u will be very sorry….with that Bani pushed Jai .. pulling Bani with him….both land on the bed with Bani on top of Jai….caught in his embrace…..

Jai: Nice move Mrs Walia…I didn't think u had it in u!!!

Bani: oh no Mr Walia..there is a whole lot u don't know about me yet….with that Bani bit Jai on the cheeks making Jai zizzle with excitement and a whole bunch of other feelings…..Jai looked at Bani still holding her t ightly…

Jai: oh no u just didn't do that

Bani: looking at him…..went forward and kissed the life out of of Jai……

A stunned Jai just responded back with pent up hunger and frustration all burning away in the passionate kiss from his hot wife….

After sometime…Bani looked at him…lifting her face up……all innocent and smiling yet glowing from the after effect of that kiss…..….

Bani: did what Mr Walia….???

Jai loosing all control turning BAni upside down to where he was and laughing loud and hard….oh so u don't know….huh honey…let me show it to you

A giggling Bani soon was hushed by the cruel yet most hungry demands of her husband…..

lost in love and passion neither seemed oblivious to the sun creeping up bringing with it a refreshing start to a beautiful day aswell as their rhista……

Pyar ko ho jane do
Pyar meh khojane do
Aetbaar kiska hai
Intezar kiska hai
Abhi nah hua toh phir kabhi nahi nahi

Lal la lala lal la la…………….

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thanks to all my buddies out there for giving me such nice feedbacks on this fanfic of mine....attached is the last part...hope u guys like it......

love u all R

First!!!!!!!!!!!nowi got to go back and read!

oh my god that was soooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!! 😳
Bani bit Jai's cheek 😆 😉 😳
that was an AWESOME fanfic!!!!!!!!
i think you should create another one!!!!!
i LOVE your fanfics!!

very nice finish
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very nice fanfic
you did really good job
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WOW! di.. it was a fantastic ending.. so thank you for a stupendous story and
am looking forward to another part from ur new ff!

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👏 👏 awsome fanfic 👏 congratulations
please do start a new fanfic
thank you so much for all you hard work and effort put into the fanfic thank you once again 😳

wow what an amazing ending Raania! Loveeed it!
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thanx for shairng ur wonderful work with all of us! 😉