Pyar Ko Hojane Do....Updated PG 17 09/27

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Hi Guys

This my 2nd attempt at a fanfic...hope u guys like it....😳

pyar ko hojane do

pyar meh khojane do

aetbaar kiska hai

intezar kiska hai

abhi na hua toh phir kabhi nahi kabhi nahi...

After the 3 weddings…

Bani couldn't believe her eyes…the woman that was murdered that night was her mother….

Bani thinking to herself….magar maa toh accident meh ….than everything starts clicking to her…

Maa ka accident..baba ka drinking problem…baba koh zindige se haar maana…meh hamesha shocti thi ke baba koh maa ki yaad ati thi..magar uhe yeh gham satati thi…

Bani fell on her knees with all the medical/police reports…

Mr Walia ka car tha…Roshni was driving….all the blame was put on her mum…being in a drunk state and crossing the road….she had lost so much blood that the doc cldnt save her….diabetic ke karan unka pressure was too low….etc etc…everything was getting blurry infront of Bani….

Bani was so furious…she was mad…how dare Mr Walia…Roshni….how dare they…meh aise insaan se kaise pyar karsakti hu....she shakes her head…NAHI !!! Aisa kaise ho sakta hai…Mr Walia??????????...Bani koh yakeen hi nahi horaha hai….its like somebody tore her heart out of her chest but she is still breathing

Bani – Jai says (he had followed her and saw everything)….[it was the mechanic who told Bani everything….he took revenge on the slap Jai had given him…after everything he did for the Walia on that night that's what he got "a slap"…]

Bani looks up with hatred and some other emotion in her eyes…was it heart break…was it sorrow..was it pain….

Jai: Bani meh…

Bani: bus

Jai: Bani wo

Bani: Bus

Jai: Bani meh wo

Bani: BUS ….BUS …BUS Mr WALIA………aap itne ghatia insaan ho sakte ho meh yeh kabhi soch nahi sakti thi….

Jai: Ba…(before he could complete)

Bani: maine aap se kitna pucha…aap ne mujhe nahi kuch kaha..aab meh janti hu kiu…..aap ko daar tha….maine socha aap mujse shayad kahi thora sa pyar karte hai aur isiliye mujhe pareshan nahi karna chate the….magar aap…aap ko yeh darr tha ke mai sachai janjaugi…KIU???...

Bani: aap…inbetween sobs …mere…more sobs…maa ke ….more sobs more like shock….KATIL HO!!1

Jai: NAHI Bani wo ek acc…….before he could complete

Bani: mujhe kuch nahi sunna aapse….(she frantically covers her ears with her hands and shakes her head from one side to the other)….

Jai could not see it….he went closer to Bani and held her by the shoulder….Bani shook herself from his grip

Bani: Don't touch me…..dont touch me….u u ….Murderer….(this hurt Jai to the core)

.meri maa ne kabhi bhi sharab ko haath nahi lagaya…aur aap ne kaha ke woh nashe meh thi…..

Jai: Bani meri baath….

Bani: mujhe kuch nahi sunna…..kuch bhi nahi…

With this Bani threw all the reports at him and ran away from that stupid building….tears flowing down….

Jai picked up all the reports and had a look at it!!!..........yeh Bani kya kuch keh rahi thi….

Sharab…Kiran drunk…what the hell….as Jai read all the reports his eyes went up with shock…

"maine aisa kuch statement toh nahi kaha tha…"…than it clicks to him Roshni!

A very furious/angry/hurt and desperate Jai leaves to find Bani ..........back of his head he knws what he has to do with Roshni.....

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SIKinLoVE thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ohhhhhhhhhhh.. niceeee.. plz cont soon... 👏
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hey its good...u should continue when u can!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thats good.. interesting ..
plzz continue..

areyy bani plzz.. mere jai ko aur mat satao..
woh already bahut pareshaan hei...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey raania! that was really good pleez do continue!
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very interesting 😭 raania ji please continue soon
great job 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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raania what a great part...pls cont darling
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please!!!!!!!! continue ! I really liked it! 😊
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Bani keeps walking to the house…..background music…."koi fariyaad…from tum bin"

She is thinking to herself…mere saath hi kiu…she looks up and says to the air….akhir meh kiu
Phele aapne maa ko chinli …maine kuch bhi nahi kaha
Phir baba ko…maine kuch bhi nahi kaha
Aur aab jisko meh saabse zada pyar karti hu …usineh mujhe yeh….

Bani is so heart broken…whatever happened in her life she dealt it like a champion….no matter what the obstacle was….but now life has treated with such a pain..she doesn't know how to deal with it…

A deperate Jai…gets into his car and starts looking for Bani….all the time thinking and saying

Jai: hey bhagwan yeh Bani kaha hai…kahi kuch hona jaye use….please baby believe me…maine aisa kuch nahi kiya….it as an accident…yeh saab maine nahi kaha….please baby believe me…"I Love You…"…suddenly the car stops with a screech….OH MY GOD…Jai Walia neh admit karli…..he loves his wife….."Godammit Bani where are you"…..agar tumhe kuch hogeya meh apne aap ko maaf nahi kar pauga….

Bani reaches the Walia house and is crying like anything….as she enters the house Masi sees her….

Masi: aareh Bani beta…kaha thi tum…saab log tumhe puch rahe the….

Bani: is just crying …she doesn't care anymore

Masi thinking that its coz of Rano's marriage….."maat ro beta….yeh toh hona hi tha…"…akhir sachiye se kaab tak koi bhag sakta hai"…
Bani looked up at Masi…thinking….Masi koh pata tha…(but Masi toh Rano ke baremeh kherahi hai)

Bani: Masi aap

Masi: shhhhhh Bani Beta…aisa toh hone hi tha…akhir kaab tak...bhen ko shadi toh karni thi...

Before Masi could finish…..Jai ran in the house…..

Jai: shouting like a crazy man…"BANI"…"BANI"
Masi: aare munna…kiu chila raheho….kya hua….Bani mere paas hai..dheko…..

Jai: just looks at Bani …..Jai looks like he had been crying all this time….

Masi: bhouth hi pareshan hai….akhir choti bhen bhi parai hogayi…aur phir maa aur pita bhi nahi hai nah…..

At the mention of Maa and Baba…Bani starts to cry again….and starts to say

Bani: Masi wo…aap nahi janti….Mr Wa…sobs and cries and keeps talking in riddles….mujse pyar…sobs and sobs..meri maa…starts to panic….park ….is sobbing like crazy… Mr Walia …..Pia….meh…(Masi is very confused and says that shes is just in shock ) shadi…..

Masi looks at Bani and is worried…areh lagta hai Maa aur Baba ka naam sunkar yeh aur bhi pareshan hogai hai…..jus than Bani starts to panic….Jai runs to her….

Jai: Bani Bani
Bani: is shivering….hysteria and cannot stop crying….
Masi: Bani….Bani beta

Jai starts to cry and looks at Masi

Jai: masi yeh Bani ko kya hua…..

Masi; kabhi kabhi shock se hota hai beta…tum isi kamre meh lekar jao meh doctor ko phone karti hu……

Bani at this point faints….she is so tired and weak and her body cannot take it no more….Jai picks her up and takes it to their room…he sits by the bed holding her hand…

Jai: im so sorry Bani….meh kabse tumhe yeh khene wala tha…magar I as so sacred….to loose you…to think u might think i did it on purpose....magar mera yakeen mano…maine kuch nahi kiya tha…
Yeh jaab hua toh I was in shock and Roshni aur Ravinjay ne saab samahala tha…
When I finally realized what had happened it was too late…to late to do anything...all i could do was help ur dad with any difficulty he faced after that......please Baby mera yakeen karo…meri baath ek baar toh sunlo….i love you Bani…meri baath ek baar toh sunlo

Bani deep unconscious could only vaguely hear him …..she was too lost in her deep sleep….she was tired…her body was tired…..its like when a person has lost hope in life...she just didnt want to live no more....

masi comes in with the doctor!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey raania luv ur fanfic pleez do continue! i will be waitin! thanx!

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