mujhe pyar do - part 25 added pg 36 - Page 18

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Posted: 19 years ago
Thats sooo sweet!!!

please do continue for all of us!
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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW that was rokcing and sooo romantic.. yaar.. do continue..

and I have a question...
PS : yeh phone hameshaa time pe kyun bajthe hei .. dekho naa jai was about to ... kissology.. on bani when that stupid phone rang..
and u were in such a good flow of the fanfic.. ur phone rangg...
areyy cut all the phone lines.. 😆 😉
sorry sorry .. I apologise... let me goo and call anyone and get the gruntings.. before ull hit me up...

mei gayii.. ringgggggggggggggggg hello.. hello..

luv,
savi
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Posted: 19 years ago
You are so good. Loved it, can't wait for you to continue.
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Posted: 19 years ago
So sweet 😛 - looking forward to the next part!
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 i found a little funny.. part 15!! when u said oh god his actions!! i laughed!! hehe.. keep it up!! ur fic brightens up my day!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
So cute & sweet. 😳 😳 Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
great as always. i was jus thinking, its hard enuf to make one story interesting but u have 2 of em going and too of the same characters but u do such a good job of differentiating them that they dont seem connected at all. thats sooo wicked!!! you rock 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
PART 17:

Bani came out of the bathroom having showered and changed....

"Mr Walia...phone?"

"Rano ka tha....maine oose kaha ke hum aarahe hai...bas mujhe tayaar ho lene do aur phir hum chalte hai..."

She nodded at him....watching him get up from the bed and walk towards the bathroom....

He came near her....and grabbed her elbow pulling her into his arms....

"Mr Walia!....woh aap...aap bathroom...?"

She exclaimed...going breathless as his face drew level with hers....

"Haan lekin abhi tak tunhe muje good morning kiss nahin diya..."

Then he touched her lips with his....then the side of her lips...then the jaw...then the neck...then...

Bani had closed her eyes.....enjoying the sensations he was drawing in her......

Jai abruptly pulled away....he had to shackle his inner desires...they had no time....inside all would be worried...then the phones would start...how would he explain that they had been in the outhouse?....And for this long....no he had to break away....he needed a cold shower!...

Bani's eyes fluttered open...confusion shone through them....why had Jai first aroused her and then broke away so suddenly....was something wrong?....she looked at him causing him to look away...

"Mujhe aise mut dekho Bani....i will lose the little amount of self-control i have left and take you again.....and as much as i want that....we have to go...they will all be waiting..."

She understood then.....she wanted to say something but couldn't....so she just nodded her head in acknowledgement....

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It was about half an hour later that Jai and Bani made their entrance into the Walia house....

Rano had been waiting on the stairs for their arrival....her face lit up when she saw her sister enter....she quickly wiped the tears she had allowed to flow and ran to Bani...

"Di......" she hugged her tight..."Di..aap kaise....aap kaise mujhe....yaha...akayle....aur aap....mujhe maaf kar do di...."

"Nahin Rano, aise mut kaho....maafi toh mujhe...."

"Nahin Di....aap sahi thi....mujhe apko pehle hi....ab mein aap ki sab baathen maan ne ke liye tayar hoon....mein sahil ko....sahil ko....bhool..." she was crying..

"Nahin Rano...." it was Jai....both the sisters turned to look at him....

"NAhin Rano...tumhe aise karne ki koi zaroorat nahin....tum aur Sahil dono ek duje se pyaar....aur yeh gunaah nahin hai....ab humhe yeh sochna hai ke age kya kar sagte...."
Piscean thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great part tbabhra! Can't wait for the next! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏
that was so sweet 😛
plz continue soon

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