Shayad Yahi To Pyar Hai-Final Chptr pg151 - Page 87

FINALLY caught up.. awwwwwwww wat a prayer jai made.. had me 😭 that was so touchng.. went straight to the heart - my god so many emotions. i hope bani and d baby's ok.. and they live happy smiling d way jai said.. don't injure jai once bani and d baby r fine - just cuz he said.. i don't care if i die i jsut wanna see my baby and my wife happy wit me - that tends to happen a lot in bolllywood.. that was gr888.. can't wait fo d nxt part 👏

OMG!!!!awesome parts.......i had to catch up...i used to read ur ff earlier but got busy n didn't get time....its just gr88... 👏

👏 👏 awsome part
that prayer was so touching it made me cry
truly only a great writer has the ability to do that
please do continue soon
thanx 😳

woooow buddy.... its was toooo good..... 👏

the prayer was really touching & emotional 😭... poor Jai... i hope Bani & their baby is alrite... 😊

I can almost imagine Jai saying those lines...... its really good...... 😊

plzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon...... 😃

Woooow wonderful paert Cordeila 👏
it was soo emotional...had me 😭 😭 😭
plz plz plz don't let anything happen to bani, jai or jai jr.! plzzzzzzzzzz 😔 😭
do continue sonn!

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hun that was mindblowing
😭 😭 im sitting here crying with my tissues
all i can say is the whole scene was simply awesome
i just loved it
and i dont have any words to tell u how touching and beautiful the last part was
take care hun
and pls cont soon

Originally posted by: Cordelia

thank you guys! 🤗

sabsj - why do yo uthink i chose this angle then? PM me i'm intrigued... 😉

i see you notice my line-stealing from the show 😆 - they just fit so well and i was watching it while i wrote this so i had to put it in!!

aap sab ke comments hi mere oscars hai (ok, now how filmi do i sound?!! 😆) seriously, thanks for all the compliments!!

cheleji (s), hope you are around this weekend is all i will say... 😉

Cordeilajee i am really hurt..aapney toh quote kiya meraaur sabsj jee ka ..dono ka response laikin reply kiya sirf sabsj jee ko...it is unfair..main aapko aur aapkey Ff koitna chahti hoo aur aap hai ki humaara zikr tak nahi karti..jaaiye main aap se kutty!!!....aapney humaara dil tod diya😭😭..aur haa ek aur baat..mera dil toda toh toda aapney hum sab ko tadpaaye rakha hai apney next part ke liye...plzzz cont soon warna hum sab aapsey kutty ho jaayengey..!!

Originally posted by: sughra2

Cordeilajee i am really hurt..aapney toh quote kiya meraaur sabsj jee ka ..dono ka response laikin reply kiya sirf sabsj jee ko...it is unfair..main aapko aur aapkey Ff koitna chahti hoo aur aap hai ki humaara zikr tak nahi karti..jaaiye main aap se kutty!!!....aapney humaara dil tod diya😭😭..aur haa ek aur baat..mera dil toda toh toda aapney hum sab ko tadpaaye rakha hai apney next part ke liye...plzzz cont soon warna hum sab aapsey kutty ho jaayengey..!!

Jaane Jahan Rootha Na Karo... Koi Jee Na Sakey Aisa Na Karo...

Do Hi Pal Mein Bhoole Mera Pyar... Tum Kya Jaano Kya Hai Intezaar...
... Nadaan Ho Abhi Samjha To Karo

Ab Do Hum Ko Chaahe Jo Sazaa... Ho Gayi Ab To Hum Se Yeh Khata...
... Jaane Do Sanam Jhagda Na Karo


Aisa Na Karo Aisa Na Karo...!! 😭

WOW! too good plz continue 👏 👏

wooww..wonderfull partt sweetti..!!
do continuee soon.//.......!! tht was brilaintt..!!! 👏