Shayad Yahi To Pyar Hai-Final Chptr pg151 - Page 85

😭 😭 😭 kya hua???????? very nice one and yes i didt get my leads peice of mind but never mind he is sweet so he excused me and cordelia this part just made my heart heavy 😭 😭 hope every thing goes fine and Jai gets his wish ok update as soon as u get time and happy weekend

Im crying right now... 😭
I hope nothing happened to bani and the child..

kya guruji, ab hum dono rone dhone ke mood mein hain .......... kitna rulaya mujhe aapne, mera weekend toh gaya kaam se 😭

simply simply simply superb sweety, i can't speak on behalf of others, but i absolutely love u putting this angle in and i think i know why also 😉 .... very well emoted and quoted, and the effects, dialogues everything .......... very good ....... tussi toh oscars ke liye nominate hone wale ho, mujhe bhoolna nahin .......... salaam to u guruji, tusi great ho and i am proud to be ur chela 😆

have a lovely weekend and continue soon 👍🏼

Wow...it was very touching...awsome monologue... 👏
par ye kya....end mai diya bujh gaya... 😭 😭 😭
Hope u update soon
Poo

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Originally posted by: sabsj

kya guruji, ab hum dono rone dhone ke mood mein hain .......... kitna rulaya mujhe aapne, mera weekend toh gaya kaam se 😭

simply simply simply superb sweety, i can't speak on behalf of others, but i absolutely love u putting this angle in and i think i know why also 😉 .... very well emoted and quoted, and the effects, dialogues everything .......... very good ....... tussi toh oscars ke liye nominate hone wale ho, mujhe bhoolna nahin .......... salaam to u guruji, tusi great ho and i am proud to be ur chela 😆

have a lovely weekend and continue soon 👍🏼

i agree wid Sabsj jeee.....it was a gr8,sweet,v.cute,nice,exellent..(arey shabd hi nahi mil rahey..kya karu)...and u made me to cry alot cordeila jee😭😭...very well emoted and quoted, and the effects, dialogues everything (sorry this sentence is copied from sabsj jee..but i too wanted to say it so sorry sabsj jee..!!aur rahi baat oscars mein select honey ki...i am sure u will be selected cords jee...aur sabsj jee welcome back🤗..tussi itne dino they kahaa??...

here goes my applause:

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that was absolutly awesome 👏 👏 👏
i love the way you wrote this part from jais POV.
You could really feel jai's pain.
i hope the diya going out is not symbolic and both the baby and bani are Ok!
Plz continue soon

Luv Taz

Originally posted by: sughra2

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i agree wid Sabsj jeee.....it was a gr8,sweet,v.cute,nice,exellent..(arey shabd hi nahi mil rahey..kya karu)...and u made me to cry alot cordeila jee😭😭...very well emoted and quoted, and the effects, dialogues everything (sorry this sentence is copied from sabsj jee..but i too wanted to say it so sorry sabsj jee..!!aur rahi baat oscars mein select honey ki...i am sure u will be selected cords jee...aur sabsj jee welcome back🤗..tussi itne dino they kahaa??...

here goes my applause:

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thank you guys! 🤗

sabsj - why do yo uthink i chose this angle then? PM me i'm intrigued... 😉

i see you notice my line-stealing from the show 😆 - they just fit so well and i was watching it while i wrote this so i had to put it in!!

aap sab ke comments hi mere oscars hai (ok, now how filmi do i sound?!! 😆) seriously, thanks for all the compliments!!

cheleji (s), hope you are around this weekend is all i will say... 😉

oohhh please don't stop now - you have to post the next instalment soon. Pleeaaasseee!!!

Originally posted by: black current

😭 😭 😭 kya hua???????? very nice one and yes i didt get my leads peice of mind but never mind he is sweet so he excused me and cordelia this part just made my heart heavy 😭 😭 hope every thing goes fine and Jai gets his wish ok update as soon as u get time and happy weekend

Originally posted by: Crispy

Im crying right now... 😭
I hope nothing happened to bani and the child..

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Wow...it was very touching...awsome monologue... 👏
par ye kya....end mai diya bujh gaya... 😭 😭 😭
Hope u update soon
Poo

really did not mean to make you guys cry, i'm so sorry!! 🤗

OMG...very touching Cords. It came from the heart, and it made its way straight to the heart too!! Can't express my feelings on how much I liked it.....ABOLUTELY AWESOME, MAGNIFICENT, FABULOUS!!!! 👏

Can't wait to read another work of your FINE WRITING! 👏 👏

Cheers,

Anjali