Shayad Yahi To Pyar Hai-Final Chptr pg151 - Page 86

Originally posted by: Tazmanian_Devil

that was absolutly awesome 👏 👏 👏
i love the way you wrote this part from jais POV.
You could really feel jai's pain.
i hope the diya going out is not symbolic and both the baby and bani are Ok!
Plz continue soon

Luv Taz

i'm glad you think it worked, was a little hesitant at changing style like that, but i really wanted to show the turmoil in Jai's mind at this time... but you know... the FF has been proven true in parts in the real show before... i have a feeling ekta mai is going the same way again! 😭

Originally posted by: amisra

OMG...very touching Cords. It came from the heart, and it made its way straight to the heart too!! Can't express my feelings on how much I liked it.....ABOLUTELY AWESOME, MAGNIFICENT, FABULOUS!!!! 👏

Can't wait to read another work of your FINE WRITING! 👏 👏

Cheers,

Anjali

thanks, i just felt really sad for Jai after the ganesh chaturthi episode - he feels his trust has been broken AGAIN, and in the worst way - wanted to write something from his POV... 😭

Di..

u made me cry.. 😭 which obviously shows that ur
part was very beautiful..

i loved the monlogue of jai, i hope the extinguishing of the diya doesnt hold
any bad significance!

di.. looking forward to the next part!

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Cord - too good re, almost reached over for the box of dusty kleenex (hardly ever used) that resides on top of my computer hutch. Very very well put JW's feelings.
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that was really touching.too good.plz cont soon.i cant wait. 😊

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
sooooooooooooooooooooo saaaaaaaaadddddddd 😭
please continue soon!!! 😃

will try and update later tonight... finding a big block of time to write is a little difficult at the moment - which is odd as all i seem to do at the moment is think about poor Jai and all the pain in his intensely sexy eyes!! 😭 😳

Originally posted by: Cordelia

will try and update later tonight... finding a big block of time to write is a little difficult at the moment - which is odd as all i seem to do at the moment is think about poor Jai and all the pain in his intensely sexy eyes!! 😭 😳

I understand Cords....my situation is some what similar too! I haven't been able to recover since the episode of Ganesh Chaturthi. Bani crossed all her limits after that one!😡 Whatever Jai said to her after that day...I don't regret it! She deserved all that....and maybe more!

Will be waiting for the next part....but take your time. Unlike Ekta, make this one a special one!😉

Cheers,

Anjali

Haila jaan.........that was awesome!........Jai's monologue was really touching!😭

But tell me hun........have you been dining with Mayi?!............it sounds like some of the stuff she would come up with😉..........Gosh.........I could already imagine our munna at the mandir!

But you left us in suspense once again.........and the diya going out!😲

Waiting for the next part hun - though not very patiently!😆

Originally posted by: nibbles

Haila jaan.........that was awesome!........Jai's monologue was really touching!😭

But tell me hun........have you been dining with Mayi?!............it sounds like some of the stuff she would come up with😉..........Gosh.........I could already imagine our munna at the mandir!

But you left us in suspense once again.........and the diya going out!😲

Waiting for the next part hun - though not very patiently!😆

you're right hun, i watch waaaaay to many serials and ekta mayi has had her effect on me!! 😆 but i should hope i have treated our favourite couple much better than she is doing at the moment right?! 😕