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Posted: 19 years ago



PART V
Pi, like u suggested this will be in..... parts 😆



Bani slams the door shut and walks out in a daze. She cant believe what Mr Aggarwal has just said to her. It just cannot be true. Her face is ashen. She slowly walks back to her desk and sets her lap top. Mr A had just revealed that the Rs. 25 lakhs personal loan he had granted her a month ago was actually funded by JW.!!!!!! Bani was not prepared for this. Another shock was to follow, Mr A had finaly convinced JW not to lease part of Darjeeling but to go out and buy it all (read part 2). Mr JW had agreed! Now Mr A and his comapny and his employees INCLUDING HIS WIFE were all part of the Walia Group. Mr A had also informed her that JW wanted the loan to be paid off in a month

Bani did not know what to do. She had taken that loan for Pushkar. He was setting up his first business, a florist in Mumbai's famous biz district..... Pia had pleaded Bani for support despite knowing she doesnt live with Mr JW anymore, with great difficulty Bani had approached Mr A and requested a loan. She knew commercial banks wud not lend her such a high amount considering her non-existent credit history

Now Bani was pushed to a corner.............. And Oh! Mr A told her as a favor Mr JW had informed his assistant that he wanted a "personal meeting with Ms.Bani Dixit" later that day so that Bani can plead her case and may be buy more time.

The thought of meeting Mr W made her sick with fear. Bani's mind was working overtime, doing a quick assessment of her financial situation and where she cud come up with that kind of money. SHE DID NOT WANT TO GO MEET HER HUSBAND. the animosity had increased in the last month or so. She knew what JW was capable of, . But she had not expected things to come to this this quickly. She was aware that her husband desired her physically and he had made it apparent many many times. There wud be too many akward moments, too many opportunities to surrender to the guilty feelings that lay so shallowly beneath the veneer of her detachment
She checked her watch it was 2 PM, her meeting with JW was at 4. She had not seen him in over three weeks now after the HUGE showdown with Jigs at a mutual friend's wedding. Bani had vowed never to see the Walias again if she cud. To top it off JW had seen her lunching with Tarun more than once, she was happy Tarun was alive......

The cab pulls outside JW's hotel. Gets off pays teh cabbie, walks in with her head held high. Tells the lobby mgr she has an appointment with Mr JW at 4. He sends her off to his elevator. Bani hits the floor, cruelly she amuses herself by thinking that a cat 5 tornado probably wud spin less than her stomach right now.

Steps off at the 15th floor, Mr JW's assistant Ms. Singh greets her with a pleasant smile.
Bani excuses herself to use the rest room, goes off splashes water on her face, hides it in a towel until eternity, wipes off, starts counting to calm herself, gets herself a drink of water.
Steps out and is greeted by the big brass W facing teh reception desk at the lobby, sends her stomach back into a spin.

Ms Singh smiles as she walks towards JW's office overlooking the Arabian sea. She knocks.
J: Come in
does not lift his head from looking down at the lap top
J: Yes?
B: Uhhmmm.
(that's ALL it takes for hubby to swing his head up and lock eyes)
J: Mrs Baneee Walia!!
Bani childishly wonders for a second why that doesnt sound too bad at all...... Jolted back to the real world trying not to fall on the floor in a nervous heap wishing her face would NOT take on a newer shade of red each time he said her name like that:
B:Aap mujhse milna chahte the?
J disconcertingly was watching her from under his lashes, swivelling in his chair elbows on the hand rest......fingers linked his solid platinum watch gleaming in the Mumbai mid day sun coming off the window.
Bani wonders if that Rolex costs more than her personal loan. I probably did she concludes angrily............

It was his eyes that really disrupted her carefully composed indifference, Oh how she hated those eyes!!

Edited by aditee - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great Aditee...no probs I can wait! 😉 Anything for your ff! 🤗
Nice part btw...I love how you have to add in that little punch at the end of all your parts....again with the rolex...AD toh aaj bahut khush ho jayegi! 😉 😆
You know what I love most about your FF....the sarcasm dripping from all sides! I'm the self-proclaimed queen of sarcasm so for me this is heaven! 😃
"She was aware that her husband desired her physically...." Oh man...I can't even think of counting the possibilities that this could lead to! 😉 😳
Keep 'em coming Aditee....waiting quite impatiently!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Where is everybody. I took off to go call my family friends.......

Looks like a great episode today. FINALLY. Bani places more importance to HER FELLINGS than the raaz
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Posted: 19 years ago
I know eh Aditee! I guess Kekta mai ko hum par taras aagaya! Chalo we'll take whatever we get esp if it means watching RK in a younger version 😉 Can't wait to see that white shirt on him! And what an apt ending to the raaz! I'm finally proud of Bani! She's working her female instincts finally! And what a beautiful thought....communication without words! Jai already declared how much he loves her by pushing her off the bomb and saying that he won't let her die! Now it was Bani's turn....and what a majestic confession! No words needed! Absolutely love the creatives for thinking up this one! I guess they do some things right at least! 😛
Edited by Piscean - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Where's the rest of my gang 😭 Itne crucial time pe mujhe akeli chhod kar kahan chale gaye sab! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
I'm here! Sorry... catching up on work emails. Get back to you in a short bit!

Soap!

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Piscean

😆 Welcome back AD....I knew you'd be able to do it! So do pass on those scenes. Aditee is on her writing mission this morning so she should have part 5 up soon! I'm glad that you were able to keep up the RK mania even on the flight! 😉 That's like a true RK gopi! 😃



Ok yaar here they are...but bfr I write them I must warn u these are not written anywhere close in terms of creativity as other FF's are here...actually these aren't even really FF's...more so situations that could be turned into very dreamy FF's...

-Bani's birthday---JW being of the male gender has forgotten amdist other stuff---Bani decides it is best to let it pass and doesn't bring it up but regardless he comes to know when her sisters call to wish her---pati dev therefore takes Mrs. Walia out shopping...Bani and JW are out shopping---Bani falls in love w/a sari but JW doesn't like it so of course Bani decides not to get it---afterall if her hubby won't be drooling over her wearing it wat's the point...post-shopping on JW's suggestion they're heading for a birthday dinner...JW drops Bani off at the front telling her he'll park and join her (yes there's a reason he didn't valet)...Bani walks in to a dim-lighted front entrance...being the Bani Holmes she is...instead of going out she walks through several doors attempting to figure out wat is going on...suddenly all the lights went off w/Bani standing in total darkness...frantically trying to get out Bani walks past a set of doors startled by a loud crowd (yes which includes a disgusted Jigs and Roshni) wishing her a very happy birthday...with JW standing in the center of the grand hall holding a package in his hands...handing her the package he pulled close to her and whispered something in her ear...something more then a mere 'happy birthday' for sure...taking her by arm he pulls her away to a private room where she finds in the package that sari she loved along w/matching jewellery...as JW waited...Bani came out looking absolutely gorgeous in the sari...he sat her down and helped her put on the necklace...earrings...and bangles...ehh cheezy yes...very movie-like yes...but come on JW and Bani would give it their own touch...

Gotta head out...will type up second one from the computer lab...
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Posted: 19 years ago
pI,
Here is 5B
THANKS A TON FOR THE IDEA SOAP
I AM LOVING WRITING THIS ONE
ITS MY ALL TIME FAVE
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J continues to drum his fingers on his left fist..........
B: Mr W main aapka yahan rythm sun ne nahi aayi
J amused as always.............
J: wont u sit Bani
B gives hima dirty look in exchange and proceeds to take one of the two chairs opp Mr.W's huge polished cherry desk
B bends down and fiddles with her pallu and purse refusing to meet his eyes, hears a chair creak and when she lifts her head up Mr W is in front of her, leaning against teh desk, arms folded at his chest. B stonily stares at his hands, notcing that darned watch again and the fine smattering of hair beneath it following it all the way into his white shirt sleeve and realizes slow color rising to her face................

J: Bani, coffee?
B: Nahi (still looking at his wrist)
J: Anything cold, you look hot!
Thats it! He got what he wanted, her eyes fly to his at that remark. Fidn them laughing..........
J: I meant tumhe garmi lag rahi hogi na?
B: Main yahan coffee ya kuch bhi peene nahi aayi. Why did you want to see me?
J ignores her leans backwards, picks up the intercom and asks Ms Singh to bring Bani some chilled lemonade.
B: main kuch nahi peeoongi. Mujhe office mein kaam hai, aapne mujhe kyon bulaya? Aapka loan main ek hafte mein chuka doongi. Mujhe nahi chahiye aapse kuch bh......... (quickly corrects herself) mujhe nahi chahiye aapka paisa..............
J(bluntly) keh chuki tum?
B: Mr A ne mujhe woh loan grant kiya. I had no idea you were planning all this.
Knock on the door
J: Come in
Ms Singh: Mr W lemonade for the lady (winks at her rhyme)
J: Smiles back cheerfully THANKS!
Bani tries to smile but cant

Ms. Singh leaves

J: Bani drink your lemonade! (noticing the tiny beads of sweat above her upper lip)
B picks it up and angrily gulps it down "Fine! Mr W. Here u go"
B: Mujeh aur nahi chahiye" slams the glass back on the table.
J: Careful! Mera table todogi kya? (in jest)
B thinks "I wish!"

J picks up the frosted glass raises a toast and starts drinking
Jaws flex, cheeks plump up as he drinks, B drawn to it......... thinks he seems to take an inordinate length of time about it, although it may have just been a few seconds in real. JW releases the glass from his lips, runs his tongue over his upper lip grabbing the residual sweetness of the chilled drink....................Bani cannot help remember how those lips felt on hers.......... atingle shoots through her body and her lips part in anticipation and just that moment her eyes rise only to be arrested by his in that knowing look and Bani wants the earth to swallow her

THIS IS NOT GOING WELL She thinks looking away. Owing him money was hard enough without having to want to kiss him..................

J: Lets get back to biz. Shall we? (JW gets up walks over sits in his chair swivells................)
B: Thats why I am here (she bites the words out)
J: When you have the check ready, take it to accounting and get your receipt (bluntly)
B suddenly realizing that she may NEVER have that money
B: Mr W woh mujhe ek mahine se zyaada waqt chahiye................ please
J: Kya kaha last mein? I missed ...........sorry (sounding quasi-sincere)
B:PLEASE!
J: Oh! I thot tumwoh paise arrange kar chuki ho?
B: Woh Pushkar ko biz start karne ke liye diya
J looks at her broodingly, later with envy thinks "How can she give herself totally to ANY cause like this? How can she be sooo goddamn caring about every Tom Dick and harry in the world and NOT him?. Does she even have any clue what she is doing to HIM?"
J: (raises his hand) I dont want to know, tumne unka kya kiya. I just need my money
J: If thats it............. thanks for coming Bani..........
B confused, not sure if its actually over...............
B: Mr W agar main arrange anhi kar paayi to................. mujhe.................aapse

The gleam comes back into JW's eyes, like a seasoned hunter angling its prey, gets back up from his chair walks back to hers..........
Leans over the arm rest, she shrinks back..........
Reaches behind her pulls her claw clip from her hair attaches it back to her purse handle like he had noticed on some women's purses:-)
J: I dont like your hair tied back like that (husky warning)
Watches B's silky locks frame around her face
B blushing wildly, nervously "Agar main woh loan return nahi kar paayi"
J: Now you talk!!
Pulls himself back, drags the other guest chair by her and sits down!!
Edited by aditee - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Pi, AD, Soap, welcome to my gaon any time...........
Yaar Kekta is paying all this xtra attn to Praachi its scaring me, yaar what if she makes Bani this kaali maata matriarch and turns RK into a wimp, already usko khooni to bana hi chuki hai kal, baaki ki kasar bhi poora kar degi with showering Praachi with all the extra attention

Hope RK doesnt turn into a wimp, fisrt he was just sexy now he is a murderer AND I LOOOOVE SEXY MURDERERS.
Kekta kabhi to sun liya kar



Nahi yaar RK won't take it lying down...he's stood up to her bfr...I think he will again...and he also knows that JW is the trademark of this show even though the three sisters are the ones who are supposed to rule it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
AD
Tumne kal ke story Part IV ke baare mein kuch kaha hi nahi? 😭
Aaj Part 5 A and 5B likh diya padh lo

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